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Old 04-14-2009, 04:57 PM
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Name: Axen Heth Black (A.K.A. Ax by his friends)

Age: 19

Race: Hylian (or at least that's what he thinks)

Sex: Male

hair: Jet black hair that is short

Eyes: Emerald Green, have a bit of blue in them and give you the idea that he sees the truth in them

Weight: 160lbs

Height: 5 ft. 10 in

weapon: 2 swords. The first of them(Rox) has a emerald in the hilt that he stores energy in them to use later, he does this by concentrating on the emerald and focusing his energy(or life force) ,into the gem.This allows the sword to become more powerful, expending a small amount of energy every second, and allows him to pull energy from it, to use on spells or other strenuous activities, but tends to use it for heavy lifting, and, difficult acrobatics and sprinting.He is also faster and stronger when the sword is charged up. The second of the two (Burn)has a rope at the end so he can throw it and impale it in someone and then pull them in and kill them, or any way that he sees fit.

Armor: Leather, with the cloak( Ref. to appearance)

Strengths: Good at parrying and acrobatics, He is adept in the art of speech, and he is very creative, using the landscape to his advantage.

Weaknesses: Hot headed, he is weak to poison and doesn't hold up well without a energy source to live off of(worse than normal people),Plus he can't work machinery well. Also, he is slower with his coat on.

Skills/Magic:
Subrosian stealth-( his subrosian stealth allows him to move,at any speed without a change in noise level,also,it allows him to become invisible, but, uses energy every second he is invisible.)
Compass-tells him where north,south,east,and west are
Condense-
make things smaller and compact, which allows him to carry more)things with his mind
teleport-he can teleport by finding a source of energy(or life force,A.K.A. an enemy)and then he can teleport to that location. (He can only sense life force two miles around him.) Also, he is starting to learn to hear minds with his teleportation abilities, used in the same manner, by reaching out with his mind only when he comes in contact with a mind he can hear whispers of thoughts like words carried on the breeze.
His eyes are now styled differently.here is the link to the different style he has now. This style of eye allows him to use dark energy in blasts, explosions, dashes. These moves take up emotion, and when that energy is spent, axen becomes duller, felling sleepy, or at least the closest thing to it, and faints on site.The primary emotion for this move is anger, but others can fuel these too.
Dark Explosion-This creates a barrier, covering all angles possible, but can't go through solid ground. It can, however, go through sand and other shiftable terrain.It stops attacks in their tracks, and can send opponents flying. Axen mainly uses this technique for stopping enemies from pushing forward.
Dark Dash-This move allows axen to travel almost as fast as the speed of sound, just barley missing a sonic boom. This move can be used anywhere, even in the sky. he uses this to dispatch a group of enemies or a commander.
Dark Blast-This creates a ball of dark energy that axen can move around at will, but mostly shoots it straight forward so he can deceive them later.When the target is hit, he can do one of two things:
1. Cause an explosion on site, leaving a crater about 1x1.
2. He can cause the shadow ball to disperse and go into wounds. The resulting reaction to the blood cells in the body causes the body's wounds to heal over faster, and the victim should have fully healed a cut in a moment or two. Axen does not use this lightly because it uses the most emotion, causing him to faint instantaneously.Only in extreme cases he uses it and even then only when he has a lot of emotion built up.

Personality: He is fairly neutral, with a strong sense of right and wrong and enforces to that sense. He doesn't go around and show off his strength, exactly the opposite, he instead blends,figuratively, into the background, and holds his own court. He is hesitant to fight, rather seeking peace, avoiding unnecessary fights and seeking diplomacy, but, once he makes his decision, he acts without regret, or second-guessing. He does have a soft spot for the little man, speaking figuratively, and helps others, quick to do a favor here and there. His favorites are:
Food- Chili Dogs. He found the texture to be quite pleasing and the taste didn't stink too bad either.
Drinks- He likes Coca Cola the best, grabbing one at every chance, but also enjoys drinking, specifically A&W root beer, and sprite.
Hobbies- Axen loves to train. He could spend months on end training his body, mind, and spirit, wanting to be the best swordsman in the world.

Appearance: A tall, thin, man, with lean features. He holds himself in a proud way, not regal royal proud, more so just strong-willed and proud. He wears a black cloak with leather armor and cloth underneath.His boots have emeralds embedded in the leg of the boot. His eyes give a hard stare, and his skin is travel-worn. His cloak has metal knobs that he hangs his gear on. His dual swords go at his sides, by the hip. he has leather jeans that he switches out for shorts and a t-shirt on a hot day.He has gloves he uses to give him some grip on his swords, but takes them off for hand-to-hand combat. His face is a hard,sharp, and outlined features.

Biography:This man was found lying, near death on the plains of Hyrule by the Subrosians after his parents, being the secret keepers to the subrosian tunnels, fled because his parents were being hunted by zant, to make sure everything was under his watch. They took pity on this poor baby and brought him back to their tunnels, through the land of termina. The boy had a peaceful but arduous childhood, testing his strengths and weaknesses. He has the common belief of all hylilians As he grew older, the subrosians made him swear an oath that he would not divulge his secrets to anyone, friend of foe. The man obliged and he underwent training that allows him to blend with the shadows and to sneak with such stealth that you can swear that it was only the wind.
And when the boy became of age, the Subrosians told him of his origins and allowed him free passage but he was forewarned; if he gave away their position he would be banned forevermore and all Subrosian goodwill would be revoked. So the man set out to avenge his parents and the life they would've had and he hopes to become ambassador for the Subrosians one day.
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Old 04-22-2009, 05:16 AM
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Re: axen

Okay, firstly, spaces between the sections. As for the race, do you mean "Hylian"? Also I need you to add to everything, and in the bio explain how he ended up in Subrosia as a baby.
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Old 04-26-2009, 06:56 PM
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Re: axen

Alright, much better. But there are still things to work on.

You say he can store energy in one of his swords to use later. I need you to explain how he does that exactly, and what abilities the sword has when charged up.

What do you mean by "condense" things with his mind? About his teleporting ability, you have to explain how powerful it is and what its limitations are. Also, what does the compass ability do? Does he instinctively know where North is? And also, more information on his Subrosian stealth.

Strengths and weaknesses still need work, and you're missing the personality section.
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Old 04-27-2009, 06:38 PM
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Alright, this is approved. Welcome to the EH. ^^

Step by the Battle School if you feel you need some roleplaying training.
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