Aves

Name: Aves

Age: 15

Race: Rito

Sex: Male

Hair: Hair color is white with streaks of black; shaggy

Eyes: Red

Weight: 100 lbs.

Height: 5'6"

Weapon: Shield made from one of Valoo's scales (a larger scale was used to make it; shines with a red gleam); sword was made from another one of Valoo's scales (made from another large Valoo scale; also has a red gleam); small daggers up both his sleeves when he is nervous (just in case)

Armor: Clothing with an enchantment to protect against fire and ice based attacks; messenger bag that can carry more than is physically possible

Strengths: Aves is an extremely skilled flyer, and is quite adept at fire and healing magic. His fire magic allows him to create heat, conjure flames, and shoot fireblasts; his healing magic allows him to heal minor wounds such as cuts, burns, etc. He can even reattach limbs! However, he cannot raise the dead. He also can play his clarinet and create various affects with the music.

Weakness: Ice and water; very light and fragile bones

Skills/Magic: Aves can fly. He is also skilled at fire magic, and is capable of healing most injuries

Appearance: Aves has long, shaggy white hair, with streaks of black in it. He also has red eyes. He is always wearing a long-sleeved t-shirt with the Rito symbol on it, and his favorite pair of shorts. He carries his scale shield and scale sword in his messenger bag, which he always has with him.


Personality: Aves is a kind Rito. He is always willing to help those in trouble, and is very loyal. While he is somewhat naive, he always listens to both sides of an arguement, and never jumps to conclusions. He is also shy and timid, but once he warms up, he is warm to others.

Biography:

Aves was born on Dragon Roost Island. He was raised by his mother, after he and his sister's father left. He was shy, so he only had a few good friends.
One day, he found an injured fairy on the beach on Dragon Roost Island. He took it in, and from then on the fairy who he had named Lee stayed with him from then on. Lee is vivid green with a green glow. His wings are clear. Unlike most Rito, who worship Valoo, Aves didn't put much emphasis of religion in his life. He prefers the more practical ways of science. He is on his journey for many reasons. The original reason is to find out more about Lee's past. However, on this journey, they got attacked and landed on a strange island. Aves and Lee survived, but were badly injured. After being healed, they decided to set off for home. They haven't had much luck getting back home

A Rito...that's not too common 'round here, I think.


This character is Not Approved.


Here are a few suggestions to make it better:

• Describe the shield, and maybe the sword, a bit better. I'm drawing a blank on what such a shield should look like.
  
• Skilled at fire magic, eh? Give that a little more detail. Skilled in what way? What sorts of things can he do? You don't need to list specific spells, just give a general idea as to the extent of his ability.
  
• Biography. I'll just list this.
  • Biographies are in paragraph form. Make it a story, don't just answer the sampler questions.
  • Why does he have a fairy? Those are only for Kokiri, and when there's a specific reason for it.
  • Why's he traveling the world?

Work on those things, and we'll see where we can go from there.