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Phos

Name:Phos (pronounced Fose with a sssss sound not a zzzzz sound)

Age:Twelve

Race:Sheikah

Sex:Male

Hair:Black

Eyes:Gray

Weight:100 lbs

Height: 5'2 feet

Weapon: Cloudburner, this sword has a keen blade of a white color. The guard is formed like a hand with gold inlaid in the fingernails, curling protectively over the wielder's own. Its pommel bears a series of alexandrites.

Armor: He has no armor as it would slow him down, he wears normal clothes with the sheikah emblem on them.

Strengths:Phos is very fast. He can run up to speeds of 30 miles per hour. Though when he does, he easily gets exhausted. So rather he would just run up to 15 miles if he were to go long distance. If he He is also clever and smart when it comes to ideas. Phos can easily tell if people are afraid or not. He can easily control the person and make them go against their own will when they fear Phos.

Weakness:He is easily distracted. Light is his worst weakness. A normal flashlight would annoy us, a normal flashlight would torture Phos. As he is fast and clever, somebody extremely buff like a goron could slaughter Phos. If anyone is happy rather than afraid or lying, Phos won't be able to turn them against their will. Rather, it could (If the other person knew) the other way around. You might think if Phos can easily be tortured by a flashlight, the sun would affect him too. But, Phos just makes himself weaker when out and about in the day, and the sun has no affect on him. Only in a room shielded from the sun or at night does he use is full power.

Skills/Magic:Besides his sword, Phos has two types of curses. All involving shadow.

I. Sacrifice of Visions, a shadow curse. His gray eyes turn a bright red and can stun you, if caught by this curse long enough (about 10 minutes) it can kill you. It is like listening to an extremely loud ringing or being caught in a redead's scream. The only way to escape this is by thinking of happy thoughts.

II. Acid Rain, this curse can dissolve an opponent if used correctly. However, if used more than once in one day, it will kill the user. Even when used once it will tire the user so much that he automatically faints. If you are caught by Acid Rain, the only way to escape this is to send a beam of light in the direction of Phos. If light is unavailable, happiness and good thoughts. (Like the Expecto Patronum Spell In Harry Potter.)

Personality: If you were to talk to Phos, you would automatically find him different from children his age. If his dad were a greek god it would be Hades. He's sort of goth, except happier. He's a hater and a good kid at the same time. He is also just a tiny bit timid. If you were to say anything, and anything at all involving the three goddesses (Farore, Din, and Nayru) he would lecture you on how they're the worst things to ever be.

Biography: Centuries before OoT, he was one of the many sheikah that still lived. He was born and raised in Kakariko before the sheikah left and it became a normal town. at age five his parents were killed in a gerudo invasion. He got adopted by Hylian parents until age seven, where they abandoned him. The Hylian parents abandoned when he first learned he could do the Sacrifice of Vision.

One day Phos was angry at his dad for not letting him go outside like the other children, (Phos's parents didn't want him to go play with the other children as he was "different") so Phos started yelling, and all of a sudden his eyes glowed red, and he did the Sacrifice of Vision on his dad. He wanted to hurt his father for not letting him play with the other children.

"S-stop!" He uttered, Phos kept going. He started coughing up blood, he did this for eight minutes. Nearly dead, Phos's mother walked in the room. Phos got distracted easily and stopped torturing his father. His parents then left him.

At the age of twelve, he was walking in the market. He recently stole some meat so he wanted to get some bread as well. The bakery had just cooked up some bread, he snuck some behind the baker's back. Phos got caught and the baker took him into a private room.

"What's the matter with you, boy?" the baker asked,

"I, I just wanted some bread." Phos replied. Unfortanetly for Phos, this baker was secretly a deity. He expected some young trouble-maker to linger around his famous bread.

The baker surprisingly smiled, and said "You can have the bread. I understand." Obviously Phos could tell there was some kind of trick behind this as he was very intelligent. But he thought, It's a baker, what's the worst he can do? So he took the bread and had lunch.

