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Mel'ric
A companion for my character Helios, who is in my sig.
Name: Mel'ric Race: Dark Elemental Height: 6'4" Weight: He is immaterial, and as such has no real weight Age: 3000 Sex: Male Weapon: His limbs morph into any shape desired Armor: An aura of darkness that protects him from some projectiles and weakens the rest. Appearance: Humanoid comprised of dark matter, has a second appearance of a middle-aged human nobleman. Second appearance: He has dark red, short, well-combed hair with a black eyecolor, and he wears a human suit and a tie, as well as the human guise. Skills/Magic are the same as Helios, but with darkness. (Helios is in my sig) Black Binding - Chains of dense energy bind the foe and sear the skin. Darkness Serpents - From Mel'ric flow two night-black serpents, which, depending on the situation, harass his foe and/or guard Mel'ric from attacks. Drains strength from him. Shift - Can dematerialize, flow to another point, and rematerialize. If, when flowing, he is hit, his body will spread out, causing temporirarily immobilizing. Nightsky Shield - Harnesses the night's dark energy in a protective nexus around Helios. Heartwall - When no dark energy is available, Mel'ric uses his own inner force to create a barrier of force around himself. Shadow Vunerability - allows him to hurt his enemies through their shadows. Strengths: By exerting his will, he can destroy many types of matter through simple contact. Different types of matter require different heights of willpower. Can draw power from darkness, and has an aura that can sap power from unshielded mortals around him. Light attacks do minimal damage. Weaknesses: Ice magic causes him to temporarily transform into an amorphous blob. Non-elemental attacks hurt him greatly as well. Biography: Mel'ric was never liked beyond his people, the lesser elementals of the plane of darkness, but that didn't mean he did not like anyone else. People scorned him for being alive, even though he knew not why. Nor did they, they just hated his guts. He was beaten when things were done wrong by him, and when things were done right, he was ignored. Everyone acted as though he was a fool, and he had done something wrong in the past. He had no family, no caretaker, nothing. Not even a home. All he wanted was to have an elemental friend, someone like himself.. So he lived among the street urchins of the Plane of Darkness for about 2900 years. That's when he left his city, hating it. He would never find a friendly-towards-him elemental. It brought him sorrow. It brought him hatred. It brought him...loneliness. So he moved to the mortal plane, where he lived under the guise of a math teacher. He was strict as his math teacher, but the students liked him. And he started to like the mortal plane. People respected him. Unlike the damned plane of darkness. "Students, there will be no homework tonight because I'm so darn nice!" he would usually say, and the kids would burst out in cheers. They thought he was the best. He liked that feeling. He would stay, and he will defend the mortal plane fiercely. He loved his new home. Mel'ric was walking home from his school when he bumped into a small, raggedy kid. The child gasped and spoke in a whisper, "You're..You're a dark elemental, aren't you?" Mel'ric was surprised, and lied to him, of course. "No, no! of course-" "I know, I'm a light elemental. My name is Helios. What's yours, dark elemental?" ".....Mel'ric is my name." The light elemental, Helios, nodded and ran saying "Glad to know there's more than just me in this town of mortals." Mel'ric watched him go, surprised he wasn't exterminated by the light elemental. He sat down, and thought. "I guess...I guess I'm glad too." he spoke to himself loudly. He found a companion. He found an elemental who didn't beat him into the dust for stuttering. He, of course, was glad as well. Personality: Mel'ric is enigmatic to people who know him, but he is an unspeakably kind person. He would get hit by a human land vehicle to save a little bunny rabbit in the street. He is also very klepto, and would steal anything from bottle caps to porcelaine jars, despite his kindness. When in doubt, he tries his hardest, and when in confidence he likes to toy with his foe. He is adeptly confident most of the time, but when he is getting beaten, he is enraged by his weakness and attacks ferociously. Rushed through the bio, sorry ![]() Last edited by Dark Crimson; 09-24-2005 at 05:28 PM. |

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Re: Mel'ric
Ok, first off, I need you to do quite a few things before this can get approved. I'm going to need to ask you to add to weapons, armor, appearence, second appearence, skills and magic, and weaknesses, because in my opinion those areas are all slightly lacking. Just add some detail to each. And then you should be good to go.
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