Ice-Not done

Let's hope for 3 times the charm

Name: Ice

Age: 25 (or so everyone says, no one wants to ask him)

Race: Hylian Monk

Sex: Male

Hair: Sleek black that is naturally spiked

Eyes: Steel gray that you know have seen many horror's in life

Wieght: Very thin: 140 lbs

Height: Pretty short: 5'5"

Weapons: Bo Staff-Fire- Ices bo staff was made from tha wood of the great Deku tree. After obtaining the wood, he hand carved it perfectly for 3 days straight without eating. Once he had carved it he hardened it in the fores of Mt. Doom.

His hands: He was trained in martials arts from a very early age. He is of the highest level that there is.

Armor: A long flowing cloak that will repel most spells and enchantments.

Strengths: ice excells at handeling his bo staff. He is very agile and quick on his feet. He likes to keep dodging enemies until they are tired and then finishing them easily.

Weaknesses: Ice isn't strong at all and can't overpower people.

Skills/Magic: none

Personallity: Ice is very secretive and conservative. He also dosen't like to talk to peopple when he dosen't have to because most of the people he has met are very hestant about him. He is confident in his skills but not arrogant towards challengers. If ever someone intimidated him he would teach them a lesson by beating them and leaving them wounded on the ground.

Appearance: Ice where's a long, black, flowing cloak ( see armor) that reaches to the floor. His spiked hair is about an inch long with some hanging down across his face. His face is weatherbeaten with scars and he has many crows feet around his eyes. He wears black boots that are loose enough for him to manuver easily. His skin is very pale.

History: When Ice was born, his parents left him in the care of the Hyrulian Monks that were living in the area. Growing up he was taught the way of the bo staff and martial arts. Around when he turned 12, an enemy group of monks invaded and annihialated every monk except for Ice, which they left to die. Ice put on the historic cloak and followed the other monks back to there village. He slaughtered them all with his bare hands and bo staff. Having the death of so many on his hands, he went into exile in the mountains. Eventually, around when he turned 17, he came from the mountains in a vengence. He dosn't care about his real parents or anything else. He just wants revenge.

Hope it's good.

It seems good over all, but I'd like you to add more to the personality. Tell perhaps why he doesn't like talking to others. Is he shy, or does he just not open up to others easily? Just, add a few more things and then you have a character.

Edit: OK, I see you fixed it.

*Approved*