Magma

Ba Character.


Name: Magma.
Gender: Male.
Eye colour: Gray. (He is blind)
Hair colour: Black.
Height: 6’
Weight: 140 pounds.
Age: 26
Fighting style: Lai, Sonic Sword and Self taught.
Race: Mostly Human.

Weapon 1: Hidden sword.
Description: A sword hidden inside a cane that can be drawn at a moments notice. (Read and find out what else it can do)

Weapon 2: Hand gun.
Description: A powerful yet silent and concealable gun it can deliver an entire clip in an instant. (The gun can exorcize weak demons)

Weapon 3: Dragon sword. (Entai)
Description: A sword made from the fangs, claws and spikes of a mighty and terrible dragon that terrorized the world and died of natural causes and its fangs, claws and spikes where made into a powerful and evil sword. (The dragon was known as Entai the hellfire dragon)

Personality: He has a calm personality and is relaxed most of the time and has a slightly playful nature.

Strengths: Opponents that are sloppy and don’t keep there mouths shut and also opponents that make noisy movements.

Weaknesses: The opposite gender and opponents that seem trivial to him.

Abilities: High speed movement, super strength, super hearing and able to unload massive damage quickly. He is also able to sense aura and create pictures of his surroundings with what he hears.

Special Skills:
1. Hellfire Transformation. (Soul of Entai)
2. Paladin Blade summon. (Soul of “regular” sword)
3. Hellfire paladin transformation. (Paladin blade and Entai required)
4. Demon form. (instincts past there maximum required)

Special attacks:
1. One sword style: One Silver Moon. (Soul of his “regular” sword)
Description: Mist surrounds the opponent and rays of silver rain down on the enemy. (can only be used 3 times per day)
2. One sword style: One Demon Moon. (Soul of Entai)
Description: Blood red mist surrounds the opponent and fiery spikes rain down on the enemy. (can only be used once per day)
3. One sword style: Ancient Stone Pillar. (Soul of his “regular” sword)
Description: After concentrating energy the user strikes the ground and a massive stone pillar comes out of the ground sending the opponent back a fair distance causing little to no damage. (can only be used twice per day)
4. One sword style: Razor Hellfire Pillar. (Soul of Entai)
Description: After concentrating energy the user's sword heats up, the user then swings the sword sending a hellish pillar of fire blades towards the enemy and then explodes after contacting the enemy sending the blades flying, it also sends the opponent further away causing low ranged damage. (can only be used three times a week)
5. One sword style: Oni En. (Translation: demon flame/fire) (Soul of Hellfire transformation)
Description: Fire surrounds the user's blade and then slashes the opponent causing the opponent to be burned.( burn does not last long and this move can only be used twice a week)
6. Ultra Heat. (Shoots fire out of one hand)
Description: The user shoots fire from one of there hands and gives the user first degree burns. (can only be used once per 2 days)
7. Sonic Slash. (Soul of Sun Blade)
Description: A fast slashing attack that does not do much damage but the opponent is in a slight bit of pain after it hits. (can only be used once per day and is more effective against undead)
8. Sonic Torrent Slash. (soul of sonic sword style)
Description: A quick succession of multiple slashes. (can only be used 1 a week and causes damage to the user)
9. Incarceration Of Tartarus. (soul of demonic transformation)
Description: Spiked chains with a slowing poison fly out from one of the users hands and capture the opponent. (can be used in combination with ultra heat and can only be used once every week.
10. Forbidden Masters Technique: Destruction of Cerberus.
Description: A flaming dog appears and attacks the opponent and then explodes. (Can only be used once every 3 weeks)





THE STORY OF MAGMA.

The story starts when Magma was a little boy at the age of eight learning the skills of combat from his father and he was doing exceptionally well, until that fateful day when Magma’s village was attacked by evil creatures and Magma’s father being the only one that knew proper combat had to defend the village. During the battle Magma was attacked by a monster and it spewed acid on his eyes but the monster did not last long because Magma’s father ran it through and after the battle Magma’s father was fatally injured and soon passed away. Magma was now going blind and he took up his father’s gun and his own equipment and began to train, even in absolutely horrid weather he continued to train and even collapsed a few times from training and then when he was fifteen his sight long since gone he was prepared to fight the creatures that took his sight and his fathers life. He stood guard at the entrance to his village and he only had to wait a few hours and the creatures came and he said “I will annihilate you beasts!” and he took up his fathers gun and picked off six creatures and said “you creatures have no chance!” and after thirty minutes of combat Magma used the one sword technique known as Lai.

After some time he knew that he would not be able to win just by using Lai so he unsheathed his sword completely and with his sword in one and his sheath in the other he started to fight and fight and fight until only one creature remained and it said “Do you really think you can defeat me? The strongest creature in my class?” Magma just smirked. The creature was somehow offended by this and attacked and Magma said “I will succeed where my father failed! One Sword Style: One Silver Moon!” in an instant Magma was fifty feet behind the creature and after a minute of silence the creature burst into flames and nothing remained of it.

Magma had protected his village and he left on a quest for power to completely destroy those evil creatures and he knew it would not be easy, because nothing ever is. A day later when he got to a town he sensed an immense evil power that was calling him; it was begging him to obtain it the aura led to a well known weapons shop and when he stepped in the shop the shop keeper said “welcome to Sai’s weapons, what weapon do you plan on getting?” the shop keeper sounded feminine judging by voice. After a few seconds Magma said “I fallowed the voice of an evil power to this shop and it has only gotten louder” the shop keeper said “bull****, you just came here to hit on me, didn’t you?” Magma took off his sun glasses and said “I can not see because I am blind but I am sure you are beautiful” the shop keeper looked at his eyes and said “oh crap! I’m sorry!” Magma put his sunglasses back on. Then the shop keeper said “You said you where looking for something with an evil power that was calling you, right? Well there is only one sword in this shop that is like that, wait one moment please” the shop keeper locked the door and took Magma into the back room.

