New Character -Kalibur

Name: Kalibur (Kal)
Age: 17
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Hair: Long, wavy, neck length, and black
Eyes: Aquatic Blue
Weight: 167 lbs.
Height: 5' 11''

Weapon: Katana
Clothing: Short blood red vest with a white silk shirt and worn deerskin pants. Wears a crooked belt and cuffed boots.

Strengths: Fast moving, Fast damaging hits (enjoys chippign away at his oopnents)
Weakness: Heavy hits, High things (afraid of heights), things he cannot see.
Skills/Magic: Alla Stoccatto - A special lunge that widens the blade edge using the wind.

Personality: Jubiliant when around people, in combat though his personality changes Respects all worthy opponents, hes slightly reckless but a loyal friend. He takes extreme pride in his combat prowess for his age. Highly competitive he never turns down anyone who is willing to fightt him.
Appearance: Kal wears a short blood red vest that stops just above his bellybutton. His silk shirt and his silk shirt is slightly long for him. His deerskin pants are baggy, and his crooked belt barely holds them up. His pants are tucked into his worn cuffed boots. His build is scrawny, which belies is powerful endurance. In battle his eyes cast a joyful glow. His pride in battle comes from his ability to run very fast. He enjoys watchign hsi opponents swing and miss at his afterimage.

History: His story, as all orpaned childs story begins, began with a scream. A shrill womans scream that pierced his ears and brought automatic tears to his eyes. Kal little understood what the scream was about he was only five years old. He opened his eyes and flung out of bed, the smell of burning wood choked his lungs. Several screams once again filled his household. He felt heat, but too little to understand that all the world to him outside was burning, and he, completely oblivious to that fact stood dumbfounded in the middle of his wooden home.
There was a mans voice, an authorative bark to burn everything.
Kals eyes widened, finally understanding that he was about to lose everything he loved in the next few moments. He knew he wouldn't be able to do anything abotu it.
But he had to try anyway.
Another scream was followed by the singing of a sword in the wind, and the crackling of fire announced that everthing was to be engulfed in fire. Kal acted swiftly. He grabbed his fathers sword over the fire pit and withdrew it from its sheath. It was much too heavy for his scrawny arms, but nonetheless he struggled to heave it up and ran out of the wooden house. When he got outside, he stood rooted to the spot in terror. Corpses lay strewn everywhere, men on horses wielded rapiers, slaying them one by one with little to no resistance.
"Hey, you!" a man growled from somewhere to the right.
Kal glanced sideways.
A man was slowly walking towards him with the flimsy weapon Kal recognized as a rapier. "C'mere," the man cooed, outstretching a hand.
Kal lifted his fathers blade in defieance, despite its weight.
The man was taken aback, then he gritted his teeth in anger. He spat "You'll be an easy kill anyway, now die!"
The soldier rushed forward, but right before he reached out to touch Kal with the blade, Kal outstrectched his own weapon. there was a howl of agaony, then all went black...

Kal gave a long cough as he awoke groggily, lifting himself up from the ground. The smell of soot filled his nostrils and made him revulse with more coughing. He opened his eyes to find that all around was burnt to the ground. Skeletons of the wood that were once homes of his neighborhood barely stood on their foundations. His eyes widened realizing that the soldier had charged him. He glanced over. The man was laying on the gorund dead with his fathers bloodstained weapong piercing his abdomen.
Getting up, he walked over the dead soldier, gripping the blades hilt, he withdrew it from the man. He suddenly smelt the smell of burnign corpses. Kal suppressed another cough. All aorund small ashes rose up, only to drift back to earth again dead. Without any intention whatsoever, Kal began to weep. He sat down in the ashes of his home, buried his face in his hands and cried for the longest time. Thats when he came.
The warriors vocie was comforting amidst the silence. Kal couldn't make out what he said, but he looked up. Towering above him was a man of a bulky frame, a long cloak suspended over his shoulders and covered all his body but his face. The cloaked man outstretched an arm in greeting. Kal hesistated, glancing at the strangers hand uncertainly he grasped the big hand with his small one.
The man lifted him up with much more strength then Kal had thought anyone in the world could master. "I'll bring you to town, and we'll decide what to do with you there, come now, the closest village is quite the distance from here. I hope you can walk that far."
Uncertainly Kal lagged behind, leaving all that was known to him in the dust...

Eh, you need to write more.

Strenghts and Weaknesses need a lot of work. Please explain more in depth on his skills as well. Bit more on apperance, don't focus on clothing alone, write more on his build and such. The bio could use some expanding as well.

EDIT:

Weaknesses and strenghts are still lacking. o.o