Vincent Keats

hey, I need my character approved. This is my very first time with RPG's so tell me if anything needs to be changed. anyways...

Name: Vincent Keats

Age: 224

Race: Human, Ghost

Sex: Male

Hair: Black hair. Very neat, combed back

Eyes: His eye color tends to change depending on what mood he is in.

Weight: 100 pounds

Height: 5 Feet 5 Inches

Weapon: None


Armor: None

Strengths: He doesn’t fight physically. He uses his mind to emotionally and mentally hurt his opponent.

Weakness: He stays out of the light. If he is in a pitch black room, he can not be harmed whatsoever. If there is any light at all, he is venerable. It is more easy to take him down with more light.

Skills/Magic: He is Telekinetic. He can move, and destroy things around him with his mind. He can only use it for so long at a time though. He can use it for about half an hour, then he rests. If he is in battle, he flees, and comes back when he is all charged up again. He can also hover. He also uses his cat, Kringla, in battle. The cat can sense enemies coming closer

Appearance: Vincent is very pale. He has round eyes, sleek black hair, combed back. He is very skinny. He has nice black shoes, and a nice tux. White and Black stripes up and down the tux. His lips and ears are very small. He has very white teeth.

Personality: Vincent wants love. That is why he came back as a ghost. He does not like to start battle, but if anyone challenges him. He will fight as long as he can. If he is defeated, he retreats, back to his old home where he stays. He is very sad, and has no friends. He is very neat, and has perfect grammar, and manners. He dislikes rude, and gross people. He loves music. He plays a piano in his house. He plays old classical music. He is not athletic whatsoever. He usually spends his days day dreaming, composing music, and walking around the village. He is always very cheerful on nice sunny days. He strolls around the park, people watching.

Biography: Vincent was born in 1776. The US had just become an Independent Nation, and his family lived in a small Village in Maine. He was 18 at the time of his death. He had a girlfriend that he loved very much. Her name was Rosalina. They were engaged. It was a month until their wedding when he died. His entire family was murdered. Why? Because Vincent’s dad used to own a business. That business ended back in 1746. They had cheated another company, and that company lost all of their profits. They wanted revenge on Vincent’s dad, but his business fled. Finally the owner of the other company found him, and murdered the whole family. Vincent never knew this though. He never knew why his family was murdered. Vincent came back as a ghost, and watched Rosalina. She got married to another man, and Vincent was very sad. To this day, he has been looking for love. That’s all he ever wanted in life, love. Though sometimes he wishes that he didn’t come back. If he had gone with his family, he would have been happy. He lives in his old house in Maine. No one else lives there though. A lot of people dislike Vincent though. They don’t think he should have come back as a ghost. When Vincent was young, he had a pet cat. The cats name was Kringla. He cherished this cat very much. Kringla died many years after Vincent had, and they found each other. Kringla lives with him in his house.

I updated my character, I still need it approved though!