The shop keeper said “my name is Sheena for the record” Sheena grabbed a rather large chest and said “is the voice coming from here?” After concentrating Magma said “only is I was looking for a Holly Weapon, and my name is Magma for the record” Sheena was surprised that Magma was this skilled. Magma; walked in the direction of another chest and said “it’s in this one, and it has traps that are triggered upon the chests opening” but then suddenly the chest broke into thousands of pieces and a sword was hovering in the air emitting an enticing tone and Sheena with her mouth wide open and wondering how that happened and Magma grabbed the sword with his right hand and there was a great outburst of raw untamed power.

After the effects of the outburst of power where gone Magma had a tattoo of a Dragon on his right arm and a tattoo of field of hellfire and magma said “So, this is where you have been hiding sword of the hellfire dragon Entai” Sheena was shocked and in awe. Magma said “I will not let this power over-take me, ever!” and Sheena said “that sword is not for sale because it has to choose it’s owner and it already has, but why do you need such terrible destructive power anyway?” and Magma said “to completely annihilate the evil that terrorizes the world or at least send it for a long sleep” Sheena was afraid yet intrigued by Magma’s conviction. Then Sheena said “would you like me to join you on your quest?” there was an almost uncomfortable silence, a silence like someone had there tongue cut out then Magma said “it is your choice to make if you want to accompany me” Sheena had now joined Magma on his quest of annihilation.

They left that day with a fair amount of supplies and continued to the next town, when they got to the next town it was late at night and just then some evil creatures appeared from the ground and attacked. Magma drew Entai and said “one sword style: one demon moon!” the evil creatures where all sliced in two and then there bodies where absorbed by Entai and then Entai started pulsating and Magma sheathed Entai. Sheena saw a slight bit of discomfort in Magma’s face and said “are you alright? Are you not comfortable walking at night?” and Magma said “it’s not that, it’s just that Entai is pulsating and it is becoming hard to keep control over it, I think I should not use it for a while” Sheena agrees with Magma and they find an inn and can only afford one room.

When they got to the room Magma got a blanket and sat down in a corner and went to sleep and Sheena got to sleep in the bed, the next day Magma woke up before Sheena and was making breakfast and Sheena was surprised that Magma was cooking even though he was blind. Magma said “you better get dressed because breakfast is almost ready” Sheena blushed and wondered how he knew and thought what he did and Magma said “I can make pictures out of sound and use my ears as my eyes and you where a slight bit noisy” Sheena got dressed and was still slightly asleep. Magma had finished cooking breakfast and said “hope you enjoy what I made because I don’t cook all that much” Sheena and Magma started to eat and then Sheena said “maybe I should cook” and Magma said “I thought I could cook better then this…but apparently not” they finished breakfast and left to defeat evil some creatures.

Unfortunately they did not find any so they went back to the inn, after a few hours there was a knock on the door of the room Magma answered the door and when he opened it and he narrowly avoided a bullet fired from the person at the door. Magma immediately grabbed Sheena and there stuff and jumped out the window and started running, they ran out of the town and ran into a nearby forest, Sheena was injured by some glass and they where quickly fixed. After some time of wondering who it was that was targeting them even though there journey had only started a few days ago but right when they stopped thinking about why they where attacked at the inn they were attacked by evil creatures.

This time Sheena joined in the battle, Sheena and Magma fought hard but it seemed that there would be no end to the creatures and then Magma said “Ancient Stone Pillar” and the creatures where sent flying. Both left exhausted Sheena and Magma had to rest, after a few hours of rest Magma and Sheena continued to the next town witch was nearly deserted but then for no reason Magma collapsed and then Sheena noticed that he was hurt. Sheena started to drag Magma to what looked like an abandoned hospital and said “Magma, you owe me one!” When Sheena dragged Magma into the hospital she went to one of the rooms while still dragging Magma. After dressing Magma’s wounds Sheena began tending to herself and then Magma woke up and said “Sheena…we…must…get…out…of …here…now!!!” there was no time to ask why so Sheena and Magma ran out of the hospital and just continued running until they where 100 metres away from the entrance of the town.

After a few minutes of waiting there was a great amount of rumbling and then nothing but suddenly the ground that the town was on crumbled away and then exploded in a great fire and a figure of immense size appeared and it started to rampage around the surrounding area. Magma and Sheena knew that they had to stop this creature and so Sheena released the sword she was carrying but never used, and said “RISE, Silver Day!” Magma drew his “regular” sword and they both jumped into battle. After slashing, stabbing and shooting the creature was still going strong and so in light of this, Magma put his “regular” sword away and drew Entai and said “Razor Hellfire Pillar!” his strike proved effective against the monstrous creature. After 15 seconds the pillar exploded slicing the creature is various places but the creature was relentless in its attack and then Entai started to glow and pulsate, it was almost unbearable for Magma and Entai awakens and says “If you want to defeat this creature we must work together!” Sheena was Worried that Entai would take over Magma.

Magma agreed with Entai that they should work together and Entai said “Be prepared human because you are about to receive power like nothing else you have ever seen or heard of!” Entai started to glow and the ground surrounding Magma started to break apart and fly up in the air and Entai released an evil energy that surrounded and covered Magma’s entire body and with a massive flash of darkness the Hellfire transformation was complete. Magma was wondering what had happened and suddenly he felt a great surge of power, his power has doubled and he could see through his eyes, Magma was wondering why and Entai said “you can see because you are using my eyes, now lets take down this creature!” Magma looked at Sheena and said “you are so beautiful” Sheena blushed and Entai said “Dammit mortal! Stop flirting and start fighting!” and so Magma, with his new found powers he said “Oni En!” and burned the creature to ash. The battle was over and Entai dissolved the Hellfire transformation and said “I need to rest now mortal, so do not remove me from my scabbard or the consequences will be dire!” Magma, Sheena and the freshly awakened Entai proceeded to the next town.

