Nendil Soulwater

Name: Nendil Soulwater

Race: Half-Elf

Sex: Male

Hair: White and wavy

Eyes: Blue

Weight: 75 kg

Height: 180 cm

Weapon: a small double-bladed knife (45 cm)

Armor: plates that cover his arms, sholders and breast. Also, he wears a Concentration Helmet to keep concentrated on spells even if he's hit in fighting.

Strenghts: he's a powerful HydroMage, that stands for a mage who has great power over water. He is quick and nimble and doesn't need breathing.

Weaknesses: he has a great need of water, and if he gets dehydrated he's doomed.

Skills/Magic: As an HydroMage, he has complete control over storms, rivers, snow, ice and all the water forms. He can turn himself into water for a short time and perform some spells that don't concern water, like healing spells.

Appearance: Nendil is tall and slim, wrapped in a sort of blue poncho with the edges shaped like waterdrops. He wears white pants and boots. Also his armor is white, made of diamond-hard magic ice.

Personality: Nendil is kind and good. He likes helping other people, although his principal interest is finding the Library of Ankeran, the greatest collection of magic books, and would do anything to obtain information about it. He's calm and rational, with great intelligence: he has an extraordinary memory and can remember an entire book by reading it just one time.

Biography: Nendil is the illegitimate son of an Elf mage and a White Maiden, worshipper of Toryn. His father was executed for his crime against the gods and the guilty maiden closed in a temple cell for the rest of her days (Nendil was told he was a foundling and her parents were impossible to find) . The baby, who was innocent, was raised in the Temple of Toryn by all the priests. He received a good magical education and soon he become an Elemental Mage. He chose to control water, according to him the strongest of the four elements. His passion for studying magic books provided him an excellent memory and a great thirst of knowledge. He is traveling away from the temple to look for the Lybrary of Ankeran, in order to satisfy his burning desire to become the greatest HydroMage of history.

You need more weaknesses for sure. Also, your bio is a little short winded, so add to that.