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Reashiae Kirhatnao, Rose Princess of Kirisha

First Name: Reashiae (Re-ah-shie)

Last name: Kirhatnao (Kirh-atn-a-oh)

Age: 10

Race: Spirit/Rose Goddess

Sex: Female

Hair: Black with streaks of blue, long.

Eyes: dim red with slight green swirl (right eye) yellow (left eye)

Eyes- How they affect her: People don't make fun of her eyes much, but some people consider her weird due to it at times.
Eyes- How they became that way: She was born with eyes like that.

Weight: 90 lbs

Height: 4'5"

Weapon: Gem Sword
The Gem Sword's Powers-
Atsukami: Launches a series of beams from the sword into the enemy.
Tahei: It can form a shield around anyone for 3 minutes, then it shatters, sending glass at the enemy. (Enemy can also shatter the barrier if the barrier is attacked to much)
Zettuki: Can blind the enemy for a minute.

Strengths: Most water attacks do not effect her, unless its a rain/thunder hurricane. She has the ability to run really fast, about up to 130 MPH. She is extreamley nice, so its easy to make friends with her, and she is always willing to fight if she has to. If she doesn't really need to fight, then she stays out of it, which is another good thing about her, making it really hard for her to make unnecessary enemies during her journeys. She is also able to tell if fruits or plants are poisonous or not.

Weakness: Due to when she runs so fast, her vision can blur and she wont know where she was going, or she can run into something. It is really hard to stop when running so fast. Electricity and fire are her main weaknesses. She can't withstand them both because fire can burn her to a crisp, and electricity can zap her so she catches on fire, due to her having the element of flowers and earth, she is very weak when it comes to those things. Therefore she never heats up any of her food, and she never eats meat. All she eats are fruits. The way that the fire and electricity can hurt her is because she is a tangible spirit, meaning she can be touched, making it so unlike most spirits, she can be seen and touched.

Skills/Magic: The powers listed for the Gem Sword, can summon giant roots from plants to restrain the enemy for a short period of time by wrapping roots around their arms and legs and restrains them in the air. This can be avoided if you chop up the roots if you are fast enough. The roots are vulnerable to most fire and electric moves, but be careful using it if they have your friend tied up, they wont loosen until they are completely destroyed. Since they are pretty strong too, humans cant break them with their bare hands, they would need to cut them up with a sword, Stronger races meant for breaking roots would be able to break them though.

Appearance: She has long black hair with blue streaks in it, it covers her right eye. She wears a white dress made out of giant white rose pedals, and the dress does not dry or get messed up or torn. Her skin is perfectly smooth, but she is very pale due to her being a spirit.

Personality: She is kind, and willing to fight if urged to or attacked. She can not make unnecessary enemies due to her not getting involved in fights so often, and she is very scared when it comes to electric items, or fire. She is very courageous, and can't get her feelings hurt easily. When she is in battle, she is really shy at first but as the fight goes on and she actually starts getting hurt, she gets really annoyed and angry at the enemy and tries to kill the. Out of battles, She is nice and cute, but she always hides from people who look even the slightest bit suspicious, Therefore its sort of hard for her to make friends.

Biography-

Reashiae is the young rose princess of the kingdom called Kirisha. She is 4 years of age currently, and she loves roses, they are the only type of plant Reashiae was fond of, along with all fruit-growing plants. Although she lived a happy life for quite awhile, her kingdom was attacked by the kingdom’s most hated rivals, the Hirnaki.

Shortly after, Reashiae was asked to leave by her mother and father because they didn’t want her to die. That is what they regretted the most. She obediently listened to them, and ran far away from what was soon to be her kingdom if it weren’t for the Hirnaki. She ran away to a small town, known as Apacei, when she was 8 (before that she just was wandering in the wild). She stayed there for many days, hiding from the Hirnaki, and from anyone that would keep her in custody for running into territory not owned by her kingdom.

She was ran out of Apacei one day when it was raining and she had nowhere to stay. She was desperate, so she went into an inn. They knew who she was, and thought she came to take their town as part of her kingdom, so she was ran out by the citizens, and forced to live in the wild. There she stayed, until she died due to drowning in a flood that happened the same day she ran away from Apacei, but her spirit lived on.

She remained in that place, her rose-petal dress soaked, but not tattered. She knew she had to hide in a cave or something whenever there was a fire or thunder storm, and shortly after there was a hurricane that lasted 3 days, she stayed in a small cave, where she found many fruits growing, and fresh supply of water from a little stream of water that trickled into a larger puddle that was very deep, full of water. That supplied her and the plants with enough water, and after 3 days past, she left and continued to wander to what she hoped would be her new home.
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Old 02-11-2008, 06:12 PM
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Re: Reashiae Kirhatnao

Overall, Reashiae seems to be an interesting character. However, there is only one problem before I can approve her. The Personality and Appearence sections are a little lacking in content. Therefore, I suggest you add a few more points to each to flesh it out a little. Other then that, plesae state how long the roots can restrain the person.

I'll have another look when you fix these small problems.
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Old 02-12-2008, 06:19 PM
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Re: Reashiae Kirhatnao

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Overall, Reashiae seems to be an interesting character. However, there is only one problem before I can approve her. The Personality and Appearence sections are a little lacking in content. Therefore, I suggest you add a few more points to each to flesh it out a little. Other then that, plesae state how long the roots can restrain the person.

I'll have another look when you fix these small problems.
what should i add to Appearance and Personality though?
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what should i add to Appearance and Personality though?
Appearence: Tell the reader more about her unusual eyes. How do they effect people's opinion of her? How did they come to be those colours, etc?

Personality: How does she act in battles, or everyday life? How would she react to death? Stuff like that so the reader cna understand more, and ask less questions.
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Old 04-12-2008, 09:18 PM
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Re: Reashiae Kirhatnao

Tell me- is this better now?
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Old 04-14-2008, 03:42 PM
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Re: Reashiae Kirhatnao

Much. Still, I would like to know how strong those roots are. Could a normal human break them? Are they resistant to fire, or magic, etc?
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Re: Reashiae Kirhatnao

Fixed.
I hope I finally get this character approved O-O
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Re: Reashiae Kirhatnao

Good enough. ^_^

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