The bread had a jinx on it, when he ate it he would remain the age of which he was forever. He would never hit puberty and grow up. So, he is stuck at the age of twelve. He lives on to the day past Twilight Princess, as he is immortal as well. At first he found this great! He never had to grow up and lived forever. But eventually, Phos became tormented by this curse. Phos realized this and went straight to the baker a couple years after the curse. He saw the baker, putting bread by the window. He walked inside the kitchen, and right away pushed him against the wall. He took Cloudburner (His blade) to his neck, and threatened to kill him.

"Take this curse away from me, I hate it!" Phos demanded. The baker said nothing, "Did you hear me? I said take it away!" He pressed Cloudburner harder against his neck. The baker was silent for a moment.

"... Ha, ha ha ha!" The baker laughed.

"What's so funny?" Phos asked, "Just take it away and you'll live to see another day!"

"It's just so funny that you get distracted so easily!"

Phos' eyes turned a brilliant red, the baker fell to the ground, coughing up blood after a few moments. The blood, was surprisingly golden.

"What the?" Phos saw,

"Don't you see boy? I live forever like you, the only difference, is that I am a god."

Phos stood for a moment, thinking of what to do next.

"A god or not, just take away the curse. Now."

"Hmm... Alright. I'll do it."

"Do what?"

"Take away the curse, like you asked."

The baker went to his cabinet, and opened a drawer. Inside Phos saw multiple things that confused him. The baker took out a small vial.

"Drink this." The baker said,

"O-okay." Phos reached out to grab the vial. He stopped and hesitated. Phos thought about the decision he was about to make, should I keep my youth? He asked himself. After a moment of decision, Phos thought it through as he was a good thinker. He took the vial, and took a large sip. "Hey, I actually feel good. Infact, I feel older already." He sat contently, and for the first time in his life he was happy. He was truly happy, and only had one thing to say. "Thankyou."

Phos was about to leave, but he turned around and stopped. "Oh, what's your name?"

"My, my name?" He asked, "My name, is Skoteinos."

"Well, goodbye Skot, can I call you that?" Skoteinos nodded. "Goodbye Skot."

"Goodbye, Phos." He said a tad evilly. Phos turned around yet again. He walked up to Skot, and asked him a simple question.

"How do you know my name?" Skoteinos said nothing. After a second of silence, Phos passed out. And fell to the floor. He was paralyzed.

"Well, Phos." Skot said, as Phos lay there, appearing frozen. "I have always wanted to get you, and now that I got you, I want to kill you. Son." And those were the last words he said, before Skoteinos knocked Phos out.

----

Phos awakened within a room, in an inn. He was in an inn, and didn't know how. He thought, and remembered yesterday. He got out of his room, and walked down to the front counter.

"Can I help you?" The woman at the counter asked,

"Yes, in fact, you can. How did I get here?"

"Pardon?" she asked, bewildered.

"Last night, how did I check in?"

"Oh, I see. A man walked in carrying you. He said he was your father, his name began with an S. Let's see was it, Scotty, Skot, Skoteinos! That was it, Skoteinos."

"Thankyou." Phos left, and went toward the bakery. He walked in the kitchen and saw no one there besides a man.

"Hello." Phos said,

"Hello." Said the man, "Do you want a fresh baked bread? Or possibly a pastry today? It's a perfect temperatue to bake in the sun."

"No thank you. Is one by the name of Skoteinos here?"

"What?"

"Skoteinos."

The man walked up to a counter and picked up a book. He flipped the pages, and responded, "I'm sorry, there is no one by the name of Skoteinos. In fact, he never even joined."

Phos stood confused, he walked outside and thought. He realized that he was a god, and he must've tricked them. He must've erased their memory. Wait, did he say that he was his father? Was he, his dad?

