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Onimura and Tetseari
Name: Onimura and Tetseari
Age: 21/Unknown Race: Human/Eidolon Sex: Male/Male. Hair: Onimura is bald, while Tetseari has a pony tail of hair. Eyes: Onimura's are Silver, while Tetseari's are completely white. Weight: 190lbs./nothing (Spirits don't weigh anything...right?) Height: 6''/6'' Weapon: Their fists are all they need. Armor: They do not don any armor, as he believes armor should not be needed. Strengths: Very agile, possess high physical strength, expert strategists, skilled martial artists, adept in spiritual magic, they love to use the enviroment against their opponent, and they use their fists, powered by their spiritual essence. All who have faced them so far, could not overpower them, nor outsmart them. They are a deadly combination. Weakness: No weapon, and no armor, leaves them very exposed, and no protection against magical spells. They enjoy battle so much, they tend to get caught up, and lose all concentration on anything outside of battle. Skills/Magic: Onimura Dance of the Dragon - Onimura channels all his essence into his palms, this causes his muscles to tense, and his body to emit a light. He then releases that energy in the shape of the dragon, whom Onimura can control at will for a short period of time. Dragon's Fury - Similar to Dance of the Dragon, except that once the dragon is summoned, the Dragon itself let's out a breath of fiery proportions, in a wide area. Dance of the Blades - When gathered enough energy, Onimura concentrates deeply, and then releases that energy, in the form of deadly, razor-sharp blades, which he sends outward in front of him to eviscerate anyone in his path. Although with the right equipment and/or skill, can be blocked. Curse of the dragon - Same as Dance of the Dragon, except when the dragon is summoned, it places a curse upon the oppenent, which makes it difficult for the oppenent to perform and think correctly for a short period of time. Dragon's Armament - This is the only spell that Onimura doesn't have to gather energy to use. When summoned, instead of using the dragon for offensive purposes, the dragon is used as an impenetrable shield. Onimura by him self can only sustain it for a short period of time, while when working with Tetseari, he can sustain it longer. Spirit's Lament - One of Onimura's more fierce attacks. Onimura channels his spiritual essence, then his eyes emit a glow. After gathering the energy, he releases it, which causes spirits to be released and criminate against the oppenent, causing massive devastation. Although this drains Onimura immensly and he has only performed it once, due to a time of peril and near death. With time, Onimura learns new spells, and magical attacks. Tetseari Tetseari doesn't have many more spells than Onimura, due to the fact that he has his already existing ones, and helps him to perform them easier, it Tetseari were not there, the spells would take a great deal out of Onimura. Deadly Amalgamation - This spell is another spell, that is supposedly even stronger than Spirit's Lament. Only achievable in a time of true peril, and/or near death. Onimura and Tetseari, combine both their spiritual essences in an attempt to annihilate any opposing threat. This truly is a sight to see, while also being deadly. An immense amount of gathered energy is sent outward in a supernova-like explosion. This spell also completely drains the user, whom then has to rest for several days. Personality: Onimura is a calm and quiet individual. An expert strategist, he analyzes the situation and looks for the best way to complete it, and in a way, he is a bit selfish when it comes to his own life, he would rather save his own, than someone else's. When conversing, he listens well, but doesn't talk much, and his deep voice can sometimes be intimidating. Although he is quiet, in battle he is agressive and fierce, and rarely gives the opponent time to recover. His ultimate goal, is to find an opponent worthy of his prowess. Only then will that opponent gain respect from Onimura. Tetseari is Onimura's guardian. He is not much different from Onimura - Quiet, and calm, while agressive in battle. From time to time, he gives advice. Also, they neither follow what is considered "The Light Path" or "The Dark Path". They instead choose the situation which best benefits themselves, whether considered "Evil" or "Good". Appearance: Onimura has a serious look on his face, bushy eyebrows, and is bald. Completely shirtless, and wears baggy brown pants, and shoes similar to that of moccasins. He wears a necklace with rather large round beads, and has a large scar across his chest from a previous encounter. He is also fairly muscular, although not too serious