Kaemon

Name: Kaemon Benito (see pic of him Picture003.jpg - Image - Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting

Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vLCJpEb6hvw

Age: 15 (He does grow older)

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Brown and to the side (see pic.)

Eye Color: Brown

Weight: 140 lbs

Height: 5'8"

Weapons and Armor: Kaemon wields swords. Although he is currently studying magic sword abilities, he has swords with explosives and can use some just like guns. The xplosive parts are connected on the bottom of the swords behind his back. For instance, he presses a trigger to command the sword gunner to blast an explosion, but on the pace he holds or presses it is the rate it will go. The harder, the more slower and powerful. The quicker and faster, the more machine gun like. And yes, The swords are heavy which is why he has the quick swift normal swords to fight of the opponet, then taking out the bigger one when it is the right time. Kaemon holds a normal sword on his back which is near his shoulder and and another on his belt holster (thats 2) he also holds 2 bigger ones for more power and explosives on his back directly above the belt line. He changes his weapons often, but recieves a special one from his dad before he takes off in his adventure.

Strengths: Kaemon is capable of performing crazy stunts during his sword attacks because of all the swords he equips and the fact that he is top sword fighter in his village.
Weakness: Kaemon like everyone else, has a weakness. His is the fact that when he is excited for an adventure, he gets bored easily which causes misfortune. Another weakness is when it comes to protecting Kioko (a girl) he always seems to think about her saftey first... putting him in more danger. During battle he never thinks about what tactics he should use, although he is top swordsman of his village, thw world has better in which can defeat him alot easier than he thinks. Also, if people use quick magic of any sort, that is a BIG weakness which is why he must find Angus Brogans. It's a big weakness because he cannot seem to understand it and makes him feel like a failure, and let's say the enemy has speed magic:
When Kaemon attacks the enemy just warps behind him...

Magic: none

Skills: Some examples of his skill sword attacks:
-Grabs shoulder sword and hip sword to do a side verticle slash.
-After consecutive slashes with hi swords, every few slashes the bigger sword slashes, then shoots.
Here is an example of him fighting gaurds:
The gaurds were holding two swords. They charged towards Kaemon, he threw his back sword up into the air as he took his smallest sword on his hip to block one gaurd. As the other gaurd approached, Kaemon took the sword that was coming from the air to slash the gaurd he was blocking. Then turned around with an explosive sword while tucking the smaller sword away, breaking through the gaurd's sword stabbing him with the explosive sword. Then another gaurd far away behind the one he just stabbed is aiming some sort of gun at Kaemon, and so Kaemon pressed the swords trigger which sent a powerful blast at the gaurd far away.
Kaemon took the sword out of the stabbed standing upright gaurd and walked away as the gaurd fell down...
Later on in his adventure things called Angus Brogans (spirit like creatures, see pic for example:
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teach him more moves such as speed.

Personality: Joyful, caring, and outgoing. During the battle Kaemon is always excited thinking there is no way he can lose. He dislikes people who ruin other people's lifes and gets in the way. In an everyday life, Kaemon is pretty cool and makes loyal friends, although he does not like to pay attention in his studies, he will protect the right and not the wrong no matter how important. His religion his the Church of Phantel (alot like Catholic)

Biography: Born in the world Alair in the land of Aiken from the village Few (see pic for world map:
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Kaemon has always lived adopted by a weapon smith named Cael and always calls him dad. Cael has always taught Kaemon to be a proud boy with good morals and to grow up strong. Kaemon's life is normal up until further on in the story, but he usually just helps his dad, goes to school, and hang out with friends like Bud. It is said that his orginal parents were killed during an attack from the King (Don)'s Army (Caspars) from another land named Cathal into Aiken. Cael found Kaemon in a small underground hiding place when he was roaming around the ruins of the town right after the attack. Kaemon doesn't exactly remember anything of that since he was only a few months old. As of now, he is only 15, and so there really is no exciting background as of right now.

Okay, first of all:

Weapons and Armor: Kaemon wields swords. Although he is currently studying magic sword abilities, he has swords with explosives and can use some just like guns. Kaemon holds a normal sword on his back which is near his shoulder and and another on his belt holster (thats 2) he also holds 2 bigger ones for more power and explosives on his back directly above the belt line. He changes his weapons often, but recieves a special one from his dad before he takes off in his adventure.

Explain more about the explosive swords. Like how they work exactly. You also might want to consider the weight of each sword and how this could complicate things when trying to use all of those.

Kaemon is capable of performing crazy stunts during his sword attacks because of all the swords he equips and the fact that he is top sword fighter in his village. Later on in his adventure things called Angus Brogans teach him more moves such as speed.

Be a little more descriptive about his strengths.

Weakness: Kaemon like everyone else, has a weakness. His is the fact that when he is excited for an adventure, he gets bored easily which causes misfortune. Another weakness is when it comes to
protecting Kioko (a girl) he always seems to think about her saftey first... putting him in more danger.

While this can be a factor in a fight, it's not really enough. What I want here is more real combat related weaknesses. What is he not good at? Or maybe some limits when it comes to using those swords, like the explosive ones. I want you to think of his limits when it comes to fighting.

With all this, I want to see some real thought put into these things. I don't want to see some crap that you just threw on here to get me off your back. Actually think about the stuff I'm asking for, and don't feel the need to be limited to the details I mentioned. I only ask a few questions to get you thinking about what you need, to get you on the right track.

I fixed it.

-Grabs shoulder sword and hip sword to do a side verticle slash.
-After consecutive slashes with hi swords, every few slashes the bigger sword slashes, then shoots.
Here is an example of him fighting gaurds:
The gaurds were holding two swords. They charged towards Kaemon, he threw his back sword up into the air as he took his smallest sword on his hip to block one gaurd. As the other gaurd approached, Kaemon took the sword that was coming from the air to slash the gaurd he was blocking. Then turned around with an explosive sword while tucking the smaller sword away, breaking through the gaurd's sword stabbing him with the explosive sword. Then another gaurd far away behind the one he just stabbed is aiming some sort of gun at Kaemon, and so Kaemon pressed the swords trigger which sent a powerful blast at the gaurd far away.
Kaemon took the sword out of the stabbed standing upright gaurd and walked away as the gaurd fell down...

This looks like it belongs in skills and magic, because these are his skills with his sword, right? You should move it into that section. I guess I can let you go on what you had on his strengths before.

Skills/Magic: None so far. He's learning...

The "he's learning" part can be a little confusing. If he has absolutely no magic available to him in any form or quality, just say none.

And his history looks thin. Flesh it out a bit more, hm?

ok. It's all fixed.

Kaemon's life is normal up until further on in the story

So you mean this has not happened yet, right? From where he starts as an approved character?

Originally Posted by Shrub

So you mean this has not happened yet, right? From where he starts as an approved character?

he has no big impact yet until you approve him, so I can start his story...

Okay, just checking.

*Approved*