Azran Lamratana *REMAKE*

I had to remake this due to it going inactive for a month, so I need to remake this.

Name- Azran Lamratana

Race- Human

Age- 16

Weapon- A large blade that resembles a katana, but a bit bulkier.

Personality- He is very gloomy and never really try's when he fights. He is almost always crying, and if he fights, its for his passes family.

Father- His father had always lived with his mother, until he woke up on his 1st birthday. Azran was intelligent so he knew it was his birthday, he went to his father's room and found NO ONE.

Strengths- He is muscular and can easily knock someone out in one punch. He can detect movement so he can easily doge attacks.

Weaknesses- He is in critical condition, for he lacks several platelets in his blood, so he bleeds a lot. He also will collapse if he is surrounded from fear.

Appearance - Azran always wears a black shirt and blue flares. he wears a cap (like Link's) that is red.

Hair- He has long hair (covers ears) that is Jet Black and had Red highlights.

Eyes- Their color is brown

Magic/Skills- He a spell to stun someone for 5 minutes. It is pointless to try to escape it, for it is very strong, but if you scream "Curse of Fear, I am Here!" It will leave.

Biography- His Mother died of Cardiac Arrest shortly after his birth, view Father for details on him.

Weight- 120 LBS

Height- 5ft 7in

Gender- Male

I hope this can be approved. This character is very serious.

This character is Not Approved.

Please go read the Character Policies and guidelines thread. Specifically, the first post. All of it.

Also notice that there's a sort of format there that we'd like you to follow.

I don't see anything I'm missing.

No? What about paragraphs? Detail? Information that takes more than 5 lines?