arseus, lintoff, fothnum

devious name: Arseus, Lintoff, Fothnum

age: 12

race: kokiri

sex: male

Hair: short and black with green at the edge in a bowler cut.

Eye: green and very devious.

weight: 75 pounds

height: 4ft, 7 in

Weapon: A small curved dagger housing the forest mage and a long thorny whip made from rosebush.

Armor: Green armor; similar to the kokiri tunic, but larger and with no sleeves.
Strengths: When near the forest arseus will begin to draw power from it and his power will increase greatly and he will begin to hover and his body will be outlined with a green glow.

Weakness: Will lose power greatly when near fire or magma.

Skills/magic: Knowing many forest related spells he most uses plantae immortales or immortal plant which summons large thorny vines to grab and crush his opponent though it leaves him very drowsy often puts him to sleep.

Appearance: With a crooked smile arseus has a small head and shoulders a little to far apart for his age.

Personality: Often cruel but has a soft spot for forest animals and his fellow kokiri.

Biography: Born in the kokiri forest without any parents as all kokiri are. Twin brother and captor of Saria, and friends with Mido and Fado, he doesn't keep in touch with anyone from the kokiri forest anymore though. Originally he used a sword but it was lost during an adventure that would probably get him disapproved due to being off topic. He first carried weapons for protection but now carries them for offensive purposes. Early in his life the kokiri forest was ravaged and arseus ran away because the hero link failed to return to the kokiri forest. Arseus has no pets or familiars and does not believe in heroes. He left to find ganondorf and acquired such goal after much turmoil. Ganondorf gave him a knife which houses the spirit of the forest mage with which he is protected from the outside world as the kokiri are. He has No fairy so not very chatty.

Points for having height and weight that make sense... it's amazing how often people have 6' tall Kokiri...


This character is Not Approved.


Some thoughts.

• Capitalization! Good god. Use it.
• More detail for everything.
• What's he done that's interesting?
• Why does he cary weapons?
• More detail for everything.
• Leaving the forest is supposedly bad for Kokiri. How's he get around that?
• Got a fairy? Fairy have a name?