Athelin(revised)

This is the edited version.

Name: Athelin
Age:15
Race:Gerudo
Sex:Female
Hair: dark brown
Eyes: right is magenta, left is dark red
Weight: 92 pounds
Height:5ft, 4 in.

Weapon: A long sword, with gold etched down the sides
Armor: None. Gerudo women don't wear armor.

Strengths: She works easier when she's alone, female opponents, she's immune to fire; speed.
Weakness: Harsh words and rejection, non-Gerudo boys with long hair(Athelin+short hair=just doesn't match!); sunsets(ahh!so beutiful!*tear*); when enimies group up on her; Rennesance Festivals(can't...resist...the music!!); Lack of Armor
Skills/Magic:

Personality: independant, caring, passionate
Appearance: Shoulder length, dark brown hair, with red highlights; a Celtic tattoo; long fingers; one eye is magenta, the other is dark red; very skinny; a permanent scar runs across her right eye;

History: Abandoned by her mother as a child, she travels Hyule serching for someone to treat her fairly, and not judge her because she's a Gerudo. While growing up in Gerudo Valley, all the other girls who were training with her would count her out, call her 'orphan' and told her that she fought like a Hylian. On one training day, they pushed her too far. She quickly killed them in her anger, and fled her country to look for love. Sadly, it hadn't come. Athelin was taken in by the kind, Princess Zelda to work in the castle. After a year of being whispered about, she left at the princess' permission to continue her search. When she decided to look in Kakariko Village, she was greeted by shrewd carpenters, and left. She headed back to Gerudo Valley in disguise, and served the Great Gannondorf. But by force. When she re-entered, her fellow Gerudos captured her, and because of her beauty, Gannondorf commanded her to serve him. Soon after, Athelin fled her home. Never to return. Today, she continues her search for a home, and love.

Um...those are probably some of the most random weaknesses I've ever seen. Renaissance festivals??? What's up with that? Anyways, this character borders too much on not being original. Don't base your characters off copyrighted material, okay? Sorry, but this isn't approved.

Okee dokey. Just wanted to try it out.