Zlindor

Name:Zildor

Age:18

Race:Werewolf

Sex:Male

Weight:150lbs

Height:6'2"

Hair:Black.

Eyes:Blue.

Appearance:Human
He is tall, with a muscular build. He doesn't look attractive but he doesn't look ugly either.

Depending on his mood, his eyes change shades. If he is content his eyes are a dark blue. If he is wary or nervous then his eyes get really light. When he is angry, his eyes get flecks of red in them. The angrier he gets, the more red his eyes have.

Depending on the season his hair will be different lengths. In the summer his hair comes to mid-forehead. During the winter his hair will be past his eyes.


He wears a white, long-sleeved tunic. He has light chain mail under his tunic to help protect him from arrows. He wears black leggings with chain mail under his leggings as well. The wears black, steel-toed boots that comes to his calf that covers the bottom of his leggings. He wears a
black cloak with a hood on his back to help protect him from the rain or protect him from sight.

He has an oval-shaped faced. He has a longer nose than most people due to him being a werewolf.
Wolf
When he turns into wolf form he looks like a normal wolf. His hair is black, with the exception for a few, odd white spots on his black.

Personality:He is friendly, but also cautious towards people, and welcomes company. He is often outgoing when he is around people he knows. He can be counted on to keep his head in a fight unless provoked and then goes berserk. He is quick to anger when insulted, and will fight when insulted. He tends to slip up when he is angry, and it is hard for him to calm down. Often when he gets angry he will transform into a wolf and can't transform back until he has calmed down.

When he is in a fight, he turns very serious, and won't even crack a smile when battling.

His eyes are constantly roaming the area, and watching things around them. He is usually first to spot danger. When he is in a fight, all he worries about is getting out alive. He normally isn't very curious, but randomly he can be very curious towards the slightest thing.

Weapon:His sword is a hand and a half sword. It is his normal weapon in a fight. It is normally used one-handed, but when necessary it can be used two-handed . The sheath is made out of white dragon scales. The hilt is black a white ribbon wrapped around the hand-grip. The blade is of an ordinary color and is made out of a silver that has the strength properties of steel.

He carries a knife in each of his boots. Whenever he has the knives on his person they help him channel his elemental magic. He rarely uses these except when he is being very secretive and doesn't want to be found.

On his left hip he carries a battle ax that is capable of wreaking havoc among his enemies. He usually only when he is greatly outnumbered and with few companions. The blade has is two crescent moons on each side faced inward and connected at the end of the handle. The blade is made out of steel with silver coating the outside of it. The battle ax has red lining the edge of the blade. The handle is about 2 feet in length and is made of wood.

Skills/Magic:He uses three forms of magic: Summoning, Elemental, and Healing.

Summoning
He is able to summon creatures from the forest and undead creatures(or necromancy). Depending on the size of the creature, he can summon more. If he wanted to summon ants, they are so small and require so little energy that he can summon hundreds of ants. If he wanted to summon bears he could only summon 2 or 3.

Elemental
He can take earth, fire, water, air, ice, and lightning and control it into different shapes and forms. The most basic forms of his attacks are just a simple ball of energy combined with one of the elements. This takes away almost no energy from him. An attack that uses more energy is an extreme exageration of an element. For example an earthquake for earth, a hurricane for wind and water, a massive bonfire controlled at will for fire, a massive hailstorm, or freezing something really hot for ice, and an extremely high powered bolt of lightning for lighitning. These attacks leave him just able to stand, and uses only in extreme situations.

Healing
He can detect any poison in any food or drink. He is able to heal most wounds. He can't heal fatal wounds. Healing takes energy from him as well but usually it is worth it. He can also take in energy from nature around him. He can only do this when he is in total concentration. If he gets disrupted in any way he will stop suddenly. Usually if you disrupt him he gets angry.

Armour:He carries little armour. He wears chain mail under a white, long-sleeved tunic. He also wears chain mail under black leggings that come to his ankles. He wears steel-toed boots that come to his calfs. He wears a black cloak with a hood on his back.

Weaknesses:Magic- when he uses magic it takes up energy from him. The more magic he casts, the more it weakens him. The more powerful magic he casts, the more it weakens him. Also, using magic causes him to get hungry faster than normal.