When they got to the town witch was called The town of peace Sheena and Magma decided to look for an inn in order to rest they found an inn and got a room then Sheena said “back there, you said I looked beautiful, did you really mean it?” Magma said “yes I did, that fact still has not changed, and I think I am falling in love with you” Sheena blushed and then smiled. After a few minutes of rather awkward silence Sheena said “I knew you would end up hitting on me, but strangely I don’t mind, but don’t hit on me to much or I will kick you in the ass!” Magma laughed and said “ok, I won’t hit on you to much.


They both slept soundly until early in the morning, Entai felt the presence of demons and woke Magma and Sheena up and said “there are demons in this town and they are closer then you think, and Magma you are no longer completely human” Magma could not believe what Entai said about him not being completely human. Sheena and Magma gathered there stuff and left but before they could leave the inn the inn keeper stopped them and said “did you know young lady that there is an evil sword and a demon among you?” Sheena said “yes I do but the sword chose its master and it has enormous power and I am assuming that after the last battle me and my companion fought I am not surprised that he is not part demon” the old inn keeper looked at Magma and said “the road ahead is troublesome indeed” just then there was banging on the door. A male voice said “inn keeper, come quickly! There are some demons in the town square, we need you to exorcize them immediately” the inn keeper said “ok, but I am bringing some travelers with me” Magma and Sheena looked at each other and Entai said “we will take care of the demons” and Magma said “aren’t you supposed to be an evil sword?” and Entai said “my goal is yours! Now lets not waste any time, and I am still not back up to full strength yet so do not use me yet” the inn keeper, Sheena and Magma along with Entai went to the town square. When they reached the town square they saw two demons and one was really weak so Magma took out his father’s handgun and shot the weakest and the instant it was hit by the bullet it vaporized, seeing this the other demon grew stronger and stronger and Magma drew his “regular” sword and in an instant was behind the second demon and sliced off its left arm and then its legs and finally its head. Magma put his gun and sword away and walked towards Sheena and said “we have to go” Magma and Sheena continued there journey for many years and Magma and Sheena have slayed a great amount of demons and bandits.

Magma and Sheena are walking through the streets of a kingdom that has been controlled by a demon obsessed with control and punctuality; Magma and Sheena intend to defeat this demon that is terrorizing that particular kingdom because strange things have been happening including disappearances. Magma and Sheena are well known for there skills in the art of combat and just then Entai said “demons are near, we must be careful” Sheena and Magma agreed with Entai and then Sheena and Magma decided to go on a date. Magma and Sheena went to a small outdoor restaurant but just when they sat down to in one of the tables some people where running for there lives from a battalion of demons but they where only weak demons, just then the demons started attacking the people in that kingdom, Magma was also attacked but he quickly blocked with his “regular sword” and just as quickly as he blocked he countered and the demon was dead and Sheena said “so much for our date” Sheena also joined in the battle that had just erupted. Sheena and Magma made short work of the battalion of demons but they felt like they where being watched so they ran to a safe place and discussed what they should do next.

While discussing what they should do about the demon problem in this kingdom some freedom fighters saw Sheena and Magma and they where spying on them and Magma said “I believe you have heard enough of our little plan so come out of your hiding spot please” the freedom fighters showed themselves to Magma and Sheena and one of them said “Is there any more room in your plan?” Sheena and Magma smiled and said “yes, but not much” the freedom fighters looked happy that there was a possibility that they would join forces. Then Entai said “If you freedom fighters intend to fight with us then you intend to die because the demons guarding the castle and much more powerful then the demons that where killing people just one hour ago” Then Magma said “Entai, please be quiet, I think you are scaring the freedom fighters” one of the freedom fighters said “run away! It’s a talking sword!” but that person did not get far because he tripped on some debris. After a couple devising a new plan they waited for night and then went to the castle but there was something odd about the castle because there was no night-watch but this did not stop the plan when they breached the castle wall they saw that they where expected because many demons where waiting for them inside the castle wall.

Then a familiar voice said “Ah Magma, it has been years since I last saw you, when was it? Oh yeah, me and my solders attacked your village, do you remember who I am?” and Magma said “yes, I remember you, how did you enjoy the ass kicking I gave you?” and then the demon said “attack!!!” the battle raged though the night both side suffering casualties the battle lasted until noon the next day and was ended when Magma used his Hellfire Transformation and destroyed the demon or so he thought, the demon regained its form and began to rune away and said “you are worthy to know my name, it is Zane” Magma was angry. There was no point in continuing the assault on the castle because they had dead and wounded to take care of, when they got to there hiding spot they all needed to rest.

When they where finished resting Magma and Sheena left to attack the castle again this time they met with little resistance and slayed the demon that was ruling the kingdom with an evil grip, Magma and Sheena had freed that kingdom and just as quickly as they came they had left. Sheena was feeling a little bit angry and said “every single time we decide to have a date something always seems to ruin it! For instance the pair of streaking guys, I almost threw up!” and Magma said “I agree that when ever we have a date that it gets ruined by some weird act of events like the time you just mentioned and at that moment I was happy to be blind because if I was not I would have gone blind” and Sheena said “lets have another date this time behind closed doors” and then Entai interjected “*gasp* are you two really going to have…” Entai was interrupted by Sheena “like it’s any of your business! And no, that was not my intention” Magma was not moving and when Sheena went to see what was wrong it looked like he was frozen by something until he said “I hear splashing and feminine voices” Sheena punched him in the face and Magma was in an extreme amount of pain.

