Desi

Name: Desi

Age: 15

Race: Human

Sex: Female

Hair: Light Brown (pulled back into a ponytail, shoulder length)

Eyes: Green

Weight: 117 pounds

Height: 5'1 (feet and inches)

Weapon: Long blades attached to an armlet on each arm. She also can fight with her feet, though she is unskilled at punching. She can also employ other parts of her body, usually her head, if she can't think of anything else.

Armor:

Strengths: Speed and feinting, as well as dodging. She's fast, though not the fastest around. She loves to run, and loves the look on her opponents face when she dodges their blows with apparant ease. She also knows how to hurt without her weapons, and unless it isn't allowed, can and will fight dirty by going after some exceedingly tender areas. Kicking is one of her skills.

Weakness: She's small, and not the strongest one around. She is pretty bad in offensive manuevers, though she hopefully will improve. She has little stamina, but she is trying to work on that. Because of her lack of stamina, however, she cannot stay swift for a long battle, but she's unable to plan ahead to making the battle short. In short, she relies on luck a lot, as do many beginers. She cannot punch well whatsoever.

Skills/Magic:

Appearance: She usually wears breeches and a loose fitting shirt, or other clothes that she can move easily and freely in. Her brown hair is almost always tied back with a strip of leather, so that it doesn't distract her during battle. She likes going around barefoot, and her feet are tough-soled from years of doing so. She has dark colored lashes, so much so that one can nearly see each individual eye-lash. She has a unibrow, but it's light in color so it's not too noticable. She has bangs that cover it, too. She's pretty thin, but not too muscled other than in her legs. She has small breasts, and a bit or freckling on her face. Her ears are smaller than usual, as is her nose. She has long limbs.

Personality: She's reckless, but only a bit. She is terrible at tactics, and prefers to rush in and think on her feet. It can help her, since enemies have a hard time predicting her moves, but it often can get her into trouble. She smiles a lot, because she loves the thrill of the fight. She's a bit happy-go-lucky, and forever the optimist.

Biography: She grew up in a large family, as the middle child. While her parents (merchants) paid little to no attention to her, she would often sneak out to a nearby dojo and learn how to fight. When her parents found out, they told her to stop, forbade her to continue, but she ran off.

A bit of a cliche story, if not for the fact that she looted her house and gave the money to the dojo that had trainer her, leaving it on the doorstep. The dojo owner helped to try to find the missing money when the panicked parents begged their neighbors to help them look, but when he found it on his stoop, he didn't tell anybody. He simply laughed.

She went to the battle arena, determined to do what she loved and have fun, as well as get famous for fighting. Yes, she was a moron. No, she didn't realize that at the time, and still hasn't. She is convinced that she came up with the best idea in the world, running away from home.

Well, very good first charater, but I'm afraid I'm going to have to make some suggestions before I can approve her. First of all, add just a tiny bit to her Weapon, strengths and Weaknesses. After that, you only need to add just another sentence or two to the bio.

Alright, I've edited Desi a bit... look the character application over again hen you have time, please

Yeah, looks much better. Sorry it took me so long, but if you ever think I have forgetten to check back, don't be afraid to PM me.

*Approved*

Yes!! *dances* Thank you for approving my char