Archon

okay i fixed it up a bit

Name: Archon Stilgate

Age: 48

Race: Construct

Gender: Male

Biography: Born Archon Stilgate, the only child of an aristocratic family, Archon was trained essentially from birth in the magical arts. He proved especially adept at the construction and animating golems and earth magic. At age 24 he began work on his masterpiece and by age 28 he had finished it, a perfectly porportioned golem crafted from mythril, pure white limestone with a great diamond core, created to be his families gaurdian while he traveled. However everything went very wrong, Archon locked himself in the basement of his family manor and began the incantaion to animate his prometheus. A blundering servant of his fathers, not heeding the 'Do Not Disturb' sign on the door and the fact that is was locked, unlocked the door and bardged in tumbling down the stairs and right into Archon. He misspoke the last phrase of the incantation, causing his soul to be ripped rather painfully from his body and to be fused to his golem. To Archon's horror he found his own body unresponsive on the floor still breathing, but so very empty. His parents were shocked to say the least but they quicklly scoured every magic institution looking for a way to return thier son to his body. Archon didn't bother to wait, he knew there was no known way to return to his body. Only the antient dark arts had a chance could restore him.Archon left his 'body' at the manor incased in a special ice to keep it from aging and embarked on his own to find a way to return himself to normal. He has wandered the world for 20 years hiding in odd places always keeping an ear out for any leads.

Personallity: Even though Archon's soul was scarred from the transfer his original personality is mostly intact. Once being the son of an aristocrat he is very much a gentleman, though a touch sarcastic and suspicous of everyone. He is loyal to a fault and will do anything to protect his friends. However the damage done to his soul has created almost an entirelly different being within him an irrational beast with a touch of sadism and a whole lotta pissed off, It is sometimes difficult to keep the 'evil side' in check and often puts him in bad situations. Hi is willing to kill but would prefer the diplomatic route if possible.

Hair: White limestone formed into the shape of shoulder length dreadlocks

Eyes: Red rubies

Weight: 1500lbs

Height: 6'6"

Weapon:

Armor: Limestone

Appearance: 6' 6" humanoid construct his body is in perfect porportion, his 'hair' is made to look like dreadlocks and his eye have an spooky red glow. Archons limestone body given time can be changed to resemble clothing, but more often than not he 'wears' a pair of shorts leaving the rest of his chiseled body bear(pun very much intened). Every so often he must restore his limestone skin due to weathering which dulls his features but more importantlly thins his 'armour'.

Magic: His once massive knowledge of earth magic is know almost completelly gone. He still retains the skills to repair his body should he get damaged. He can still do some very basic earth magic such as creating stone spires and raising up man sized slabs of earth. He pulls his magic from energy storeded in his core, which he pulls from the earth slowly but surelly, unless he 'sleeps' if it could be called that, the energy is not limitless but it is more than enough to get through a regular fight. Should it ever 'run out' he would not perish for the energy binding his soul to the core is from an entirelly different source.

Strengths: Archon's body is now a mythril body with a 1 inch thick covering of limestone, his pure physical strength is impressive and his mass is a lethal weapon in itself. Any strikes to his limestone skin is ineffictive. The enchantment that binds his soul to the golem is unbreakable. He is also free of most basic needs such as food and water. He does 'sleep but it is more of a habit then a nesscessity, he will bury himself in the earth and 'rest' storing more energy in his core.

Weakness: Though he can repair himself it requires a long time thus any damage caused to him in battle cannot be repaired during battle and his mental state is unstable. He is als a little bit on the slow side. His mythril body is not impervious to harm and his diamond core is very sensitive. The destruction of his core would destablize his soul and would instantlly kill him.

Not bad for a first try, not bad at all. n.n

Though I feel you could expand on some parts of his personality. It's everything you said in that section was rather vague. I think you could explain it more deeply which would give me a better idea of what Archon is like. Really, with his history you have a lot of things you could work off of, meaning you really could add some interesting depth to his character. Nothing you have to do immediately and it's more of something I just noticed, but I'd like to see you go off into the EH and really develop this character. It'd be rather interesting.

I was wondering when I got to his strengths and weaknesses, does he feel pain in that body when damaged? That's something you should probably include.

duley noted i will repost in a new thread later

Eh? Why in a new thread?

Okay I have edited it.

I know it is probably posted somewhere but I can't find it, who can 'Approve' characters.

*Points to BA Council banner* Anyone who has that can, generally. I'll approve you when I'm satisfied.

About his magic in that body, how much of it can he do at one time? Does he run out of "mana", "energy" or magic power so to speak? You should consider his limits in this area.

Okay I ellaborated on things a bit

One last thing, can he die in this body? If his diamond core is destroyed, will he die?

Okay I think I'm good

Okay, good.

*Approved*

Sweet I have to say that went better than expected