When Sheena and Magma got to the next town they went to the inn got a room and Sheena went out to buy some supplies but a thief tried taking her money and she punched the thief so hard that they went flying through the air, When Sheena got back to the inn her and Magma started to make preparations for there date. During there date hey talked about there life experiences until the thief that Sheena punched busted down the door and Magma said “pardon me but I think you should leave thief, while you still can” and Entai said “UH-OH SHE’S GOING TO GO BERSERK!!! RUNAWAY!!!” and Sheena said “every single time, every single F****** time I want to have a date with Magma it always gets ruined by one thing or another! And thief, if you intend on living you’d better leave before I count to 5” the thief instantly left and while leaving the thief also fixed the door and put a “do not disturb” sign on the door. There was no doubt that Sheena was angry and right when Magma and Entai thought she was going to start yelling Sheena said “Lets continue our date Magma” and somehow Magma and Sheena’s date got indecent and the next morning Sheena asked what happened last night because she could not remember and Entai said “well…umm…uhh…to put it lightly you and Magma kept the people in the neighbouring rooms up until you both fell asleep” Sheena could not understand what Entai just said and Entai said “since you don’t understand I’ll just say this: the inn keeper will have to burn the bedding” Sheena blushed and woke up Magma and he said “our first successful date was great and I wonder what we are going to do now” Sheena and Magma both got dressed and decided to put a stop to the constantly rising crime rate.

By the end of that day Magma and Sheena had caught almost half of the criminals in the town and they left that town because there where no demons to slay and continued on there journey and Entai suddenly said “Ha! I knew you two would end up having…” Magma and Sheena interrupted Entai and said “just shut up about it already!” when they got to the next town it was being attacked by demons and so Sheena and Magma decided to fight off the demons, Slashing, stabbing, punching, kicking and shooting the demons in one full hour all the demons that where attacking the town where dead. Sheena and Magma started to look for people that survived the attack but no one was left alive except for a small kitten that was hurt, Sheena picked up the kitten and put a bandage on the kitten’s injury and the kitten fell asleep in Sheena’s arms The town that they where in was in shambles so they left with the kitten to a nearby town and the first place they looked for was the animal doctors place. When they found the animal doctors place they went in and the receptionist said “welcome to the animal hospital, do you have an animal that needs medical attention?” Sheena said “yes we do, the kitten I am holding got hurt and I put a little bandage on its leg but I think it needs further medical attention” the receptionist said “ok, just wait over there please” After half an hour of waiting a man in a white coat came into the waiting room and said “come with me you two, and bring the kitten” Sheena and Magma fallowed the man and they entered a room and the man said “put the kitten on the table” Sheena put the kitten on the table and the man said “what happened to the kitten?” and Sheena said “it has a cut on its leg and so I put a small bandage on it” the man removed the bandage and said “the cut is not to big but the kitten is going to need a couple of stitches” after the man grabbed a needle and thread and started to sew up the cut on the kittens leg. After the man was finished stitching the kitten’s leg he put a bandage on the kitten’s leg and the kitten yawned and was still sleeping Sheena, Magma and the kitten left the animal hospital and went to the inn and got a room.

Sheena was gazing at the now awake and purring kitten and Magma said “are you thinking of a name for the kitten? Or just looking at it and hoping that it will talk and be nowhere near as evil as Entai?” and Entai said “Hey! I do what I am told…well most of the time anyway” and Sheena said “I think I am going to name this kitten…” and then the kitten said “I already have a name you know, and thank you for picking me up out of that absolutely dreadful place and my name is Bob” and Sheena said “wow…right now I don’t think anything can surprise me now…except if Magma’s cooking suddenly tasted better” and Magma said “lunchtime!” Sheena was surprised yet again because Magma’s cooking was good after they where finished eating Sheena said “I am going to go lay down now because if there are anymore surprises I am going to fall down” that night they all slept soundly and this had been one of the few nights of peace that Magma and Sheena have had in the last six years.

When Sheena woke up she noticed that her stomach was slightly larger then yesterday, she went to the bathroom and wondered why when suddenly she realized that she must be…Sheena screamed in disbelief and Magma hearing this wondered what was wrong and as Sheena walked out of the bathroom Magma said “why did you scream?” and Sheena said “I think you are going to be a daddy, so, congratulations” Magma fell on the floor with his mouth wide open and said “so this is how my dad felt when my mom said she was pregnant, it’s a good feeling, but one you can never prepare for, and I can’t get up right now” there was a knock on the door and the voice of the inn keeper said “what’s all the screaming about? Did someone die?” and Sheena thinking quickly said “come in and I will tell you, but wait until I am decent please” after a few minutes Sheena let the inn keeper in the room and told them the good news and the inn keeper said “who’s the father?” and Sheena pointed to Magma who is laying on the floor and Magma said “sorry I can’t greet you in a polite way right now but it seems as though my legs have given out because of the happy shock” and the inn keeper said “so when did you two…you know” and Sheena said “about two months ago” Magma was regaining control over his lags and stood up. The inn keeper asked many questions and one of them was “are you two married” and of Corse the answer was no and the inn keeper told them that there is a place in town to get married and that there is a small fee. *Me: I am skipping the wedding part because I can’t seem to figure out what to write.* After the wedding Magma and Sheena decided to take a well deserved break from slaying demons and taking down troublesome crime syndicates and just relax for a month After that month was complete they started on there journey again.

Magma, Sheena and Bob the kitten had to take rests more often they normally would because Sheena was walking for two and Magma was happier then he has ever been in his life so far. Suddenly a demon appeared, the demon said “if that women is pregnant I will not attack or harm her in any way, in witch case if she is I will have to settle for fighting you, blind one” and Magma said “yes, she is pregnant and if you think me being blind is a disadvantage, then you thought wrong” the demon said “I did not think that you being blind would give me any advantage at all, if anything this fight should be interesting” Magma and the demon where prepared to fight each other. When the battle began Magma said “let’s not use our full destructive might because of all the living things in this area” the demon agreed to what Magma said and they both fought and fought and Magma said “I have not had a fight this good since the time I defended my village for a small army of demons” he demon said “I can not continue because my strength is near it’s limit and I need some strength to get home so, I guess this is goodbye, let us meet again one day, by the way my name is Sai” and Magma said “my name is Magma and I also hope we meet again” Sheena, Magma and Bob continued to the next town after there little break.

