Good, that's much better. Now this next one is just more of a suggestion, though I wonder if I should make it a requirement or not. Mostly I just want to be sure of everything that your character is and is not capable of. That's usually the most important thing to me when I'm working with someone on their character approval. This is so no cheating happens. Also, having limits makes everyone more interesting if you ask me. So I would encourage you to perhaps start on this:
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The second scroll, contains a summoning seal, which sets up a lab area in which I can work. The amount of space the lab takes up varies with my intentions, which are based on the space provided. The materials in the lab are varied, and to catalog them all would take up several pages.
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You could do what Drammor did with his Omentus Anima, post the several pages worth in a separate post in this thread once you're done with, or just update each time you've worked on it. I'm very uncomfortable with vagueness. I'm still wondering if I should make you do this. You're character is still approved, of course. But I'd be pleased to see you make steady progress on this sheet of lab content.