like some DBZ character. As for Tetseari, being that he is Onimura's chosen guardian, he is more ghostly like and has an appearance similar to Onimura, except that he has a small ponytail of hair and a more calm look on his face, and he rarely is seen in his physical form. History: Onimura was born in a small village secluded from the rest of the world, which was occupied by monks. There, life was calm and peaceful, and the village was guarded by experienced monks. There, in that very village a child by the name of Onimura was prophecised to be the strongest Monk ever to be born in that village, and that he would bring peace to the outside lands. Onimura was taught the ways of the Monk. He never knew his real parents, but he was brought up by a battle-hardened Monk, who was the one that taught him what he knows today. During this process he was taught discipline, fighting, and of spiritual essence and how you can use it to create spells and magic to his benefit. It was a long and hard process, but he got through it just like any normal student would. On the way to his Master's hut, Onimura took in his enviroment. The tranquil sound of the trees blowing in the wind, soothing his anxiousness for only a brief time, he was always this anxious when going to complete a lesson. When he reached his master's home, he overheard a conversation going on between who seemed to be his master and another monk: ''Yes Onimura will grow to be a powerful fighter indeed,'' a voice said casually, ''He will definitely suit our purposes well in obtaining power beyond imagination, then we will conquer all.'' At this time, Onimura had heard enough, he was furious, I was going to be used as a tool for their own purposes? Something has to be done about thi... Onimura's thoughts were cut off by the villages horn, which signified danger. Not once had the village been attacked, so why now? The monk curiously thought. Then, at that time, strange looking warriors, dressed in dark garbs mounted on horses stormed into the village, killing any monk that stood in their path. Onimura was watching the slaughtering from a safe perspective, he believed that his bretheren were not worth fighting for after what he has recently discovered. Although something seemed erratic in the way they brought about their destruction - They seemed to be searching for something, or maybe someone. The monk then began to ponder on this, although not before being confronted by one of the warriors when turning to escape. Onimura then thought This will be a good time to put that training to the test. The warrior proceeded to charge at the monk without warning, and at this time Onimura began concentrating on channeling his spiritual essence into his palms, his muscles tensed, he then began to glow with a light, then he let out a resounding ''Dance of the Dragon!'' The warrior started a horizontal swing at Onimura with his sword, but before the sword could even get within a few inches, a Dragon like entity in a ghastly appearance, skewered the warrior, who let out a horrifying screech. ''Hmph, what a pushover,'' the monk said disappointed. When passing the body of the once live being, he noticed something strange in it's appearance - the warrior in fact, was not human! He decided it would be best to dwell on this once he gets to safety. For one last time, Onimura took a look at his once peaceful abode, and turned his back...forever. Onimura decided to leave the village to burn, and now he had no real purpose. Not even to extinguish all evil in the lands, nor avenge his people, he was a tool, so he left that lifestyle behind, although keeping with him some of the morals and teachings. The village was in the middle of a rather capacious, lush, and alluring forest. There were patches of alpine trees, and dimunitive gardens. There wasn't much wildlife, but there is a secret to be discovered... ''After all this time, they wanted to use me for an acquisitive reason. Hmph, well they are gone now, so there is nothing left for me here. Although I wonder...what were those bizarre-looking warriors searching for? Maybe they were...'' the monk was cutoff by a strange whispering. Onimura...is guidance what you seek? If so...then follow my voice. The voice insisted. ''How do I know, that you aren't trying to convince me and deceive me into following your voice, only to be led into a trap? What will you gain from helping me?'' Onimura queried. I...was chosen...to aid you, although I was never told why. If you don't believe me...I understand. ''Alright...but I warn you, if you even consider trying to kill me, you will only feel the cold, calcified, impact of my fist,'' the monk threatened. Onimura reluctantly followed the voice of the unknown entity, constantly giving