Bibu

Name: Bibu.

Age: 15.

Race: Wolf (who shapeshifts into a human form)

Sex: Female.

Hair Colour/Style: Her hair is a sandy blonde colour and it's never tied up. She prfers to let it run free.

Eye Colour: Her eyes are meant to be blue but due to an eye injury, she is blind in her left eye, which of course makes it a clouded colour.

Weight: 110 lbs

Height: 5' 4"

Weapon: Just a basic sword.

Strengths: Bibu can fight really well. She's talented in sword combat but she prefers to fight with her fists. Because of her keen sense of smell and hearing, It's harder for enimies to sneak up on her.

Weaknesses: Being blind in her left eye, Bibu can't exactly hit her
target everytime. Although they provide her with an advantage, her ears and nose are also the source of her weaknesses. She is very sensitive to sound and smell.

Skill/Magic: Bibu has the ability to shift into her "True Form" (wolf form)
Since she's really a wolf, Bibu is extremely agile and has advanced speed. She has strong musscels in her arms and legs which allow her to jump really high which is handy when she wants to confuse her opponant

Appearence: In her "True Form", Bibu has baige coloured fur that has white mixed in with it. Her eyes are two different colours, the one she is blind in, is clouded gray and her "good eye" is yellowish brown.
In her "Human Form", Bibu has sandy blonde hair that is always down. Her eyes again are two different colours. One is clouded grey and the other is a deep blue colour. She wears a green shirt, army-pattern combats and black and white sneakers. She's quite skinny.

Personality: Bibu has a pretty laid back personality but she can get aggresive. Her troubled past has made her quite violent and unpredictable so it's best to stay on her good side. If you can find it.

In battle, Bibu fights like a professinal. Her violent past has taught her how to stay alive during battle with an opponant twice her size.

She's a bit of a tomboy.

She can get a little bit claustrophobic at times and she's a little bit scared of the dark. She likes the colour green and she wears it all the time.

In everyday life, she acts like your typical 15-year-old girl except she has very violent mood swings. She can be friendly towards the people she knows but still pretty cruel. She has to get to know somebody before she treats them nicely. She doesn't usually associate with humans. (major trust issues) The idea of death doesn't scare her for she has seen what death really is and to her and other fighting dogs, Death is much better than the painful memories of the fighting ring.

Background: Ever since she was a "Pup", Bibu had been trained in the vicious bloodsport of dog fighting.
She was taken from her family just after she was born so she never knew her parents. She won every dog fight she was involved with.
Since pet "Dogs" believe that anything their masters say is law, Bibu never realized that killing other dogs was wrong so she did it without hesitation, untill she befriended a little Pitbull puppy.
The puppy was going to be used as a bait animal to help train Bibu. Bibu's owner instructed her to kill the puppy. Since the puppy was her friend, Bibu attempted to refuse but her owner viciously beat her in the side of her head (that's how she went blind). Knowing her owner could kill her if he wanted to, Bibu had no choice but to kill the puppy.
After she ripped the poor little thing apart, Bibu became so angry at her owner that she killed him. After that, she ran away, hoping to find a better life.

M'kay ... what does 5 stone mean?

The average height for a 15-year-old girl would be like ... 5' 4" (or 163 cm, depending on the system you use)? If you like that measurement you can use it, but I do need you to give an actual number for her height.

For strengths, would you say she's better with her fists than with her sword? If so, state it in this section.

You might want to include that since she is a wolf her senses are probably much more sensitive than a normal human's, and that's a strength as well as a weakness. It might make it more difficult to sneak up on her. It can alert her to danger. I would suggest considering speed and strength as well. Perhaps since she is actually an animal, she would be abnormally fast and agile for a human form.

Work on elaborating on those things and we'll talk again.

Ok, i've edited it a little.
Hope it's better now...

The same thing with weight as I needed with height, an actual number. Do you know the average weight or would you like me to give you one?

Originally Posted by Shrub

The same thing with weight as I needed with height, an actual number. Do you know the average weight or would you like me to give you one?

Give me one please

Well, depending on her body type (and since her appearance says she skinny), how about 100-120 lbs? If you would like something in the middle of that, I would suggest 110 lbs. That's actually lighter than the average teenage girl, but her appearance said she was skiiny, so she should be lighter, right?

Also, in her personality section:

Personality: Bibu has a pretty laid back personality but she can get aggresive. Her troubled past has made her quite violent and unpredictable so it's best to stay on her good side. If you can find it.
In battle, Bibu fights like a professinal. Her violent past has taught her how to stay alive during battle with an opponant twice her size.
She's a bit of a tomboy.
She can get a little bit claustrophobic at times and she's a little bit scared of the dark. She likes the colour green and she wears it all the time.
In everyday life, she acts like your typical 15-year-old girl except she has very violent mood swings. She can be friendly towards the people she knows but still pretty cruel. She has to get to know somebody before she treats them nicely. She doesn't usually associate with humans. (major trust issues) The idea of death doesn't scare her for she has seen what death really is and to her and other fighting dogs, Death is much better than the painful memories of the fighting ring.

Try spacing it like this, instead:

Personality: Bibu has a pretty laid back personality but she can get aggresive. Her troubled past has made her quite violent and unpredictable so it's best to stay on her good side. If you can find it.

In battle, Bibu fights like a professinal. Her violent past has taught her how to stay alive during battle with an opponant twice her size.

She's a bit of a tomboy.

She can get a little bit claustrophobic at times and she's a little bit scared of the dark. She likes the colour green and she wears it all the time.

In everyday life, she acts like your typical 15-year-old girl except she has very violent mood swings. She can be friendly towards the people she knows but still pretty cruel. She has to get to know somebody before she treats them nicely. She doesn't usually associate with humans. (major trust issues) The idea of death doesn't scare her for she has seen what death really is and to her and other fighting dogs, Death is much better than the painful memories of the fighting ring.

Don't have to, but it makes it easier to read.

That better or is there anything else I could change?

You might want to try the same spacing through all of your profile here. Bio and appearance. But really, you've got everything.

Oh, check out this thread. Just in case you would like to try it out to get you started.

Have fun n.n

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