Riku II Hanaruna

Name: Riku II Hanaruna
Age: 17

Race: Blood Elf
Sex: male

Mp:100
Stamina:100

Hair: Born Blond-emo cut

Eyes: red

Weight: 98 lbs.

Height: 5.6'

Weapon: Dragon staff : Stolen off a slain dragon warrior : It grants the power of easily slaying dragons of all sorts By Directing the wielder to target the weak point , and a great immunement of fire, but a great weakness to water.
Armor: Black spike metal
breastplate, Steel boots and leggings.
Strengths: Fighting a ranged attacker due to
staff deflection, Fighting dragons, any fire magic.
Weakness: Water, Fear of darkness , His own magic : acrobactism : often pushes the line and breaks a leg or too.
Skills/Magic: Acrobactism : Riku can cast this spell to allow him to jump extremely high and run up walls, as well as fall from immense heights.Requires 20 mana.

Deflection: Riku can Spin his spear at a rate where it's barely visible. It allows him to block most projectiles, the which can get in is fire.Requires 30 stamina

Copycat: This skill allows Riku to immensly study a skill quickly and Use it once.Requires 40 stamina

Quickshot: Fires several shots of fire out of his hands : if focused will cause them to become heat seeking.Requires 50 mana

Focus: This skill allows Riku to increase the effect of his magic/skills and recover 50 mana. Requires 20 stamina.

Rest: Allows Riku to recover 50 stamina. Requires 20 mana.

Appearance:
Riku is a slim boy of great height, who might easily be confused for a woman from the back whit his thin body and style of hair. His skin is smooth, soft and very fair of color, as though he has spent little time in the sun. His neck length, glossy hair is a very bright, natural blond in color; he wears his hair in an amazing style to give him a vibrant appearance. His eyes are red like the color of rubies.

Riku can usually be found wearing huge black armor thats pratically weightless to the wearer. It has several spikes in smart areas, 2 on the shoulders 4 on the elbow part of the arms, and 3 on knees.

Personality:
He is a very spirited and energetic person. He is a constant bundle of energy and vitality, always ready to meet each new challenge head on and live every day and moment to its fullest. To others, He appears confident, proud, and sure of her abilities. His energy and intensity that can sometimes leave others a little bewildered. Through his invigorated, demanding nature, Riku has developed a sense for the true inner motivations and the workings of highly detailed things, such as the personalities of others.


In his life, Riku has a constant need for adventure, challenge and freedom. Nearly everything He does becomes an issue of all or nothing. His sources of conflict and motivation come from a constant feeling of confinement, His association of security with material gain, His fear of poverty, and his near refusal to accept authority, rather than being the authority. Leading comes naturally to him, following does not.

Although inexperienced, Riku makes for a superb fighter. He can rally to any cause He believes in, and sees it through to the end. He's the first into battle and the last one out. Vague ideas and plans easily crystallize under His influence; He excels at turning plans into reality with firm practicality. He is gifted with drive, ambition and determination.


Biography: Came from the land of Azeroth After being exiled for opening the forbidden gate of dragons, after killing a dragon warrior and stealing the great staff he was forever exiled and forced to go to the closet area to make a new life as a arena combatent.

Where was he/she born: Azeroth
Did he/she grow up with parents: No he was a orphaon, he ran away from the orphanage after hearing that they had kill his parents.
Did the character have any brothers sister,friends or relatives: none that he knows of.
How was his/her childhood? disturbed.
Does he have any pets: a small panther he found on his way to the arena named edward.
What are his/her beliefs: he believes in being reborn after death.
Why is your character traveling from home: he was exiled.
Does he/she have the ability to kill others? only in battle.
Is your character easy going? not really.
What are his/her likes books, magic, sweets.
How would he/she treat others? Somewhat rudely
Any goals? To find out about all of his pasts.
Has he/she considered the possibility of death? Being horrible slain/slaughterd.

M'kay, I want you to study some other character profiles. A little homework here before we continue. I want you to study five characters. You can look at mine which you can find in here and Drammor's characters: Tierra Nena, Kylie Wild, Aevukepe, Omentus Anima, and Tarnogh. I'd prefer if you studied a little of both our characters. Variety is the spice of life and you can learn different things by looking at each our characters. Once you have studied five of our characters come and tell me how you could improve your character. By asking you to study these I am by no means asking you to copy us or be as detailed. Each person has their own style of profiling. These are just examples to learn from because it seems you could benefit by seeing what has been done to get you started.

that work?

Hmm, a little better, but ...

Strengths: Being hit from the front, Taking several melee hits,water.

Weakness: fire,being hit from the back, easily knocked down

Skills/Magic: Fit as a acrobatic,walking on water,Water shield.

You're much too vague. Try looking at the strengths, weaknesses, skills/magic of two of mine or Drammor's characters again. Think about what you need to include in the descriptions of these. Being too vague allows for you and anyone else you battle with to get confused. There's no clear picture of how his magic works or what exactly his strengths and weaknesses are.

Tah dah new improvements!!!

Better, but:

Weapon: Dragon staff : Stolen off a slain dragon warrior : It grants the power of easily slaying dragons of all sorts, and a great immunement of fire, but a great weakness to water.

How so? That's too vague.

Weakness: Water, Fear, His own magic : acrobactism : often pushes the line and breaks a leg or too.

Explain. Too vague again.

You may also want to consider a limit to how much magic he can use at one time. Does it consume some type of energy or mana?

^.^ new improvents!!! btw i think i should work on teh history thingie you?

Yeah, I was going to mention that last. Your history could use a bit more work. I just like to think of that questionnaire as guidelines, something to get you thinking about your character's past and such. Nice work on the personality, though. I usually don't see such detailed ones very often.

So this fear of darkness of his, how does that affect his fighting? Also, since he's a thin guy, he's probably not very strong, no? Should add that to his weaknesses too, if so.