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The ironic thing is, that Phos is the greek word for light. And if you read this: light is Phos' main weakness.
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Old 08-26-2009, 06:28 PM
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Re: Phos

Not to be urgent, but would someone please look at this and approve/whatever it?
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Re: Phos

You just posted it today. Wait before you starting begging for views.
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Old 09-09-2009, 10:06 PM
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Re: Phos

Ugh, it's been 14 days!

Please! I beg for someone to look at this!

EDIT: 28 days!
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Old 09-24-2009, 05:29 PM
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Re: Phos

Alright, firstly strengths and weaknesses need a lot of work.

Secondly, if he is immortal and has lived for so long, then the bio is not nearly enough. What motivates him? What does he spend his existence doing? Also you haven't explained anything about the baker giving Phos that curse. Who was he? Why did he curse Phos? You need a lot more details.
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Old 09-26-2009, 01:17 AM
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I'm just happy someone from the BA finally responded. So do you want him weaker? Or more information? I'll just do both.

Strengths:Phos is very fast. He can run up to speeds of 30 miles per hour. Though when he does, he easily gets exhausted. So rather he would just run up to 15 miles if he were to go long distance. If he He is also clever and smart when it comes to ideas. If he were to fight an average zora, he'd probably win. As Shadow > Water.

Weakness:He is easily distracted. Light is his worst weakness. A normal flashlight would annoy us, a normal flashlight would torture Phos. Anything with fire, flames, lava, heat, etc. would harm Phos severely, as Shadow < Fire. He is totally neutral to anything with rocks, earth etc. So Shadow = Earth. Basically, if Phos were to fight a goron or something, it would be even match if they had the same experience. Oh yes, he is also weak to ice. Almost as much as light, so Shadow < Ice.

So that concludes the Strengths and Weaknesses.

Bio: ... But eventually, Phos became tormented by this curse. Phos realized this and went straight to the baker a couple years after the curse. He saw the baker, putting bread by the window. He walked inside the kitchen, and right away pushed him against the wall. He took Cloudburner (His blade) to his neck, and threatened to kill him.

"Take this curse away from me, I hate it!" Phos demanded. The baker said nothing, "Did you hear me? I said take it away!" He pressed Cloudburner harder against his neck. The baker was silent for a moment.

"... Ha, ha ha ha!" The baker laughed.

"What's so funny?" Phos asked, "Just take it away and you'll live to see another day!"

"It's just so funny that you get distracted so easily!"

Phos' eyes turned a brilliant red, the baker fell to the ground, coughing up blood after a few moments. The blood, was surprisingly golden.

"What the?" Phos saw,

"Don't you see boy? I live forever like you, the only difference, is that I am a god."

Phos stood for a moment, thinking of what to do next.

"A god or not, just take away the curse. Now."

"Hmm... Alright. I'll do it."

"Do what?"

"Take away the curse, like you asked."

The baker went to his cabinet, and opened a drawer. Inside Phos saw multiple things that confused him. The baker took out a small vial.

"Drink this." The baker said,

"O-okay." Phos reached out to grab the vial. He stopped and hesitated. Phos thought about the decision he was about to make, should I keep my youth? He asked himself. After a moment of decision, Phos thought it through as he was a good thinker. He took the vial, and took a large sip. "Hey, I actually feel good. Infact, I feel older already." He sat contently, and for the first time in his life he was happy. He was truly happy, and only had one thing to say. "Thankyou."

Phos was about to leave, but he turned around and stopped. "Oh, what's your name?"

"My, my name?" He asked, "My name, is Skoteinos."

"Well, goodbye Skot, can I call you that?" Skoteinos nodded. "Goodbye Skot."

"Goodbye, Phos." He said a tad evilly. Phos turned around yet again. He walked up to Skot, and asked him a simple question.

"How do you know my name?" Skoteinos said nothing. After a second of silence, Phos passed out. And fell to the floor. He was paralyzed.

"Well, Phos." Skot said, as Phos lay there, appearing frozen. "I have always wanted to get you, and now that I got you, I want to kill you. Son." And those were the last words he said, before Skoteinos knocked Phos out.