directions. The voice lead him through multidudinous areas of trees and brush, it seemed as though he was being lead through a maze. It seemed as though hours upon hours of walking had passed, when in reality, only about an hour or so had passed. Until finally he had reached the destination. He was confronted with what seemed to be an entrance into an underground area, covered in algae and moss, in the middle of a compacted lake. He was disinclined to enter, but upon request of the mysterious voice, he entered anyways. When he reached the end of the stairs, he noticed the room resembled a shrine of some sort. Small, but big enough to have a battle in... ''Now this is it...in order to have my guidance, and skill...you must go through a rigorous test. A test of strength, and of endurance. You must...battle me!'' The mysterious voice boomed. Onimura was abashed at the sudden change of events. In front of his very eyes, he saw something...something that seemed to be materializing, into a...human? What is this? Where did this man come from? The monk thought, baffled. Before he had time to even get prepared for battle, the strange being charged at Onimura, with great alacrity. Throwing myriad punches, Onimura barely being able to block each one. Hmph, he is only playing with my mind, throwing quick punches that lack in strength, trying to make an opening. The monk thought simultaneously while blocking blows. Fool... Onimura stepped in, and attempted to send a combo of two haymakers, but the being saw what he was doing beforehand, and dodged the attack, summersaulting out of the way, to retaliate with a spell. Onimura was once again perplexed, What is he doing now? He then noticed that his oppenent was gathering energy. He knows spiritual magic? This is not going to be pleasant. ''Dance of the Blades!'' The figure bellowed. Following those words, he send out a barrage of what seemed to be vertiginous swords...heading directly for him! Onimura immediately began counting how many blades were being sent in his path. Five, he counted, then he calculated where he would dodge. His calculations could not lie, he would be able to dodge all but one blade. All within the time it took for the blades to reach him, is when his calculating took place. The blades came within length, then Onimura back-flipped over one, shifted his weight to the left to dodge the second one at his right side, ducked under the third heading to decapitate him, rolled to his right to dodge the fourth, but just as he predicted, he had no time to dodge the last one, as all the previous ones nearly took the breath out of him, because he had to work in such a narrow area. The last blade, scathed his chest, cutting deep enough to leave a scar. Then wasting no time, Onimura quickly gathered energy, and countered with a spell of his own. ''Dragon's fury!'' Onimura howled. The ghastly figure of a dragon appeared from his palms, and let out a blazing breath of fire unto his oppenent. The fiery attack left the being on his knees, smoke raising from his charred body. ''...Ungh...I underestimated you...you are truly worthy of my guidance...though don't let this victory get to your head,'' the being said weakly. ''By the way, my name is...Tetseari, I will be your guardian from now on, I will follow through my ghostly state, I will only go in my physical state when necessary...I am...honored.'' ''That was one hell of a test, hope I didn't burn you too bad, but we're even right? I burned you, you gave me a scar?. Hm, it'll heal anyways. Well it's good to have some company around, oh yeah and my name is Onimura,'' Onimura said. ''So...where to...Onimura?'' Tetseari queried. ''I am not quite sure...let us go...where the wind takes us,'' and with that, the duo set off into the forest...know one knows where they went after that...except...themselves. Hm, I believe this is my favorite character. Hope it's good enough. *Edit* I added a spell to their arsenal, also I included how he obtained the guardian and the scar. I also changed a little of the description for the Dragon's Armament spell. Sorry if it's quite long. -TFS Last edited by The Four Sword; 02-24-2006 at 09:47 PM. 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Re: Onimura and Tetseari
I think it would be best if you go ahead and include the part about how he gets his guardian in the bio. That way, everyone will already know about it. Also, if how he gets his scar is also relevant to your character's past, then you should include that as well. Once you add those things, I think I can approve him.
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Re: Onimura and Tetseari
Sorry, I'd forgotten about this. ^^;; It's approved now. *stamps*
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