Hotheaded-he is easy to anger and won't take insults likely. When he gets angry it is hard for him to calm down. When he gets angry it is easy for him to make mistakes and makes them a lot. Often he will attempt to do too much magic and it exhausts him, leaving open to be defeated.

Strengths:Magic- He can use magic. He has trained himself so that he can use more magic than most people. He has more energy, therefore he can use more magic. When he uses magic and he isn't attacking or being attacked he can use the energy from his surroundings instead of himself.

Attentiveness- He pays attention to his surroundings. He attempts to not let anything go by that he doesn't notice.

Strength- He has more muscle than most people since he is a werewolf. Since, he is only a descendant of a true werewolf, and the blood has been diluted, he can only transform into a wolf. He is still stronger than most and more agile too. His senses are keener, and he notices more things.

Biography:
Zildor was born into a poor household on the outskirts of the Gerudo Desert. He had two parents who were very humble but kind. He enjoyed growing up playing with his older brothers. The 3 sons knew nothing of civilization. The only food they knew of was meat.

When Zildor was around the age of 4 he realized one night on a full moon his parents were away from the house. He asked his eldest brother, John, who was 10 at the time, where they went. John told him that his parents were getting food for the next month.

As the years flew by, John began to go to get food for the house with their parents. Then his other brother, Zinoof started going to get food as well. Zildor became used to the idea of being alone every night of the full moon.

On the day of his 13th birthday, Zildor's dad took him for a walk. His dad told Zildor that his mom and dad were both full fledged werewolves. That was why they disappeared every full moon. When this happened they lost control of their minds and went looking for food. Usually they couldn't find any hyrulians and would have to do with some other creatures, and after they feasted they would find more food and bring it back to eat over the next month. His father told him that his two other brothers were werewolves as well.

Then Zildor's father broke told him something Zildor wasn't expecting. He told Zildor that he was a werewolf, but since he was their last child that he wasn't a complete werewolf. He would only turn into a wolf on a full moon, and he would retain his control over his mind. He would also, after time, be able to transform at will. When provoked Zildor would have to try to stay calm, otherwise he would transform.

At sunset the family came to watch Zildor's first transformation. When he did, he turned into a black wolf. He watched his family turn into werewolves as well. He then witnessed his family loose control and run off. He was disturbed a little but soon grew used to it.

After a few years he was at the age of 16. He grew weary of living secluded from other people. He set out with the only knife that the family owned. He soon gathered his sword, his knives, his battle ax, and his knowledge of magic. Since then he has been traveling, welcoming company, and began to seek to make his mark on the world.

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Ok, I'm looking at the other character profiles. I've decided I want to create a totally new character instead of using the one I made up in the profile. Is it ok if I do that?

Of course.

Ok, I'm going to work on it now.

Okay, lemme see here ...

This is pretty self-explanatory. He can take earth, fire, water, and air and control it into different shapes and forms. The more powerful the attack, the more of his own energy he uses.

I think you need to give more examples of what kind of attack for each element would be considered a "powerful attack". Give us some examples of his limits here.

He has black hair that is longer or shorter due to the seasons. In the summer it only comes to mid-forehead. In the winter it can come past his eyes.

This in the appearance section is redundant since you already mentioned this for his hair section. I suggest you leave just the colors of his eyes and hair for the eyes and hair section, and move these:

Depending on the season his hair will be different lengths. In the summer his hair comes to mid-forehead. During the winter his hair will be past his eyes when stretched.

Depending on his mood, his eyes change shades. If he is content his eyes are a dark blue. If he is wary or nervous then his eyes get really light. When he is angry, his eyes get flecks of red in them. The angrier he gets, the more red his eyes have.

to the appearance section.

When he uses magic and he isn't attacking or being attacked he can use the energy from his surroundings instead of himself. He can even use the energy of his opponent!

Just checking, but this means he can only use the energy of his opponent if he is not engaged in combat, yes?

ok, I've updated it. What do you think?

You missed this:

Hair: Black. Depending on the season his hair will be different lengths. In the summer his hair comes to mid-forehead. During the winter his hair will be past his eyes when stretched.

You should remove it from that section because you mention it again later in his appearance section. It's needlessly redundant. Other than that everything is good.

Alright I fixed that. I'm guessing that means it's approved?

Yup.

*Approved*

Yay thanks.

I have updated my character.

I approve your updates.