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Old 12-13-2008, 07:14 PM
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Phirestorm

This is my first character, so don't expect much...
If the character is okay, but the story is a bit short or something, please let me know

Name: Phirestorm (Formerly known as Noob Phire)
Age: 3 (He was created three years ago)
Race: Fire god, clone
Gender: Male
Hair: Black
Eyes: Red
Weight: 90 kg
Height: 187 cm

Weapon:

Ice Sword(Absorbed): Absorbed it from a assassin, an advanced ability. The user creates a ice sword out of his hand. It's blade is strong enough to make a serious wound, but not strong enough to kill unless it inflicts serious damage. It looks like a sword with many ice spikes.

Armor: He does not currently have one, thus is he weak to physical attacks.

Strength: He is invulnerable to weak magic (except for ice-based ones). He's range of choice is distance as he's not well protected against swords and axes. However, during resent assassination attempt against him, in which gave him Ice Sword, he's capable to defend himself against spear and clubs.

Weaknesses: He is weak to physical attacks because he don't have armor, and ice-based techniques since he is a offspring of a fire god. Once he's angry, he loses control on his objective and aims to kill, this, however is letting his guard down, and makes him easy to strike out.

Appearance: Looks human, but with darker skin, black hair, and glowing red eyes. His hair is spiky back and hanging over his left eye front. He usually wears a black tunic, and a black coat on top, he wears no hat. Phirestorm has a fire scar on his cheek after the battle against Phire.

Personality: He is quiet, and show compassion for human beings. He sometimes talks another language when he charges the Nova Blazer, this have made Phirestorm forget more and more english.

Abilities:

Nova Blazer: A fire attack, the user breathes fire from his mouth. It's as simple as that.

Noob Absorb: The Noob clones only original attack, basically the Noob puts his hand on a opponent and «copies» an technique. He can only have 10 techniques at the same time, when he get 11, the user forget one. It should also be noted that the Noob have a 1/10 chance to absorb the victims weakness.

Dragon Slash(Absorbed): Absorbed from Phire, an minor ability. The user transforms his hand into a dragon claw, this technique is only temporary, and make the user very weak to ice-based techniques.

Background: After a battle against the legendary fire god Phire, the evil doctor Homse created 10 clones. The first clone was Noob Saybot, but died because it was to weak to breathe. Doc Homse then created a second clone, Noob Raring, but died after it started moving, it was in this time people began to be aware of Doctor Homses illegal attempts to create clones, to protect himself, Homse created Noob Killer and Noob Hater, those two destroyed the village below Doctor Homses castle then killed each other because neither wanted to share the glory of the destruction of the village, the fifth clone, Noob Homse was the first humanoid clone, but was killed after it attempted to replace Doc Homse, after that incident, Homse stopped giving his clones more intelligence than required. The sixth clone, Noob Jack, escaped into an dimensional gate, traveled to earth only to become Jack the Ripper. The seventh clone Noob ghost was the first one to live up to it's name (Noob as in No body), but died after the lack of plasma it required to survive. Noob Destructo, the eight was a copy of Killer, Hater and Ghost, it's one and only task was to gain a blood sample from the divine Phire, which it succeeded in, dying shortly after. The ninth clone, Noob Phire was a perfected copy of fire god Phire, but left Homse because Noob Phire didn't believe in Homse's goals. Furious Doc Homse created the tenth and final clone whose single goal was to find and destroy the ninth clone: Noob Magma, a demigod. But unlike Noob Phire, Noob Magma was TOO evil, turned on and killed Doctor Homse... Noob Magma's fate is unknown, but some say he travels in search of Noob Phire to see who that are the strongest clone, while others say that he travels around destroying everything on sight, and some even claims that he's dead! But nobody knows...

Noob Phire, unable to feel like a normal person, unable to be accepted as anything but a mere clone, traveled around seeking power. Because he have nothing of his own, but one single technique: the Nova Blazer. His other ability is that he can absorb the power/abilities/techniques of his victims. After a year had passed, Noob Phire was attacked by an unknown assassin, but the assassin made a mistake and got defeated, and Noob Phire gained a new power, the Ice Sword, it was then he learned about his absorbing ability. Phire got aware of Noob Phire and went to destroy him, believing that Noob Phire was evil. After a long battle that included Noob Phire absorbing Dragon Slash, Phire decided that he'd let Noob Phire live until Noob Phire killed a person whom didn't deserve to die. In this very day, Noob Phire is still looking for somebody to accept him. To hide his clone background, he renamed himself "Phirestorm".
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Old 12-23-2008, 01:43 PM
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Re: Phirestorm

Alright, it's getting there, but you're lacking a personality section. Also, please elaborate on the weaknesses and give him a few more.
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Old 12-25-2008, 03:05 PM
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Re: Phirestorm

Thanks... I was begining to lose hope that anyone would (dis)approve...

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Old 12-25-2008, 07:05 PM
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Re: Phirestorm

Much better.

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