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Old 09-13-2005, 07:40 PM
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Taran and Sophia

Name: Taran
Age: 9
Gender: Male
Race: Hylian
Hair: Brown and usually messy
Eyes: Green
Weight: 76 pounds
Height: 54 inches
Weopon: A short sword
Armor: A small wooden shield, two incase he needs another

Strengths: Can perform wonders with the sword, also can fight in small spaces and has lots of energy, like most children do.
Weaknesses: Can take regular damage from a sword, and gets hurt a lot from any magic

Skills/Magic: None

Appearance: A regular brown tunic that looks like Link's, brown boots, a fingerless glove on his right hand, and mostly has his sword and shield strapped on his back, unless battling. He also has his very best friend, Sophia, that is always following him, no matter what. He has a pouch that carries rupees on his left side, and on his right side, he has a pouch that carries a small wooden recorder that he was given too by his parents, along with his sword and shield, before they died. He plays it most of the time. This recorder and the Sword and Shield are very valuable to him.

Personality: He is kind and childish, he likes to have fun and LOVES adventuring, he also likes to laugh. He also has an endless stomache, but he never shows the slightest bit of being overweight. He is also pretty energetic, like most kids. His sword and shield are also very precious to him. He's also very tough. He doesn't really know if he has feelings for Sophia, though he does.

History: He was born and raised in Kakiriko Village, with kind, loving parents. His best friend, Sophia, lived right next to him. He grew up with tons of other friends, including Sophia, and went out to play with them every day, after his chores were finished. He grew up happily, and loved his parents. Then, one day, on his ninth birthday, Taran got some things from his parents.

"Open them, Taran, come on!" His dad told him, smiling. "All right, all right, I am!" He said, laughing. His mom looked down at him smiling. He opened the first package. He turned around, and held a wooden recorder. He smiled. He then said, "Thank you so much!" He ran over to his parents and hugged them. "You're welcome," said his mom. "Now go open the next one!" His father said, a huge grin on his face. Taran rushed back to the package that was still un-open. He ripped off the paper, and saw a small wooden shield. He picked it up. But there was something else under it.

There, lying in the paper was a short sword in a black sheath. His eyes glimmered with excitement. "Thank you so much!" He cried, running over to his parents and hugging them. "Now let's hear you play that recorder!" His dad said, laughing. Taran grabbed up the recorder and started playing as if he had been playing for years. "A proffesional," said Sophia to Taran's mom. She nodded. "Yes, he is great!" said his father, having a grand and jolly time. They danced to Taran's recorder the whole rest of the day, until it was time to sleep. "Good night, Taran." said his mother. "See you in the morning." said Taran's dad. Taran thanked them and closed his eyes.

The next morning, Taran woke up refreshed and happy, ready to do his chores. He quickly got dressed and ran outside. "Mom?" he said wandering into their room, "Dad?" What Taran saw almost gave him a heart attack. There, in his parents' room, was his mom and dad's corpses. Taran, gathering his sword, shield, and recorder, ran out of his house. Fortunatly, everyone in the town was still asleep. Taran ran out into the field, crying. Sophia was sitting at the entrance to Kakiriko, and saw Taran rushing by, crying. "What's wrong?" She asked him.

Taran fell to the ground and told Sophia. "My parents are dead... murdered." he sobbed. Sophia tryed to calm him down, but he wouldn't. He just kept crying. He finnaly stopped "I'm leaving." He said. "What do you mean?" she asked. "I'm leaving town. That's what." He got up and began walking away. "Wait." She said. He stopped. "I'm going with you." Taran didn't answer. He didn't know what to say. "No... you can't... you'll get hurt." "I don't care! I'm coming with you!" "Fine..." he said, walking forward. "But you'll have to be careful, and stay with me." "Fine." She said, walking forward.

They walked across the field, all the way to Hyrule Market. "Why are we here?" Sophia asked. "Too buy you a weopon." Taran said. "But--" Sophia started. "No buts. Come on now." Taran told her, and walked torwards a stand. "Do you sell weopons here?" He asked. "Yes, we do." The person selling the weopons said. "We have bows, swords, and battle hammers. But what would two children like you want a weopon for?" the shopkeeper asked. "We're travelers." Taran said. "Oh, I see... Well... I guess I could sell one to you." the shopkeeper said. "Which do you want?" Taran asked Sophia."I... guess I will have a bow." the shopkeeper nodded. "It's usually fifty rupees, but I'll give you a deal. How about twenty rupees?" "Fine." said Taran, handing him a red rupee he had in a pouch. Taran handed Sophia the bow, and they left the market.

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Name: Sophia
Age: 9
Gender: Female
Race: Hylian
Hair: Blonde, a little past her shoulders
Eyes: Green
Weight: 69 pounds
Height: 50 inches
Weopon: A bow
Armor: None

Strengths: Very good at dodging, and very good at using the bow. Also, she can move very fast.
Weaknesses: Well, pretty much every attack

Skills/Magic: None

Appearance: A short pink skirt and a white shirt that has an emblem of the Triforce on it, with white tights. For her shoes she has boots like Taran. She also has a blue bandana. She usually carries her bow around in her hand. She keeps her quiver on her waste, unlike most people.

