Scarr Eromalc

Name: Scarr(Short for Scarlett) Eromalc


Age: 1017


Race: Demon


Sex: Male


Hair: Dark Silver, semi-long, crazy.


Eyes: Ever-changing


Weight: 103 lb


Height: 5' 7''


Weapon: Tabatha, a Claymore carried on his back, hand-to-hand combat when he is done with Tabatha


Strengths: Speedy, quick to attack, multiple fighting skills


Weakness: Back of his arms and legs. Some think it is moderately hard to get to get there, as he is speedy and can sense some attacks.


Magic: Scarr has different types of magic depending on his fighting style. He usually uses fire based attacks when using magic. But he may also a type of magic called spatial magic. Example: If a type of missile, ball, etc. were to be thrown at him, he could dodge it and throw it back at the user. He uses the kinetic energy in the missile to do this. This move is called orbit. If he is to fall off of a great height, he could use the move reject to stop his fall. There must be great amounts of kinetic energypresent to do these moves and more.


Appearence: Scarr does not wear armor of any sort. He wears a long white jacket with black stripes going down his arms and sides, supposedly representing a Siberian Tiger. He wears a necklace with a pendant of a claymore hanging by its pommel. He wears black denim shorts always with his coat zipped up. During battle, he unzips his coat and takes the coat off when he uses hand-to-hand combat and magic. He wears a red undershirt.


Personality: He is the most random person known to his organization. He acts as a twelve-year-old around the clock. He is the kind of person that would dance around hallways. His personality brings attention to himself, which he just drinks up. During battle he is the same kind of person, dancing to dodge attacks, prancing to run, etc. When a friend/loved one is injured he completely loses his cool, and becomes so enraged as to transform to stage 1 or 2 just to get his hands on the opponents neck. Sometimes, just for fun or if he is having a good battle, he will transform or become totally serious and focused on the battle.


Biography: Scarr wasn't born, he was made. Some deity or god made him to be a giant demon that terrorized the villages Termina and Hyrule and Hollodrum, etc. By coming upon this one region in Termina, now known as Ikana, he aroused the people living there. The head of Ikana, not Igos Du Ikana yet, transformed him into a twelve-year-old. The head of Ikana had a son named Ean Eromalc, who was, technically, 2 years older than him. Scarr trained in the way of sword with Ean, who used a Rapier in one hand and a Katana in the other. Scarr received his Claymore for making at least a tie with Ean.

One day, two strangers came to his door to recruit Ean to their organization. They said it was a secret organization in an underground hideout. Scarr was obviously excited to join, so he joined along with Ean. He worked his way through the ranks, and eventually became a captain of the 5th Force. But Force Five didn't exist, so he had to create it himself. He planted himself on the walls of The Guardians hideout in the Mountains using reject, and began to work.

After a few days of work, he had created his own dorms, a walkway between all of the dorms, and his own office. He now wanders all the worlds, looking for a fighter that could defeat him, his Claymore, his fighting skills, and him as the demon.

1000 years old, and three paragraphs detail his life? Really?

This character is Not Approved.


Here's a few suggestions.

• Armor should be listed, even if it just says "none" or "clothing only." Makes it easier for quick reference.
  
• Is there any reason why he's barely more than 100lbs at that height?
  
• A demon needs vastly more description. What are his features? I'm going to assume human, but you should state that, since "demon" could also bring to mind Tzeench and other such insanities.
  
• That biography...it doesn't make sense. Tell a little story with it. If he's a demon created by a god, he should know what his god is, so that should be said. The rest of the biography doesn't really add up with that idea.

Work on those, and then we'll see how it is then.