Devan

Name: Devan
Age: 20
Species: Dragon
Sex: Male
Skin: Thick, gives some good protection.
Color: Red
Eyes: Black
Weight: 500 kg
length: 300 cm

WEAPONS/ARMOR:
It has no armor, except for his thick skin. for weapons. sharp claws, and he can spew fire. He also uses his tail, wings, head in battle. He can cause small earthquakes
with his weight and power, and he can survive in lava, and he can understand human language.

APPEARANCE:
Devan is a red dragon, has a long neck, 2 big horns pointing upwards, slightly back. He has a long tail with a few spikes near the tip of it. He also has a big mouth with sharp teeths, 2 claws, 2 big feet and a pair of wings on his back. He has quite the belly, he walk on his feet, has a few spikes at the back side of his neck. His body is covered with red scales which are a good defense. His wings are big and can cover his whole body. They are quite strong and stabbing with a normal weapon has no effect.

PERSONALITY:
He tries to be friendly to people he don't know, but when he is angry, you'll better stay out of his way.
Against an enemy, he tries to kill it the fastest way possible. He can be hardheaded sometimes and he tries to dodge fights if possible.


MAGIC:
Devan can control fire, For example, he can make a fire shield with the fire he spews out his mouth.
He can gets tired easily if this is done too much.

WEAKNESS:
Water. Water can greatly reduce his magic ability. And when he drinks some water, he can't spew fire for an hour. He is also a big target, so projectiles work great on him. If he uses his magic in great proportions it will leave him weakened.
He also can't continuously breath fire for a long time. Around a minute, and two minutes too recharge.
His belly area is, although not that weak, but still weaker then the rest of his body.

BIOGRAPHY:
since he was a child, Devan was always considered a special dragon because of his magic, and learned to spew fire pretty quick. Which is not usual in his race. He grew up in the mountain with the rest of the dragon group. One day, they needed to find another living spot because some humans spotted them up there. However, since Devan's flying skills lacked when he was a child, he got lost from the pack when they where escaping, and made a huge smack on the ground.

He tried to follow his group by foot, but he's slow and injured, and he lost them. He knew he had to escape the humans so he found a safe spot, and collapsed. Next day, a pack of lions found him laying on the ground, and gave him some food. He then stayed there for a while and the lions became his second family. When his flying skills became better, he left the pack and learned to hunt on his own, still trying to find his family. After a few years of hunting and surviving in the wild, he passed by a house of a farmer. Although Still a bit afraid of humans, he tried to find some food and began checking the barn.

Then, he heard something behind him. He tried to be so quiet as possible but the old farmer already heard him. The moment the farmer saw the scared dragon he dashed inside his house, grabbed a shotgun and pointed it at Devan. Tears flooded over Devans eyes. When the old farmer saw how scared the dragon really was, he hid the gun and gave him some food.
the farmer said: "Hey, my name is joe, and I could need some help on this farm" while pointing at the field. "You can sleep in the barn here" and pointed at the barn. Devan, not understanding human language at that time, still knew what he had to do and looked happily at the old farmer. A year passed.

Devan, now understanding human language which the farmer taught him, Thanked the farmer for staying at his barn, but he said he had to continue searching for his family, not knowing they where closer then expected.
When Devan left the Farm, he noticed something on the hilltop close to it. "Meh, probably nothing" he said, and he left off.
While flying, not far away from the barn, he noticed something in the air but couldn't make it out. It was to far away, so he flew towards it.
After closer inspection he noticed it was another dragon.
He happily flew towards it and he noticed It was someone from his old family.
But the closer he got, the faster the other dragon goes.
After a while, when the other dragon was almost out of his sight, he saw that the dragon landed in a cave and devan followed it.

He saw his whole pack at the in front of the cave, and tears of joy flowed out of his eyes. He saw that his brother and sisters all grew bigger. As soon as he landed, He heard his father saying
"We saw you with him"
"what?" Devan said.
"That human. You know they want to kill our species. We are a thread to them" His mother followed.
"Aren't you glad where together now?" "That human was really nice to me, he's not like all the others" Devan said.
"It doesn't matter, your friends with one of them, and we can't accept that. Your not part of the family anymore, you traitor" his father said. And all of the dragons left him there at the cave, without a single glance at him.

Devan stood there, shocked at what his family just said.
"My family... left me just because of their hate for humans?"
Rage filled his body. In his rage, he spew a lot fire everywhere around him,
He didn't care anymore, he just wanted to let his anger out on some way.

This continued for quite some while. Then he spotted something in the corner from his eyes. The barn was on fire, and Joe was still asleep. His immediately stopped his rage and flew himself down there. With his magic, he guided the flames out of the house.
He was fast enough, Joe was still alive. and was in no harm.
He told Devan he wanted to escape, but the fire was everywhere, and he thanked him.
"No, don't thank me" "the fire was my cause, I'm really sorry joe" Devan said.
Joe, looking shocked, said"why? why would you do this?"
Devan explained the whole situation, and Joe understands
Joe out of nowhere said: "say, why don't you just live here? I could use some help rebuilding this whole thing, and you have nowhere to go now right?".
Devan gladly accepted the offer.

Draguna the Dragon? That sounds like some kind of joke.

This character is Not Approved.

Here's a few suggestions to work on it:

• Why does a dragon have a claymore?
  
• A dragon really needs a much more detailed explanation of what it looks like, and possibly a picture.
  
• Oh, and you describe him as a "big dragon," but is only 3 meters long? That's a 'small dragon,' I'd think.
  
• A friendly dragon, eh? That's unusual. Why's he friendly?
  
• That biography is wholly inadequate. I...really can't offer any suggestions, since there is pretty much nothing there to work with. Some interactions, perhaps. Some idea of character...those things would be good.

Work on those things, and then we'll see.


As a footnote to all of this: I would seriously consider not having a dragon character. It makes it much harder to have any reasonable interaction with most, if not all, other characters around the EH. If this were a third or forth character for you, maybe. I won't deny it on that ground alone, if the profile is acceptable, but I strongly discourage it.

Yeah, I didn't really liked his name either, but I couldn't think of something else. Changed it now.

Afterward, the claymore indeed was a bad idea, I just got rid of it.

Anyway, updated it.

If someone could check this out again, that would be nice.