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Aiden
Name: Aritificially Intelligent Destroyer, Eliminator, and Neutralizer (AIDEN, or less formally, Aiden)
Age: The AIDEN VII Project has been going on for hundreds of years, but the most recent AIDEN model has the mind of a 34 year old human. Race: Aiden is an AI program. He inhabits a Bio-Shell that appears human. However, note that Aiden is not the Bio-Shell, but the program that controls it. Think of it like this: Twilight Princess is not the Wii, or part of it, but for you to interact with it, you need a Wii. Aiden is Twilight Princess, and the Bio-Shell (Or any computer he uploads himself to) is the Wii. Sex: Though technically genderless, Aiden was designed as a male. Hair: Dirty Blonde Eyes: Greyish green Weight: 204 lbs Height: 5'10" Weapon: Aiden always carries an LPF-2 Light Pistol with him. It's a highly accurate gun that fires bullets the size of BBs, then charges them with a laser beam, making the ammo capacity 200 shots a clip, and he carries 9 extra clips. Strengths: Aiden, being an AI, can direct his body to perform the same task, over and over, without any variation. He can analyze the pros and cons in a any situation near instantaneously, and has a photographic memory. After his Activation, (see Biography) Aiden's abilities to feal fear, be surprised, and to hesitate were erased. He also knows when his Bio-Shell is feeling pain, without actually feeling it. Weakness: Aiden, being software, is occasionally prone to glitches, and this can have interesting results. Both the goventment of the USA, and AODAOS(see Biography) have the ablitiy to shut him down, though the former's is only temporary, and is done via a beam that must be projected from a gun. A magnetic beam with throw his NanoAides (see Skills/Magic) into disarray, and prolonged exposure may damage his memory, though this would have to be an hour or more of exposure to a magnet such as one used in scrapyards. Planetary magentic fields are weak enough to have no effect. Also, a flaw in his bio-shell's design that will be corrected on future models, is that if iron or steel peirce it's skin, his bio-shell starts to deteriorate at a rapid rate. Although no permenant effects are recieved if treated within half an hour. (Aiden always carries at least one antidote with him, generally three.) HOwever, if left more than that, the Shell will rapidly age, and if left for more than 45 minutes, it is inevitably fatal. Skills/Magic: Aiden's Skills These skills are things the AIDEN program can do, while in it's normal housing (see Bio-Shell's Skills) Hack - Aiden can remotely hack most computer systems, usually within seconds, and gain complete control of them, allowing control of things like enemy planes and security systems. Aiden cannot hack AODAOS or any of the systems in the AIDEN VII testing facility. Predict - Aiden can accurately predict almost any pattern. After watching anyone for about two minutes, he can copy them exactly, down to the subeject's mannerisms. He can also predict the way an opponent will move, and then block or dodge many attacks. After hearing only ten words in any language, Aiden can predict the rest, and accuratly speak with the fluency of a native. Influence - Aiden can produce a sub-sonic hum, and by varying the pitch, he can influence the decisions of those in a ten foot radius around him. This is simply an influence, not mind control, and Aiden cannot single out one person in the radius to influence. This does not affect machines. Internet/Communicate - Aiden can consult the internet from anywhere in the universe, or communicate with anyone, whethere that be a phone call or a text, without a computer. Bio-Shell Skills These are skills that Aiden can make the Bio-Shell do. The Bio-Shell is an organic robot. It is controlled by Aiden, and basically works just like the human body, with some key differences. Discharge - Aiden can discharge the actual AIDEN unit from the Bio-Shell's brain cavity through an opening from the mouth, and it then leaves through the mouth. Repeat - Aiden can direct his body to imitate a certain action repeatedly without any variation. Freerun - This is simple. Aiden directs his body over any obstacle he comes to. He can cross Manhattan by rooftop in just under 30 minutes, in a straight line. Skin/Hair Change - Aiden can change his skin to any tone he wishes, for disguise purposes. He generally keeps it at a light tan. His Hair will automatically change to look natural with it. It's default is dirty blonde. NanoAide Skills NanoAides are microscopic robots dispersed throughout the Bio-Shell, involuntarily directed by Aiden. Heal - The NanoAides can heal any injury Aiden recieves, taking only seconds for minor cuts, to several minutes to heal a broken bone. If every bone in his body was broken, Aiden could be back in fighting state in around ten minutes. While the NanoAides cannot regrow a lost limb, the