Navaura

Name: Navaura

Age: 18

Race: Sheikah

Sex: Female

Hair: Ash-Blonde/Short and choppy

Eyes: Red

Weight: 120 lbs

Height: 5'7''

Weapons: Kunai, metal chains, Deku Nuts for distraction, mystical arts for deception and disguise

Armor: Stiffened leather

Strengths: Martial arts, quick jabs, powerful kicks, constant mobility, inhuman balance, art of stealth

Weakness: Hand-to-hand combat without being able to have a quick getaway

Skills/Magic: Mystical art for disguise and deception, Martial arts, quick jabs, powerful kicks, constant mobility, inhuman balance, art of stealth, light on her feet, trained killer

Appearance: Navaura is toned-built, lightweight, extremely fair-skinned, with pointed ears. Dressed in loose-fitting dark blue pants, leathery dark blue corset-type top with the traditional red eye of truth symbol painted on, underneath is white cloth wrapped securely around her torso/chest and arms, leathery arm-length fingerless gloves, leather knee-high boots (pants tucked in)--all clothing fitted and essential for her constant mobility and fighting. Ash-blonde short/choppy hair sticking out in every direction, war paint under her eyes in red and gray in the form of the eye of truth.

Personality: Navaura is, like all Sheikah, aloof and distant. She doesn't partake in social situations and prefers a quiet meditation to conversing with others. She's very serious about her fighting and mastering her own body. She explores the world alone, unnoticed by everyone, going through uncharted territories, observing everything she can. She's one of the best fighters in her community--and that's saying a whole lot. She sees the truth in people, and seeing behind their facade and pretenses make her even more of a threat. She respects and obeys the harsh and strict government and rules of her people.

Biography: Navaura was born in the Sheikah's hidden village during the shadowy night. Navaura is a trained killer. By the age of thirteen she was able to balance and stand on her hands without faltering no matter what the platform. She's very quick and precise in her attacks. She can hang on the edge of a cliff by the tips of her fingers without falling or losing control. Her mother, Tahliaz, and father, Katzar live peacefully together with the other Sheikah's. She has an older brother, Jaidyn-20, who helps train Navaura. Her best friend, Kurik; a Hylian boy of the same age. She trains night and day, hoping to help protect her people and the land she lives in.

"After Ocarina of Time"? Which after?

This character is Not Approved.

Close, though. Here's a couple of things:

• First off, those one-line sections (Name, age, etc) can go in one line. Makes it easier to go through.
  
• The biography gives me a general idea of her, which is good...but it's kinda disjointed. I can't tell if that middle paragraph (which should really be split up a bit, and maybe given a bit more detail, some dialog, perhaps) takes place before or after what is described in the first. Give some clear signs of what you're going on about. Read through it, try pretending you didn't write it, and know nothing about it. Does it make sense? A good sign that it should be altered.