When Magma, Sheena and Bob got to the next town they where greeted by a guard and Magma said “if there is a demon named Sai that comes to this town he is a friend and he will not fight anyone unless they are a threat to him, and he does not battle to the death or until badly wounded” the guard spread the news about Sai the friendly demon and Magma, Sheena and Bob went to the inn and got a room like always and Sheena said “it feels good to relax” and Magma said “I agree, and I wonder if it’s going to be a boy or a girl or possibly twins or more…” Sheena interrupted Magma and said “stop that, because whenever you talk about me having more then one baby at once I just think of all the pain that having that baby will cause me” and Magma being clueless said “wait a second…how does the baby come out? And I have an excuse for not knowing and that is my dad died when I was eight and I never knew my mom” so Sheena decided to tell Magma how a baby gets out. Magma was shocked at this but knew that the baby had to come out somewhere.

Sheena and Magma along with Bob the talking kitten stayed in that town for a few days and there was a knock on the door and a voice that said “Sai is at the gate and he is wounded” Magma Sheena and Bob went to the gated to see Sai and he had quite a few arrows in his back and left arm and when Magma and Sheena got there Sai said “please save my family” Magma agreed to save Sai’s family and Entai said “since you wont let Sheena fight I guess that you are going alone” and Magma said “Sheena take care, I am going to save Sai’s family” Magma ran off in search of Sai’s family. When Magma got to Sai’s house it was in Shambles, windows and doors where broken and there was a hole in the wall, Magma felt that there was a demon near his position and Magma said “please come out, Sai asked me to help” a little demon came out of the nearly destroyed house and the little demon said “are you going to save my family?” and Magma said “yes, I am going to save your family, but right we are both in danger” and Entai said “there are rather tough demons around us Magma” Magma was thinking of what to do and he got an idea.

Magma drew Entai and used the Hellfire transformation he picked up the little demon and quickly rant back to town and dropped the little demon off at the gate and ran off to save the rest of Sai’s family but when Magma got to the place where they where being held there where strong demons everywhere and so Magma began fighting and when the demons surrounded him Magma said “Oni En!” and spun around setting all the demons attacking him on fire and after a minute the demons where nothing but ash and Magma transformed back into his normal state and freed Sai’s family and took them back to the town and Sai was not doing to well because Sai’s left arm was badly infected and so it had to be amputated. Sai thanked Magma for saving his family and also thanked Sheena for keeping him company that night Sheena and Magma where happy that they could help someone and the next morning they left that town and continued for the next town like always. After each town they went to they gained more and more friends and when “that” time came Magma was freaking out so much that he was running around the room and smashed into a wall and fell over.

The Doctor was happy that Magma had finally stopped yelling, Magma got up off the floor and the doctor said “congratulations, it’s a girl, what are you two going to name her?” Sheena and Magma thought about it and Sheena said “Leena, her name will be Leena” the doctor handed Leena to Sheena and saw that Leena had deep red eyes. The doctor was happy that he had delivered another baby, Bob had never seen a baby and started to sniff Leena and when Leena yawned Bob jumped away and everyone except for Bob and Leena where laughing the next day Leena was sleeping and Magma and Sheena continued on to the next town but on the way a demon that looked a lot like a giant made out of wood jumped out of the forest and it said “attempt to pass and perish” and Magma said “look, we don’t have time for this so movie out of the way, I do not want to destroy you” the demon attacked and Magma said “Ultra Heat!” and burned the wood demon to ash.

Sheena and Magma continued to the next town without any problems when they got to the next town it was being raided by demons but something weird was happening with Leena, she started floating and with one glance at the demons they all suddenly vanished and Leena returned to Sheena’s arms and went to sleep. Magma and Sheena Where wondering how that happened, the town was slightly destroyed and there where corpses lying on the ground as they walked through the streets some in a building opened a window and said “it’s not safe outside right now! Run away!” just then the corpses started to rise from the ground and magma drew his “regular” sword and said “Rise Sun Blade!” Magma’s sword turned into an ancient Paladins blade made of gold infused with magical light.

Sheena was amazed that Magma had something like that and then the zombies started attacking Sheena jumped onto building’s roof in order to keep Leena safe, Magma started slashing the zombies heads off and it appeared that there was no end to the zombies and then Magma said “Paladin Blade Outburst!” Magma stabbed the ground with the Paladin blade and an enormous dome of energy incinerated the zombies after the zombies where gone Sheena got off of the roof of the building she was on and said “that was nearly unbelievable, and you came into possession of an ancient weapon and did not tell me, why? Why did you not tell me?” and Magma said “well the truth is I did not know that I had a Paladin weapon” the door to the building that the person was yelling out the window was in opened and a man walked out and said “are…are they gone?” Magma and Sheena nodded the man was relieved and said “you would not believe how many times zombies come here” Magma and Sheena where surprised that zombies would attack one area so much.

Magma and Sheena had no time to get to the bottom of this, so they asked what was causing the large amount of zombies and they where told that a zombie maker was behind it and so Magma went to the location of the zombie maker and destroyed it. After Magma did this Sheena and him left for the next town, when they got to the next town they got a room at the inn and Leena was being active and so Sheena and Magma decided to see what Leena would do, Leena was crawling around the room and was also looking at everything in the room, in the fallowing days Leena’s intelligence seemed to grow at a rate not thought possible.

