Rinji - Not your average teenage girl

Name: Rinji Mitzuna
(bunny doll: v-ball)

Age: 14

Race: Human

Sex: Female

Hair: Long, flat purple hair.

Eyes: Purple

Weight: 39kg/89 lbs

Height: 5feet 3inches

Weapon: None

Armor: Purple school uniform, limits magic damage, has minimal physical defense.

Strengths: Can move objects with the power of her mind. However, she is still unstable and unfamilier with her powers so she's not capable of moving very large objects.

Weakness: Knives, Guns, Sharp objects, explosions.

Skills/Magic: Has the ability to move objects with her mind, the skill is incredible powerful, but due to her young age she is still on a novice level and is not fully capable of handing her powers flawless. Can also consume magic, so magic skills doesn't do too much damage.

Appearance:


Personality: Rinji is not your average girl, she may look sweet and innocent, but inside her hides a monstrously powerful skill that is yet to be awaken. She is a happy 14 year old girl, she loves chocolate buns and her life would be incomplete without them. She is a peaceful girl, and she hates violence, but fights if she has to. She hates insects, especially moths. She always looks for the good in people, and has a strong believe for a good heart in every individual. She carries an old ragged bunny doll named V-ball, he carries powerful ancient magic powers, and lives to protect Rinji against evil and keep her safe. His skills are telepathic communication (between him and rinji), to fly, and send out a magic beam that stuns an enemy and inflicts damage.

Biography: Rinji was born an only child in Fukushima-Ken/Japan, her parents found out about her powers when she was around 8 months old, they feared her powers, seeing that she sometimes moved things across the room whenever she was sad or frightened. Eventually, when she was at the age of 3, her parents had reached the edge of crazy and left her for dead inside a thick scary forest on the country. That is when she was found by the magical V-ball who felt attracted to her powers and felt it was his fate to raise and protect her. Till this day, though, and V-ball refuses to tell her, other then that her parents had drowned when she was very young.

M'kay, I want you to study some other character profiles. A little homework here before we continue. I want you to study five characters. You can look at mine which you can find in here, Drammor's characters: Tierra Nena; Kylie Wild; Aevukepe; and Omentus Anima, and Altamira's characters. I'd prefer if you studied a little of all our characters. Variety is the spice of life and you can learn different things by looking at each of our characters. Once you have studied five of our characters come and tell me how you could improve your character. By asking you to study these I am by no means asking you to copy us or be as detailed. Each person has their own style of profiling. These are just examples to learn from because it seems you could benefit by seeing what has been done to get you started.

The current information I have about my character is old which I used for my manga. And I will not change that.

I can go more detailed, but I will not change anything.

Well, I never said you had to change any of your ideas. I don't really care too much about those as long as it's written well enough and doesn't allow for godmoding. So yes, more details would be a good place to start. Also, about the weaknesses, it's understandable that she's weak to everything a normal person would be. But since that's to be expected, you need to list weaknesses that are more specific to her.