can reattach one in about 40 seconds. They can even reattach Aiden's head! Speed/Agility/Endurance - The NanoAides repulse the ground, or any other surface needed, allowing for a top speed of 60 mph, a top high jump of ten feet, and very high agility. This is always active. Strength - The NanoAides congregate in mucles doing pulling, and help them pull, increasing Aiden's maximum bench press from 200 lbs to around 1800 lbs. He can't lift a car, but could probably flip one over if he had to. This tires Aiden and the NanoAides. Aiden takes about four minutes to revover. The NanoAides stop functioning for about two. Appearance: Aiden's Bio-Shell is well built and very strong, even without NanoAides. Its has long, dirty blonde hair that Aiden usually keeps in a shoulder length pony-tail. It's face is designed to be very average, and not stand out in a crowd. Aiden almost always dresses in combat gear, an all black jumpsuit, black boots and gloves, and a dark grey amoo/holster belt for his gun. The AIDEN unit is simply a dull grey sphere with a large red lens on the front. It has a hover unit and UADP (Universally Adaptive Data Port) built in. Personality: Aiden, having been raised as a human, does indeed have a personality. He no longer feels any remorse for his actions, but he is compassionate and kind to those who are not his targets. He will never waste life unessacarily, and firmly believes in justice. In battle, he is cool and collected, having no abillity to fear. He hates injustice, and will correct it at all costs. His love of justice, does hoever, sometimes cause him to act rashly. Also, occasianal glitches may cause temporary personality changes, and his removed "weaknesses" may even resuface on occasion, but these are all temporary disorders. Biography: Aiden was found on the steps of an orpanage in New York one night, and was of course taken in. The caretakers, due to Aiden's influence ability, gave him his name then and there. Nothing of any real significance happened until his fifteenth birthday. Still in the orphanage, Aiden was woken by screams, as men in suits ransacked the building. Aiden tried to resist, but the men pointed a strange light at him and he passed out. How long he was out, he didn't know, but he awoke strapped to a table, with men around him. Aiden, scared out of his mind, but when the men started to prod at him, he decided to resist. He snapped his bonds, not knowing how, and rolled off the table as a security turret opened fire. One glance, and Aiden was in control of the unit. Directing it to fire at the men, he ran for the door, and followed some instinct to the exterior of the facility. There sat a gleaming starship. Instinctively knowing it was safe, Aiden climbed aboard. As he sat in the only chair in the empty interior, the ship lifted off. Four hours later, it touched down on a small moon orbiting a gas giant, and Aiden;s instincts guided him to a small facitlity. Upon entering it, Aiden was greeted by a hovering, crecent-shaped robot. Slightly startled when it spoke, he listened with interest to it's melodic synthesized voice. "Greetings, AIDEN VII. I am the Activation Overseer and Director of Assignments, Operations, and Services. You may call me AODAOS. Please follow me." It turned and floated off, Aiden traling behind. "What is this place?" Aiden wondered aloud. AODAOS's reply was that all would soon be made clear. Arriving at a large platform overseeing a factory, AODAOS told Aiden to have a seat in the solitary chair. Sitting down, AIden straigtened up, and all was indeed made clear. He knew who he was, an AI assassin, but merely a proof of concept. He knew about all of his abilities, and how certain "weaknesses" were now erased. He also knew of AODAOS's ability to shut his down. He looked at the robot, which simply replied. "Thank you. You are free to go." After ninteen years, Aiden has made a name for himself, as a great assassin. |

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Re: Aiden
Alright, let's get down to it.
First, and formost, his Predict ability is far too strong. Able to master something by looking at it for a few second? That's on the bring of god-modding, which is a no-no. Secondly, he might be an AI, but that doesn't mean he doesn't have a personality, so expand it. FInally, I don't mean to be nit-picky, but could you please provide some evidance that you've used your previous character in at least three, or so, things? I don't mean to be mean, but I'm not feeling well and don't have the time to scour the entire EH for the evidance. Thank you. So yeah, tone down his predict ability.
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Re: Aiden
Alright, just give him at least one consistant weakness, then I'll give him another look.
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Re: Aiden
Oh. Yeah, sorry. Looks good enough now.
~*Approved*~
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