Leena’s powers also grew with her intelligence, after about a month at the inn Leena had developed the ability to move items at will to a certain extent, Magma and Sheena where amazed at how quickly that there daughter was developing powers so quickly, one day when Sheena and Magma where making some food leaving Entai and Bob to watch Leena, and then Entai said “something is going in with Leena because this weird force field just appeared around her” Sheena went to look and then suddenly Sheena heard a voice “Don’t worry I am ok” Sheena looked around and said “did you two hear a voice?” Sheena heard the voice again “I am communicating to you through my powers since I am to young for proper speech” Sheena went back to helping Magma make the food and when it was ready they put the food on the table and Leena started floating towards the table. When Leena go to the table the food that was put on the table for Leena was lifted up, crushed into a liquid and was taken into the force field and Leena drank the liquid food.

When they where all finished eating Leena started a conversation with Magma and Sheena after a lengthy conversation there was a knock on the door and Leena floated into Sheena’s arms and Magma opened the door, it was the inn keeper and the inn keeper said “I have heard of what you and your wife can do, and so I ask your help, my friend has been kidnapped by demons” Magma thought for a moment and said “I can not help you but right now but my cat Bob can, and do not be fooled by his appearance he is very skilled in combat” the inn keeper trusted Magma and Bob went to save the inn keepers friend. Magma, Sheena and Leena decided to relax for a little while but Magma go a little restless and decided to work out for a few hours and then Magma said “Leena I wish I could see how beautiful you are right now” and Leena using a psychic connection said “why can’t you see?” and Magma said “I have been blind since I was eight” Leena was shocked that her father could not see and after another conversation Leena knew what had happened before, when and after her parents met and of course some parts where left out.

A few minutes after the conversation they heard some scratching on the door and Magma opened the door and Bob came in and he said “it took a while but I got her friend back, and man I am tired” Magma was glad that Bob was ok. By the time that Bob had returned it was starting to get late so Magma and Sheena put Leena in bed. She went to sleep and Sheena said “so, what are we going to do now? I mean we have been doing nothing but living our lives as close to normal as we can get for the past three months, what of our skills have diminished?” and Magma said “doubt diminishes skills, but over confidence can have the same effect as doubt. In the morning we will say goodbye to our friends here and go to the next place that has a problem with evil demons” he next morning they did what they said they would and left for the next town but halfway to the next town some thieves stopped them from passing and the head thief said “give us all your cash or die!” and Sheena said “hey Magma, he’s threatening us with death…hey that guy over there looks familiar, now where have I seen him before? Oh-well since we do not plan on giving up our cash or anything else I guess we will have to kill them” and Magma said “come on Sheena, we both know that these petty and diminutive thieves can’t kill us, so why kill them?” and Sheena said “ok but if they attack we are killing them” the thieves where wondering what “diminutive” meant until one of the that had a dictionary said “diminutive: small, tiny or lacking in size”.

Sheena said “well what do you know, one of them has a brain after all” and Magma said “Sheena why are you antagonizing them?” and Sheena said “I want to see how far I can push them before they get so pissed that they attack, and why are you a kill-joy?” and magma said “me? A kill-joy? Who was the one who said relax and enjoy your self?” the head thief said “not that it’s any of our business but, what are you two arguing about?” Magma and Sheena both said “WE ARE NOT ARGUING AND SHUT THE F*** UP WE ARE TALKING OVER HERE!” and the head thief said very quietly “oh yeah, they are definitely arguing” and Sheena said “we don’t even snuggle anymore” and Magma said “we snuggle all the time but not as intimately as we used to” all this arguing woke up Leena, Leena levitated sticks off the ground and after some careful placement there was a levitating sentence that read “please be quiet I am trying to get some more sleep” so Sheena and Magma stopped arguing and the thieves where wondering how the sticks could have levitated into a certain order to make a word, while the thieves where wondering how that could happen Magma and Sheena escaped from the thieves who most of witch had little to no brain.

When Sheena and Magma got to the gate of the next town they saw a guard and the guard said “stop, there is reason to believe that you two are demons” and Magma said “Sheena is human and I am only slightly part demon” just then the thieves that they escaped from attacked them and Magma said “ok, now we can kill these stupid thieves” but just when Magma and Sheena drew there swords they felt an ominous blood lust and killer intent, Magma and Sheena where looking around and trying to find any abnormalities in the surrounding forest and the head thief said “what is it?” and Magma said “it is almost impossible to tell, Leena do you think you can find what gave off that blood lust and killer intent?” before Leena could find out what was giving off those two things they where attacked by a demon that they have not seen before. Magma said “stay back Sheena so you can protect Leena” the demon attacked and Magma blocked and countered that attacks and said “Rise Sun Blade” and with a flash of golden light Magma had summoned his paladin blade and said “Sonic Slash!” and cut the demon in two.

The guard was astonished that someone had an ancient paladin blade and that someone that is so laid-back could beat a demon, and Magma said “looks can be deceiving and mistakes like that can end up in death” the guard let Sheena and Magma pass but not the thieves Right after they enter the town they see a building with a sign that says “hone your skills and make them sharp” Sheena and Magma thought about going to that place and the next thing they knew they where inside and they where taking turns sharpening there skills by the end of the day Sheena and Magma have both sharpened there skills to the point where it would be pointless (No pun intended) to train them there anymore, so they got a room at one of the inns that are in town and went to sleep but not before having a shower, the next morning Magma was already awake and was holding a weirdly shaped small stone figure that was left on the table and when Sheena and Leena woke up Magma said “did you two sleep well?” and Sheena said “I slept well, and I’ll be right back” Leena with her deep red eyes stared at her father or rather the object that he was holding.

