My first charcter.

Here is my charcter.

Name: Red Gimsley
Age: 22
Race: Elf/Human
Sex: Male
Hair: Red
Eye Color: Green
Weight:173
Height: 6' 4

Weaponow, and Katana
Armor: Magical Armor

Strengths: Distance fights and Sword play
Weaknesses: Not very good at fist fighting, at times can be a little slow, and can use 1 spell every hour.
Skills/Magic: Healing Spell, Stregth Incresement Spell, Magical Armor, and Accuracy Icreasement Spell.

Personality: When not in batle can be very nice. Sometimes does things without thinking, in battle he can become very irritable.

Appearance: Lether boots, brown robe like out fit. A kind of legging. No hat, but does wear a black helmet. Hair is normally messy.

History: He was born while mother (elf) trying to get away from thieves. After he was born, his mother was killed. At the age of 5 his Father (Human) was called to war. Was killed. After fending for himself for 5 years, he stumbles across a solder, who teaches him the way of the sword, and gives him his katana. 7 years later, he was hunting, and almost killed a wizard's pet, The wizard and Red become friends, and that is how Red learns his spells. 2 more years go by. Red finds out he is part elf. He builds his own bow, with help from his wizard friend, and from the start has a knack for bow and arrow shooting. He has been doing nothing till now.

That's my charcter, hope you like him.

Perhaps you could think of names for your spells instead of just "Strength Increasement Spell". It was add a little more originality to your character. And also, please allow me to go off on a tangent here for just a sec. I'm just so tired of these bios that all sound the same except for minor differences. The character's parents always seem to die while the character's still very young. Then, the character goes off to get trained by some master in either magic or swordplay or both. Then...the character goes off to seek revenge for his/her parents' deaths. It's just so boring, you know? Try to be more creative, people. *ahem* Well, anyway, sorry about that, Linkfreak9. I didn't mean for that to sound like I was ranting against you. Just see if you can come up with something more original. Be unique; stand out. Other than that, this character's fine with me. I'll go ahead and approve it. *stamps*