Kite Mustang

Name: Kite Mustang

Age:15

Gender: Male

Hair: spikey black(see appearance) tips are blood red.

Eyes: Greyish

Height: 5' 8"

Weight: 115lbs.

Occupation: Proffesional Hunter. not like a hunting hunter, but a hunter of rare things. Animals, Gold and artifacts, foods, any manor of things.

Appearance: (he aint colored, but his shirt and pants are white, his hair is black, with red tips)

Personality: usually uncaring for others opinions and such, like wearing odd clothing, or doing odd things, he never cared if people called him weird, or odd. infact he enjoyed it, and joined in the laugh. Commonly good to be around. He loves combat, and often joins tournaments and such, only to have no contest and be comepletly bored.

Strengths: Kite is an insanely strong boy, almost to superhuman. His speed matches his strength. Kite's resistant to burning and flames, making various fire based tactics pretty useless against him.

Weaknesses: Kite is pretty susceptable to water and water based attacks, so he tends to not go very near open waters. If Kite gets completely bathed in water, accidentally or otherwise, he has to become nearly comepletely dry before he can transmute his aura into flames again. He may be strong and fast but, there are many that are stronger.

Weapons: his Aura and his brain.

Armor: just his cloths and Aura.

Skills: black belt in Tae Kwon Do, Kung Fu, and Karate. Acrobat.

Aura(and or Nen): His aura is like this(its rough but effective):(Enhancement:increases defense and offense and healing. Transmuting:Transmutes aura into different things in kite's case, flames. Conjuration: Can conjure different things, chains, swords, not food though. Special: you have to be born one, or become one later in life, rare ability. Manipulation: Manipulation of aura turning into different Nen shapes, like a dragon head, or cannon. Emission: Controlling Nen while not connected to the body, like firing a Nen bullet, or a Nen throwing knife. Kite prefers Transmuting and Enhancement.
Nen abilitys:

Burning Palm: Kite gathers nen into he palms, and transmutes it into fire. like this, he can lunge it at someone with it, or throw it(this ability loses a good amount of power when thrown)

Molten Fist: transmutes nen into burning spikes, protruding from his knuckles(they're about 1 1/2" long).

Burning Presence: Kite performs Ren(draws all of his nen and projects it outwards) while the nen is transmuted into flames, burning everything nearby into cindery ash.(about a 3ft radius.) Performing this application of Ren exhausts him pretty quickly, spending up his nen in about 30 seconds of mid powered Ren.

Kage: He becomes a shadow, blending into any background, nearly invisable, accept people with extreme eye sight, or Heat vision(or of the like)

Bio: Kite was abandoned as an infant for his hair. Red tips. That was a sign the boy would be an uncontrollable beast. Practically a demon. The Kitsukage are a benign race of shadow foxes that live in the forests. He grew up up eating meat, cooked, because the foxes were picky about things, and edible barks and foliage. He grew with them, growing strong and fast, to keep up with the other foxs he would usually play fight with. The Kitsukage taught all of the younglings the basics of nen. Often the young ones would practice with eachother, sparring carefully under the watchful of the Elder. Kite was always behind the other kitsukage. He tried hard, but all of the others were ever so gifted. Displeased with himself, he went out looking for something to eat. Beside a river, he went fishing with his makeshift spear. Resurfacing with 2 fish, he lit a fire. Kite roasted the fish on his spear, until they were nice and cooked. Fish still on the spear, he formed a nen knife to cut into the fish to see if they were done. The fish were nice and cooked through, so he went ahead and cut the fish's head off, still on the spear. Suddenly, his nen caught fire! The flaming nen ingulfed the entirety of his outer nen. Kite plundged quickly into the river, to find the flames not put out! With no other option, he performed Zetsu(shutting off ones outter aura, making ones aura non existant, and makes healing and resting move much more quickly). The flames extenguished along with his aura, and he climbed out of the murky water. Afraid his aura no longer worked he quickly released Zetsu, and found his aura normal leaving Kite scratching his head. What in the world just happened? he thought to himself. Quietly contemplating what had happened, he began snapping his fingers. snap, snap, snap. He felt heat between his fingers. Kite got curious and focused aura into his fingers, and snapped again. Flames leaped between his index finger and thumb, a little bigger then the average candle's flame. He focused a ball of aura in his palm, and then touched the flames to it. A small globe of fire rested juts above his hand. The flames started reaching up his arm, so he quickly shut off a small brim of area between his wrist and his forearm so the flames couldnt continue up his arm. Over the next few days, he continued expierementing with his new abilitys. Eventually the Kitsukage found out of his abilitys, and he was brought to the Elder. Much deliberation of what to do with Kite followed. Finally, the Elder and his advisors brought Kite into the room. "You must leave" the Elder said quickly after Kite entered. It left Kite dumbfounded as what to say next. "Kite, this isn't a banishment, but an opportunity! We want to send you to the Hunter's Examination. You would be a grand hunter." "Ok, so im not being punished?" Kite replied. "Good heavens, no. This is an ability most Kitsukage dream of! Take the test, and become all you can be." the Elder said with a large grin on his muzzle. a few days later "Welcome home, Kite" the Elder greeted Kite as a walked through the wooden gate. "How did you do m'boy?" the Elder asked with enthusiasm in his voice. "Well, to sum it up the test took only about 3 days. All of the applicants were eliminated, or dead by the 3rd day. With no one left to compete with, they passed me, 3 days prior to what the end of the exam would've been." Kite, and the Elder walked back to Kite's home, Kite filling the Elder in on a majority of the details. 15 minutes later, they arrived at Kite's frontgate. "I can't stay for long, I hope you know" Kite told the Elder. "Figured as much." the Elder said with a chuckle. Kite stayed much longer than he intended to, telling everyone at the village of the events at the exam that wished to hear, and even giving demonstrations, and the younglings lessons. Eventually, Kite left, off to track down an Ancient Kitsukage artifact, that had been stolen a century and a half ago.

Hmmm, elaborate on personality.

i think i fixed him up.

all right, good enough. You better use him right away with couragewielder, or you will taste the edge of my ruler.

*Approved*

NOT TEH RULA!! thanks btw(wow thats the easiest ive ever gotten a character approved... i must be getting better, or people are having more pitty on me for horrible writing skills ) ill get into combat as soon as CW starts the thread...

Well, it could have been better, but sometimes I'm not sure if my expectations are unrealistic. I get real into the character profiles I make. It's like an art form to me. But not to everyone else, so I tend to go easy and as long as they have enough for others to understand I'll approve it.