Dan The Half Demon

Name: Dan

Age: 17

Race: Half Human Half Demon

Sex: Male

Hair: Long untamed grey hair

Eyes: Green

Weight: 234

Height: 6'7"

Weapon: A long sword called Frenzy of the Gods

Armor: None

Strengths: He is strong, fast, and can barely feel weak hits. He has elemental strength too.

Weakness: As he may have those strengths he can not withstand any hard hits as well as not being able to withstand high level spells. Dan loses his sanity too often and becomes vurnerable when enraged. While enraged he takes more damage than usual. Everything, even weak hits, can hurt him.

Spells:

Elemental Breakdown- Hits all enemies with every element; this is a frenzy of magic

Skills:

Frenzy of the Gods- Bearing the name of the weapon this skill invokes the full power of the Frenzy of the Gods to slash the enemies in a raging frenzy

Dan's Frenzy- Invokes his own power into the weapon to slash enemies in a raging frenzy

Wild Frenzy- Goes into a raging frenzy scratching and biting all his enemies

Note: While in one of his frenzies he can not use anything else. He uses his sword in Dan's Frenzy and Frenzy of the Gods. He doesn't use his sword in Wild Frenzy or Elemental Breakdown.

Appearance: He is tall and very handsome. He wears a komono of black with nothing else. Dan carries his sword on his back. His eye color changes to red when he is in a frenzy. He has fangs and claws and his skin is dark tan.

Personality: Dan is a fierce person in battle. He rarely speaks to others. He never speaks in a battle. He hates when his intelligence is insulted. If his intelligence is insulted he will use his Wild Frenzy on the insultee. He goes into frenzies quite often and will not stop until the enemy is defeated or he is unconscious.

Biography: Dan was born a human. He had lived most of his life as an outcast to society and always held a cheerful outlook. He has never been cheerful. He just always seemed cheerful. Dan always hated everyone that hurt him emotionally. Which was basically every person. One day he happened upon a mysterious light on the side of a road back to his house. He checked it out and saw that the light was just sitting there on the ground. He went up to the light and the light sucked him in. With him screaming with pain he began to grow fangs and claws. His hair grew out and turned grey. He gained powers beyond his wildest dreams. It came with a downside though. Dan could never be kind to anyone and he usually goes into frenzies. Along with the transformation he obatained a sword called Frenzy of the Gods. With this weapon Dan triumphed over all who made him angry. Needless to say that he was even more rejected because of his hostile nature. He left without a trace and headed towards the Battle Arena. By the time he got there he felt that his frenzified needs would be satisfied.

I get the feeling you were abusing copy and paste with your spells.

'Darkness- Hits ground and air units with darkness

Holy- Hits ground and air units with darkness'

Also, there's too many of those spell things. Cut the whole skill/spell thing down to 4 in total.

About the repeat I just typed it twice without noticing and anways, I made some changes. How is it now?

Add to the weaknesses. 'Not being able to withstand hard hits' isn't really enough.

I added so how about now?

It'll do. Accepted