Oblivion

Name:Oblivion

Age:1

Race: Demon

Sex:Male

Hair:I wouldn't call it hair it's really just some black spikes coming from Oblivion's head.

Eyes:Ruby red

Weight:200pounds

Height:7 ft

Weapons:

Strengths:Oblivion uses his claws and long tail as a weapon and he can block most blades with his arm alone because his skin is mostly covered with a hard shell that is pretty strong.Oblivion is also very fast and is a good sneaker.

Weakness:The head is a good place to hit him because its not coverd by the shell.And if you hit him in the leg that will make him stumble so thats a good time hit him because he is not coverd with the shell in the back.His other weakness is magic.will damage Oblivion greatly.But his worst weakness is light and dark.

Personality:Oblivion is mostly a lone wolf with an additude he will usually kill any thing that is in his way including children.He gets angered very esilay and is neaver happy.

Appearance:Oblivion has pitch black skin with spikes that come out of his head and points up then goes straight down.He has Ruby red eyes and a mouth filled with razor sharp teeth.He has a thin shell that as hard steel.Oblivion has a long tail with a sharp curved spike at the end.

Skills/Magic:

Dark whip:Oblivion's hands will turn into whips and he will pick you up and smash you on the ground or throw you.

Rage:Oblivions l will start to glow a golden aura and all it is is making Oblivion power up a bit


Biography:Leon Lance and Max where triplets born in Kakariko village.Since there father was a town gaurd they were forced to train every day and if they ever disobeyed they were beaten.They wernt liked much because the other kids were jeleus because they were being trained to be a town guard so they used to get in fights with the town children.When they were 10 years old there village was attacked by a group of Gerudos.They new that they wearnt strong enough to fight so the hid.But before to long they were found.The Gerudos were going to kill them but the leader of the Gerudos a man with a strange triangle on his hand asked them if they wanted to learn the ways of the Gerudo but Leon Lance and Max told him that why would I want to join you when you just killed my parents!Leon drew his sword and slashed but the man with the triangle just shot a small blast at him and it knocked him out.Lance and Noah were shocked.

They both drew there swords and charged at him but they had the same fate.When they woke up in the Gerudo cell they had amnisea.The man with the triangle told them that he had saved there lives from some hylian guards and then told them that if they wanted revenge then they needed the training only he could offer.Leon trained to be a dark warrior.Lance trained to be an archor and Max trained to be a dark mage.And after 9 years
of training they were ready to go on there ultimate test they had to destroy hyrule town.(There the ones who destroyed hyrule market while link was in his seven year sleep)They destroyed hyrule town and shortly after Ganons tower was built.

The man with the triangle on his hand known to them as Ganondorf gave them a new asignment they had to go cause havoc at other places in hyrule they froze zoras domain they put beasts in kokiri forest and many other things.But one day they were asked to go out of hyrule and go to a place called Snowhead to find what Ganondorf called the ultimate darkness and when they found it they were to report to Ganondorf.The ultimate darkness was a body frozen under the ice.So when they found the ultimate darkness Ganondorf sent some Gerudos to break the ice.After it was thawed out Ganondorf told Leon Lance and Max tocome back to the tower and when they did he took there souls and put it in the ultimate darkness.Ganondorf named it Oblivion.Oblivion was made to destroy Link after his long slumber.

Oblivion immideitley charged at Ganondorf and slashed him across his face.Oblivion jumped out the window of Ganons tower and ran towords hyrule field and attacked anything in his way somtimes he would have flashbacks of his parents and his home in Kakkariko village and once every year he will split back into three.

Your bio is difficult to read. If you could paragraph it, that would be peachy.

Otherwise, no. Too strong by far. The indestructable shell skin is a no-no, and the summoning moves are too strong.

There is no combat-related weakness. 'Joints' don't count because this is a weakness in the armour, not the character. 'Magic', while it could be considered a combat weakness, is a little unfair on characters who don't use magic. Add another weakness.

The inpentrable shell is still there. Didn't I say no-no? Weaken it.

Also, unless they rebuilt it really quick, I don't remember Kakariko villiage ever being destroyed o-o

Ok i made some changes hows this.

That'll do, I suppose. Accepted.