Personality: She has a secret love for Taran, although she is young. She never tells anybody about that love. She is really kind, but doesn't like to eat as much as Taran does.

History: Sophia was born in Kakiriko Village, raised by two loving parents. As she grew, she made friends with her nextdoor neighbor, Taran. They made friends with the other children of the town, but they were best friends. They played together for years, and Sophia developed a love for him. She never told anybody about that love, ever. Then one day, Sophia was invited to Taran's birthday. They had a feast, and then it was time for Taran to open his presents.

"Open them, Taran, come on!" said Taran's dad. "All right, all right, I am!" said Taran, laughing. Taran's mom smiled down at him. He opened the first package. He then turned around and held up a wooden recorder. He smiled, and looked at his parents. "Thank you!" He yelled, and ran over to give his parents a hug. "You're welcome." said Taran's mom. "Now go open the next one!" His father said, a huge grin on his face. Taran rushed back to the package that was still un-open. He ripped off the paper, and saw a small wooden shield. He picked it up. But there was something else under it.

There, lying in the paper was a short sword in a black sheath. His eyes glimmered with excitement. "Thank you so much!" He cried, running over to his parents and hugging them. "Now let's hear you play that recorder!" His dad said, laughing. Taran grabbed up the recorder and started playing as if he had been playing for years. "A proffesional," said Sophia to Taran's mom. She nodded. "Yes, he is great!" said his father, having a grand and jolly time. They danced to Taran's recorder the whole rest of the day, until it was time to sleep. Sophia left, saying by to Taran.

The next morning, Sophia got out of bed, got dressed, and ran outside torwards the entrance to Kakiriko. she sat down and listened to all the sounds of the morning. Suddenly, she heard footsteps behind her. Taran ran a little in front of Sophia. "What's wrong?" asked Sophia.

Taran fell to the ground and told Sophia. "My parents are dead... murdered." he sobbed. Sophia tryed to calm him down, but he wouldn't. He just kept crying. He finnaly stopped "I'm leaving." He said. "What do you mean?" she asked. "I'm leaving town. That's what." He got up and began walking away. "Wait." She said. He stopped. "I'm going with you." Taran didn't answer. He didn't know what to say. "No... you can't... you'll get hurt." "I don't care! I'm coming with you!" "Fine..." he said, walking forward. "But you'll have to be careful, and stay with me." "Fine." She said, walking forward.

They walked across the field, all the way to Hyrule Market. "Why are we here?" Sophia asked. "Too buy you a weopon." Taran said. "But--" Sophia started. "No buts. Come on now." Taran told her, and walked torwards a stand. "Do you sell weopons here?" He asked. "Yes, we do." The person selling the weopons said. "We have bows, swords, and battle hammers. But what would two children like you want a weopon for?" the shopkeeper asked. "We're travelers." Taran said. "Oh, I see... Well... I guess I could sell one to you." the shopkeeper said. "Which do you want?" Taran asked Sophia."I... guess I will have a bow." the shopkeeper nodded. "It's usually fifty rupees, but I'll give you a deal. How about twenty rupees?" "Fine." said Taran, handing him a red rupee he had in a pouch. Taran handed Sophia the bow, and they left the market.

Please, I really, really want these characters approved!
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Old 09-13-2005, 08:02 PM
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Re: Taran

Nice character. I'd just say one thing, he sounds an awful lot like Link.
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Old 09-13-2005, 09:10 PM
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Re: Taran

I agree, it does sound alot like link! plus the bio is quite cheesy...
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Old 09-14-2005, 03:59 PM
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Re: Taran

Hmm... a lot like Link, huh? That's not really what Taran's meant to be like. He's supposed to be like me, although my parents didn't die or anything. Yeah, I'm a kid, so, well... Yeah. Hopefully you get me. Anyway, can someone approve or disaprove these charecters, or tell me how to improve him?
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Old 09-14-2005, 04:44 PM
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Re: Taran

I would change a few things around, like taking away the ocarina and replacing it with another instrumet, or changing his outfit, size and age, you know so he wont side like link.
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Old 09-14-2005, 05:29 PM
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All right, I changed it so he only has one glove on his right hand, and instead of an ocarina, he has a recorder. But I really want him too keep the tunic and boots, cause I really like those.
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Old 09-14-2005, 05:39 PM
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Sounds a bit like the example....anyway ONE GLOVE? WAHAHAHA!! im sorry, but that seems a little...unorthadox! Okay it looks good now...Exept tell a little more about the tunic, what does it look like? Links, one a knight would wear. Lastly the fairy thing would help if you would change that!

Again Im just giving advice, I cant really approve....
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Old 09-14-2005, 07:14 PM
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Okay, I made Sophia Taran's best friend and human. Will someone PLEASE approve them?
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Re: Taran

Is that a copy/paste job for the second bio? Something slightly different probably would be a good idea. And... A recorder? That's an interesting choice.

So, I take it the 2nd character is a tag-along. Hm. That's fine. All approved.
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