Mac Kilion

Well, I wanna learn how to RP better, so I'll try my luck here to improve on stuff. It also wouldn't hurt my writing skills.

Characters Name: Mac Kilion
Age: 16
Race: Human
Hair: Light Brown hair that is moused down
Eyes: Blue
Weight: 155 lbs.
Height: 5' 10" without shoes 5' 11" with them on

Weapon: Two lightweight gilded rapiers given to him by his father
Armor: None

Strengths: He is very agile, making him a great fighter for giants and slower enemies. He can jump, somersault, and roll out of the way. He can also use cure, which cures half the energy of any of his allies he chooses. He can also use most magic attacks.
Weaknesses: He is not too great when using heavyweight weapons, which slow him down. Also, he does not wear any armor, making him susceptible to heavy amounts of damage.

Personality: Mac is a very happy and friendly guy who loves to run, play around with little kids, and most of all, eat. He is known all over his village as the “speeding lighting,” since he is very quick and agile. He can also be a little of a jerk sometimes, but when he is, he apologizes for being one. He is also very deep, and loves to help other people with their problems.
Appearance: He is fairly tall and very toned from constantly running. He has light brown hair that is moused down to the sides, causing his hair to flow in the wind. His eyes are very blue, and can be described as looking into the ocean. His skin is fair/tan; not to light, yet, not too dark. He wears anything that he is given to him, which is usually a T-shirt of some kind and khaki shorts or blue jean shorts. He also wears a sport watch, which is usually to keep track on how long he runs. He wears very high grade running shoes, which help him run a little faster than he can normally run.

History: 16 years ago, Mac was born to parents Sean and Sara Kilion and was named after the late grandfather. Mac is well known all over his village for being the fastest runner in the area. He has entered several running tournaments and has currently been named “unbeatable.” Although having this impressive title, he is not in the least bit snobbish. He is very kind and friendly to everyone and does not brag about his accomplishments. Also apart from running, he is a junior warrior in training, learning how to use weapons and how to defend himself. He loves both of his professions very much, and has learned to incorporate his agility into his fighting style. One day, while he is out for his daily run around the field, he returned to his village only to find... It has been utterly destroyed. Everything in the whole village has either been burned or been destroyed. It was a raid on the village by some fiends. Looking in search of his parents, he learned that they are both dead. Grief and anger inside him, he starts on a quest to destroy the fiends who destroyed his village, and to avenge the death of his parents.

I see no problem with it, but it's not up to me.

If only you had my little power that I possess, bwaha-ha!

Yeah... anyway, approved.