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Rael, Captain of Bimalon

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Name: Rael

Age: 700 (Still considered and looks like an 18 year old for a Bimalonian)

Race: Bimalonian

Sex: Male

Appearance: Looks mostly like a human, except a few things. His cheeks and the side of his face are covered in feathers, he has great white bird wings that are 12 feet in span. 6 foot 2 tall, and he weighs 240 pounds, skinny, but has muscles (six pack, semi-large arms). Has almost full-body armor.

Weapon: Cell Halberd, a weapon made by the king of Bimalon, forged from cells of all the people the king had killed, which makes able to reform if it is somehow broken, and the more he kills with it, the more cells power it(the blade is very sharp down to the last cell). Even though it is made of cells, it looks, smells, tastes, and feels like metal.

Skills/Abilities

Wingspan Flash: Spreads his wings and flies right through his enemy and cuts them in pieces. This can only cut shadow enemies, and if it isnt a shadow enemy, it burns them bad(like light on a stalfos).

Light Sphere: An orb that explodes with light, burns like Wingspan Flash(only effects shadow and dark enemies).

Blade Wave: When he swings his halberd, he can use magic to carry the slash in a white gust for as long as he wants.

Also has many light and a few lightning spells.

Strengths: Unlimited magic strength(never gets fatigued from magic use), armor that makes him immune to non-enchanted weapons in his armored areas(his face, arms, chest, legs, back, and stomach), Can transform into burning forms, got elite training with a halberd, and is immune to all elemental magic.

Weaknessess: Is not skilled with any weapon but a halberd, is vulnerable to non-elemental magic, gets angered easily, has a vulnerable face, neck, and hands, does not have abnormal physical strength, is only a little faster than the average Bimalonian, very protective of other Bimalonians(so he has a tendency to abandon his job to retreat to help the city), has less a bit less skill with ground figthing, and he cannot harm holy opponents with any move that is not a melee strike.

Personality: Is very serious about his job, is very honorable, and he is a pleasant person to have a conversation with. Cares for nothing more than the well-being of Bimalon and the king. Very smart, and always knows whats going on.

Bio: Was born out of the same spirit that later became Rein, he took the form of a young Bimalonian. Because of his youth, he was able to take a full 16 years of school. After he graduated, he went to knight school and trained to become a knight. 3 years passed, and he graduated with all perfect grades for a halberd(it's the only weapon course he took). 5 more years passed, and he was finally able to join the Bimalonian Army due to the election of a new ruler. The new king liked Rael a lot, so he decided to make him a royal guard. Throught many battles, he became the most famed Bimalonian to ever join in the service of the king.

His skills in battle proved him the best candidate for head of the Bimalonian Army, and he was quickly given his new position of royalty. After all of his training, he was the first Bimalonian to ever achieve that ability to transform into a burning Bimalon god, a form that can only be taken on by a descendant of a god. King Soup(his nickname because he ate nothing but soup) sent him to go check on the prisoner stock one day, so he went, such a wierd time to be sent to check on the prisoners, for that was right when Rein appeared in Bimalon. When Rein tried to escape, Rael easily overpowered him, but due to an interference, Rael was warped halfway across the universe.

After many months of wandering through dimsensions, he made his way back to Bimalon. Once he arrived there, Rael decided to team up with King Michael and Gaosha to try and find Rein. Luckily, right before he left, Rein had been killed, and was back in Bimalon, so Rael set a trap. The trap worked, and Rael murdered Rein. After that, Many more years passed, and Rein was finally proclaimed to be back, so Rael went out to find him, his lair was in the underdark stronghold with the dark elf Varimathras. Rael flew in after a battle with the elves and King Michael had already begun. King Michael was losing his ground against the organized elves, but it was too late for Rein. Rael had to finish him now. Rael flew up to the to floor of the citadel and battled his way to Varimathras. He was able to put down Varimathras with some effort, more than he expected it would take. Rein was in the last room, his body was only there because of the souls he had taken.

Nothing could save him this time. Rael spread his wings, and transormed into burning form. Rein had no chance, and it was only a short struggle before he made Rein dissapear. After the battle, Rael was praised greatly by Soup, whom had caught Rein and massacred him when he appeared from teleporting. After Rein's death, a new evil arose from the shadows, one that not even Rael could stop, but that is another tale, for this is to happen in the future, it has not yet come to pass.

Transformations: In burning form, his whole body is surrounded by a flame, and all of his abilities are strengthened greatly, he also looses the weakness of not having good strength. Golden Flame Burning Form, is the same as the first, but with a golden flame, and further enhancements.

Credit to Moonlight for underdark and Varimathras.
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Old 09-19-2005, 04:03 PM
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Re: Rael, Captain of Bimalon

did someone forget about me
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Old 09-19-2005, 09:49 PM
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Re: Rael, Captain of Bimalon

I think he might be a tad too strong under the new rules.
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Old 09-20-2005, 01:46 PM
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Re: Rael, Captain of Bimalon

ok, i will add a weakness and take a way a strength, and change a few other things.
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Old 09-21-2005, 12:07 AM
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Re: Rael, Captain of Bimalon

Hmm... I think he's okay now. I'd like to see a bit more in his history. That part was rather confusing, but I'm hoping it'll clear up once you start writing about him.
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Old 09-21-2005, 03:01 PM
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Hmm... I think he's okay now. I'd like to see a bit more in his history. That part was rather confusing, but I'm hoping it'll clear up once you start writing about him.
Ok, thanks, im assuming he is accepted, even though you didnt say *Approved* :-P. I can add more history any way.
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