Ovirian Kadreen

Ovirian Kadreen

Name: Ovirian Kadreen, also known as Justice.
Age: 38.
Race: Pseudo Humanoid Advanced Stage/ Neon Angel.
Sex: Male.
Hair: A bright white, the ends of every strand completely black.
Eyes: sparkling white, always half-closed.
Weight: 111 pounds.
Height: 6 foot 6 inches.
Skin: tan, tattooed.
Personally Chosen Theme Song: "The Light That Blinds" By Shadows Fall.

Weaponry: Ovirian’s weaponry is every part of him, because he, in himself, has enough power to fight without carrying one around. He can do all kinds of things simply by touch. For example, he place a hand on regular, solid earth, and what he thinks he needs will be formed out of that substance, like a sword, and can wield it without touching it, simply using his awesome will, and can even transform other materials into an unbreakable glass-like material, but he can only do this to only one item per battle.

Armor: A white, strangely ethereal-looking armor that grows from his strange flesh, this is made of a material completely unknown to man or beast. It looks very futuristic, and it even forms a kind of thin helmet, that covers up one of his eyes. This strange material can vanish individually or all at once as Ovirian wills it, easing movement while not engaged in battle. The design of the white armor varies by his opponent, as well as the thickness. Both of the shoulder parts of his armor are always devised in a three-part wing-like manner, and three red metal spikes curving out the back of each shoulder so they are visible from the front. The armor may change upon Ovirian’s mood, and when he transforms, every part of his body below his neck gains a black coating, his clothes vanish, and his armor quickly grows from his body.

Strengths: holy magic, offensive attacks and psychic power.

Weakness: He can overload with power and go out of control, and he doesn’t like for innocents to be hurt. Strong Dark Magic is also a weakness.

Skills/Magic:

Levitate: He can use his powerful magic to lift things with his will.

Flight: Second nature to Ovirian, he flies without wings.

Flaming Word: The original power of Ovirian as a regular pseudo human, he can breathe white fire instead of red, with all the finess of a dragon.

Lasers: his main special attack, Ovirian can send lasers of holy or pure focused magic at his enemy, with varying levels of intensity. The more he fights, the bigger the beams are. They can penetrate nearly anything they hit, and move faster than most people can dodge.

Holy Chaos: A technique that draws from the pure essence of righteousness. After absorbing enough holy power, Ovirian can then send the attack outward, causing a massive explosion, blowing himself to many tiny pieces. The pieces then liquify and merge to take their original form.

Atonement: A power that pierces the soul of the opponent, attacking them from the inside, a blast of energy that results in mind-numbing pain, if they are wicked; Temporarily blinds the opponent on impact.

Revelation: A move that empowers Ovirian to a new level of might, that allows him to fight faster and strike harder, surrounding him in a flickering barrier.

Barrier: This creates a wall of pure energy from Ovirian, and can be made into any shape to protect individual people or objects, and can be created by his mere thought.


Personality: He acts very odd. He finds evil and corruption, and destroys the source. Such is his purpose, and doesn’t talk much at all. He has a rather overly upright outlook on things, and doesn't care about murdering anyone who threatens the helpless. He will not hesitate to be friendly, but doesn't talk about himself or his mission.

Appearance: He is has a rather thin figure, and under the armor, his tan skin up to his neck is heavy tattoed in a white design that looks like some kind of holy markings. When not conjuring his armor, he wears no shirt, and long flowing white pants worn by some samurai, which he took from a tailor's shop, so he wouldn't be walking around in the nude, which is unacceptable. He looks like an average guy, except for his white eyes, but they are half-closed, so most people don’t notice.

History:

Being one of the odd pseudo humanoids, he was a very skilled alchemist, since most of his kind can wield alchemy at will. He married another of his species, Phailya, who was a physician. They had a single child with very unstable powers, and named him Zolf. They hid their alchemic powers from the child to discourage his wild powers up until the day they supposedly died.

Supposedly he died years ago, when he went with his wife to a scientific testing facility, and was exposed to a compound that affected him in a horrible way, causing the facility to blow up like an atom bomb. The place did explode, yes, but neither he nor Phailya perished, at least by their standards. They were removed of physical bodies, but they weren’t dead, because their souls weren’t going to rest for eternity.

Instead, they both appeared at the pearly throne of a blinding prescence, one the two could not lay eyes on, or else they would go mad. The prescence spoke to them, telling the two that one must remain in this realm, until the other can find and eliminate the main sources of wickedness on the planets in this universe, the corrupt warriors and corporations that threatened the good people. Even knowing that this could take hundreds of years, Ovirian still chose to be the one to do it. He wrapped his wife in a heartfelt farewell, and was given a new body, and became the only pseudo sapien to ever advance to Neon Angel form.

He then descended upon the place where he lost his former body, and soared off, to seek out what was commanded. As for his son, he chooses not to reveal himself to him until his wife is free upon the earth. He doesn’t need to worry about Zolf dying of old age, as he was promised by the deity that he would be kept at his current state of age until they all gathered again.

OoC: I heard from a reliable source that soon approving characters will require being weak to a degree, while you gain the choice of an upgrade after each fight, so I took some off for now, and I added more personality.

Ok, first off, looks to me like you deleted something from his weaknesses and forgot to get rid of "his", that or you forgot to finish that sentence. So I won't bother with that, but if you are going to add to it let me know. Same thing goes for his levitation technique, only you'll have to finish that, as I can see it is incomplete.

Another thing I noticed is that Laser and Divine hand are pretty much the same thing. I'll let it be because I'm unable to tell wether or not they are indeed the same, so that'll just be up to you. Whilst I'm still on the subject of skills, I'm going to have to get you to add more description to Elemental conversion, because at ths moment in time, I have no clue what that means. One last thing on skills, Combustion is too powerful. You're saying that just by will he is able to suck someone into oblivion? That won't fly. Do something to add a down side to that or remove it.

Next, I'm going to have you to ask you to add more personality to him. A strong character such as Ovirian need more personality than that or else he basically becomes like a robot fighting machine. Add a little here.

Other than that, you have a well built character here. A little on the powerful side, but I have faith that you will not abuse his power.

Well, I edited him.

Ok, very good. *Approved*