----

Phos awakened within a room, in an inn. He was in an inn, and didn't know how. He thought, and remembered yesterday. He got out of his room, and walked down to the front counter.

"Can I help you?" The woman at the counter asked,

"Yes, in fact, you can. How did I get here?"

"Pardon?" she asked, bewildered.

"Last night, how did I check in?"

"Oh, I see. A man walked in carrying you. He said he was your father, his name began with an S. Let's see was it, Scotty, Skot, Skoteinos! That was it, Skoteinos."

"Thankyou." Phos left, and went toward the bakery. He walked in the kitchen and saw no one there besides a man.

"Hello." Phos said,

"Hello." Said the man, "Do you want a fresh baked bread? Or possibly a pastry today? It's a perfect temperatue to bake in the sun."

"No thank you. Is one by the name of Skoteinos here?"

"What?"

"Skoteinos."

The man walked up to a counter and picked up a book. He flipped the pages, and responded, "I'm sorry, there is no one by the name of Skoteinos. In fact, he never even joined."

Phos stood confused, he walked outside and thought. He realized that he was a god, and he must've tricked them. He must've erased their memory. Wait, did he say that he was his father? Was he, his dad?
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Old 09-26-2009, 06:19 AM
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Actually... that's not exactly what I meant by adding to strengths and weaknesses. Yes more information, but you see this isn't an RPG where elemental strengths/weaknesses count so much. Him being very weak to light is fine, but I want more about his strengths and weaknesses as a person as well.
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Ahh. I see. Sorry, this is my first character.

Strengths:Phos is very fast. He can run up to speeds of 30 miles per hour. Though when he does, he easily gets exhausted. So rather he would just run up to 15 miles if he were to go long distance. If he He is also clever and smart when it comes to ideas. He can stare people down easily, it's as if he was a walking lie detector. Like lies, the same concept works for fear. He can easily control the person and make them go against their own will when they fear Phos.

Weakness:He is easily distracted. Light is his worst weakness. A normal flashlight would annoy us, a normal flashlight would torture Phos. As he is fast and clever, somebody extremely buff like a goron could slaughter Phos. If anyone is happy rather than afraid or lying, Phos won't be able to turn them against their will. Rather, it could (If the other person knew) the other way around.
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Alrighty... if you could just tone down his skills a bit?

Also, does his weakness to light extend to the sun? Can he walk around in daylight? If so, why? Seems unlikely a flashlight would hurt him but not the sun.
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Old 09-26-2009, 11:24 AM
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Didn't think about that. But I don't want a vampire from twilight walking around either. Vampires are ehh. And Twilight is ehh.

Strengths:Phos is very fast. He can run up to speeds of 30 miles per hour. Though when he does, he easily gets exhausted. So rather he would just run up to 15 miles if he were to go long distance. If he He is also clever and smart when it comes to ideas. Phos can easily tell if people are afraid or not. He can easily control the person and make them go against their own will when they fear Phos.

Weakness:He is easily distracted. Light is his worst weakness. A normal flashlight would annoy us, a normal flashlight would torture Phos. As he is fast and clever, somebody extremely buff like a goron could slaughter Phos. If anyone is happy rather than afraid or lying, Phos won't be able to turn them against their will. Rather, it could (If the other person knew) the other way around. You might think if Phos can easily be tortured by a flashlight, the sun would affect him too. But, Phos just makes himself weaker when out and about in the day, and the sun has no affect on him. Only in a room shielded from the sun or at night does he use is full power.

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One more thing... about the Acid Rain, how does it work exactly? Where does the acid come from? And what if the person doesn't have a source of light available?
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Ayy...

II. Acid Rain, this curse can dissolve an opponent if used correctly. However, if used more than once in one day, it will kill the user. Even when used once it will tire the user so much that he automatically faints. If you are caught by Acid Rain, the only way to escape this is to send a beam of light in the direction of Phos. If light is unavailable, happiness and good thoughts. (Like the Expecto Patronum Spell In Harry Potter.)
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