When Sheena came out of the bathroom (note: Sheena got dressed immediately after she got out of bed) Magma said “what should we do now that our skills have been re-sharpened besides continue our quest? And by the way Leena can read minds now and find out certain dates like birthdays for example, Leena, what is your mother’s birthday?” there was a writing tool and a piece of paper on the table, using her powers Leena wrote down a date and Sheena said “wow I had almost forgotten that my birthday was in a month” and Magma said “my birthday is also in one months time” Leena made a little giggle to signify that she was happy. Magma was still staring at the stone figure and said “this figure seems familiar, what do you think of this Sheena?” Sheena looked at the figure and said “there is some writing on the bottom; it says “the warrior of peace, from the village of the Storm, tragically died from heavy wounds after combat” hmm what could this mean” suddenly Magma started to cry and said “my father was called the warrior of peace, but he died when I was eight” the statue began to shake violently and then it broke into pieces, there was something inside it, it was a note and Magma said “Sheena it looks like it is a note, please read it to me” Sheena read Magma the note and Magma felt at ease and more calm.

Then Sheena whispered into Magma’s ear saying quite a few things and one of them was what they would do one there birthday and Magma said “you do realize that we have a child now, right? I mean if she sees…she might be scared for life” and Sheena said “your right but we can always tell her to stay in bed and to stay sleeping until morning” and Magma said “umm do you think that will work?” and Sheena said “aww come one don’t worry to much you’ll end up making yourself sick” and Leena said through psychic messages “you two plan on getting intimate on your birthday, am I right? Or am I right?” and Magma said “oh great now she has developed a sense of smugness” and Leena threw something at Magma’s head and he said “OW! Leena…please don’t do that again because it hurts” and Sheena said “you are to young for a spanking so I’ll just use some stern words, Leena do not throw anything at anyone or anything unless necessary or I will punish you by making you eat food that tastes bad” Leena started to cower in fear of the promise made by her mother.

After what seemed like an hour Magma and Sheena made some food after they all had something to eat they left for the next town but right when they where about to leave a demon of rather large scale attacked the town and Magma said “we don’t have time for this but we have no choice but to defeat that demon” Magma summoned his paladin blade and said “hellfire paladin transformation” Magma was suddenly surrounded by the forces of light and darkness and then it covered his entire body. Magma was angry that the demon attacked a populated town and then Magma jumped toward the demon and slashed and stabbed and then Magma said “Oni En!” and burned the demon to a crisp and then said “Sonic Slash” and destroyed the demon. When Magma got back to Sheena he had turned back to normal and they both continued to the next town. When they got about halfway to the next town people where running from what appeared to be someone that was clearly homicidal, When they came closer and closer someone said “are you two nuts?! If you go near him he WILL kill…” just as he was finishing what he was saying he was shot in the back of the head with an arrow and Sheena said “he was not done talking to us, and now what do you have to say for yourself? What is your reason for the killings you have done?” the man said “I only kill those that have killed others so I can finally forget what happened to my family” and Magma said “the way you are going about it is all wrong, you need to use you strength for something that is good, not evil, me and my wife both bare the heavy weight of sin, and we keep on going, and the number of demons and evil people we have killed all together is 10,572 about a 100th of those where evil people, and that does not include the 128 demons that our daughter killed” the man was surprised at the number of demons and evil people that they have killed and said “umm did that baby really kill 128 demons?” and Magma said “well we don’t know what really happened to them but they went somewhere because they just disappeared” the man started to emit an aura that was nothing but pure rage, anger, hatred and raw power.

Then the man said “I can not let you three go unharmed because you have all heavily sinned and so I must destroy you three” and Sheena said “you do not know the true weight of your sins and so” Sheena concentrated for a moment and said “weight of sin!” just then an enormous weight appeared over the mans head and he was struggling to keep it from crushing him and Sheena said “if you sin to much the weight will compress and become much more heavy, I will stop my attack if you put an end to your evil ways and give up on your path of revenge and redemption” just then the man yelled out and the weight shattered and said “I can only give up my evil ways and redemption but not my revenge, because there is a certain someone THAT I MUST KILL! And in order to do that I must…I must not give up my vengeance!!!” just then Magma sensed a powerful force coming from that man and said “Sheena, this is getting far to dangerous, we must run and fight at a different time” just then the man said “my name is Devi, fear me!”.

Just then when Devi lost his concentration for just a moment Magma, Sheena, Leena and Bob where two miles away. They where tired from meeting Devi and when they got to the next town the guard said “hold it right there, if you plan on entering this town we must confirm your identities to avoid confusion” and Magma said “we really don’t have time for that because it will take you literally years to confirm our identities, and we are really…” Magma, Sheena and Bob collapsed from exhaustion, when they woke up they where in a hospital and there hands where bound. Magma said “so, where is my wife and baby girl?” a man in the room said “your wife is resting and your baby is with your wife” and Magma said “why are my hands bound? And where is my equipment? And also why am I wearing something so…so…breezy?” the man said “your hands being bound and your equipment being taken and locked up was a necessary precaution. The reason why you are wearing something so breezy is because you had some rather serious wounds, and I am curious about the tattoo on your right arm”. Magma said “it was years ago when I first met my wife, back then she was working in a sword shop and right when I entered the town she was in I heard a voice that said “come to me, release me from my slumber” and also encountered an evil aura and I fallowed it to the sword shop. When I got there I talked to the shop keeper and when I said “I sensed an evil aura and fallowed it here” she closed shop and closed the windows and took me to the back room and brought out a chest containing a holy sword and I said “this sword gives off a similar aura but it is different” so I went to another chest and it suddenly broke apart and the sword that has been calling me was floating there and I said “so this is where you have been hiding Entai. The hellfire dragon” then when I took hold of Entai the tattoo appeared on my right arm and I said “I will not be overtaken by Entai” and ever since then I have known my wife and my demon sword Entai” the man was astonished by the story that has just been told and then Magma said “if you thought that mere rope would keep me restrained then you thought wrong, Ultra Heat!” Magma had burned the ropes that where bounding him and said “that’s better and by the way I have been blind since I was eight” the man was frozen in shock and awe.

Magma quickly found and put on his clothes and went to find his equipment, his equipment was being guarded by five solders and so Magma showed himself to the solders and said “please step aside or I will be forced to harm you” the solders took up a defensive stance and said “none shall pass” and Magma said “have it your way” Magma suddenly disappeared and then appeared behind the guards and before a word could be said Magma had knocked them out and had taken his own and Sheena’s equipment. Magma quickly found Sheena and Leena and quickly untied Sheena and gave her back her equipment and said “this town is crazy, we must get out of here” Magma and Sheena had to fight there way out of the town Then they continued on to the next town. When they where a third of the way to the next town they had to stop and rest, Sheena punched and said “dammit! Those *******s! Restraining us and dressing us up in such breezy and exposing clothing, if I ever get my hands on the person behind this I will tear them apart!” and Magma said “Sheena, is it ok if I hold Leena for a while?”.

Sheena let Magma hold Leena and a few minutes past and then a battalion of solders came marching up the road from the direction that they had just came from and one of the solders said “it’s them!, get them and make them pay!”. An arrow was shot at Magma and then his instincts took over and said “you can put me in danger, but never my friends and family!!!” Magma began to glow with ferocity and then his instincts broke free and his demon DNA changed his body and his demonic form was shown for all to see, with great and terrifying wings he flew up into the air and said “prepare yourselves, for you are the ones that can not be forgiven” with a glance Magma set the solders armor ablaze making them remove there armor and Sheena said “Magma! Stop this immediately! They are not evil, if you kill them your sin will grow to the point where it will change you forever and you will be lost and then I won’t be able to help you” and Magma said “Ok, I won’t kill them or hurt them” Magma then landed on the ground and was groaning in pain and said “Sheena take the baby, I might not be able to control myself in this form because of my instincts are far past there maximum limit” Sheena took Leena and told the solders that this is the first time that this has happened and that they should run away.

After an hour past of fighting for control of his instincts he had lost and then Devi appeared out of nowhere and said “Magma, that is your name right? Don’t give up, keep on fighting, because if you give up and let the demon part assume control of your body, I might have to kill you, and I doubt that your wife and baby would like that” Magma started to fight for control again and this time he regained control and was out cold and Devi said “he should be fine at least if nothing makes him use his instincts to the point where he goes mad like that. Until he can control his inner demon I will be traveling with you” and Sheena said “oh, right, a mass-murderer joining a family on a quest to destroy evil, that sounds great” and Devi said “it is either Magma living or losing himself entirely, you choose” and Sheena said “alright but if you do anything to Leena, me or Magma that is not beneficial I will use your sin against you” Devi and Sheena carried Magma to the next town and found an inn and got a room and put Magma on the bed and Devi said “I am going to go get some things that should help Magma and I only hope that I can get back before he wakes up because the stuff I am getting is rather gross” Devi left on his task to get the necessary stuff to help Magma.

A few hours later Devi returned with the stuff needed to help and said “I was able to get everything, but he will need to battle his inner demon in order to control his new found power” days pass after administering the special ingredients to Magma. One day Magma woke up and said “my body feels like it got hit by a giant boulder, what happened? Where am I? And what smells like stinky feet?” and Sheena said “you went nuts when your demon DNA awakened and you are at an inn and YOU smell like stinky feet because it has been a few days since you where rendered unconscious” and Devi helped me carry you to this town and Devi also saved your life” Devi entered the room and said “so, your awake, I see you are doing much better and you are probably thinking that Sheena and Leena would be better off with you not in the picture, but that is not true because they both care about you very much. I helped return you to normal and gave you the power to control your demon DNA because I don’t want another massacre like the one five hundred years ago when I was just a boy, I was badly injured and a demon was passing by, the demon knew that I had a purpose and a destiny in life so the demon asked me if I wanted to live and I said yes, the demon sacrificed its own life in order to save me and then about ten years later the demon DNA awakened and…I lost control of myself and slaughtered half a country including my entire family and also the one I loved” Magma and Sheena where almost brought to tears by this and Magma said “so that’s why your sin can not kill you Devi, it was not your fault that half a country was slaughtered and it was not anyone else’s either” and then Sheena said “Devi, mine and Magma’s birthday is in three weeks, would you like to come?” and Devi said “yes I would, what do you have planned?” and Sheena said “we both have something planned but we are not going to tell each other” they spent the next three weeks preparing for the party and when the date of the party came Sheena got Magma a new pair of sunglasses and an armored sleeve for his right arm and Magma got Sheena a new shirt and an armored chest plate and Devi got them both matching hats.

As the night progressed Leena fell asleep and Sheena put her on a small bed and then Devi said “well, it’s getting a bit late, so I’ll go back to my room now, bye” Sheena and Magma also did what they had planned one month earlier witch was getting indecent and Entai said “go get her Magma” and Magma said “you perv, your watching” and Entai said “fine, I won’t continue health education” the next morning Magma and Sheena woke up and Entai said “I could not sleep with you two making so much noise, it was almost unbearable, but Leena slept through it I think” Magma and Sheena got dressed to check on Leena and She was already awake and looked like she had been for hours and through psychic communication she said “what did you two do last night? I barely got any sleep because of you two” then Devi knocked on the door and Magma let him in and he said “what where you two doing last night? I mean it sounded like a constipated elephant was going to the bathroom” and Magma said “was it really that loud?” Devi nodded and Sheena fell on her back and said “I did not think it would be that loud” and Devi laughed.

Leena said through psychic powers “I am now scared for life, I can not erase this night from my memory, oh how I hate and love having powers like this” and Magma said “Leena what you heard last night was perfectly natural for adults and…” Sheena punched Magma and said “she is not nearly old enough yet to hear something like last night and what you where about to tell her, and Devi if you try yelling her that…I will kill you” and Devi said “if you would excuse me I need to attend to something” Devi left the room and Magma now getting up off the floor said “you know, you really got to stop hitting me like that, because one day you might make me go crazy and have to be sent to jail” Leena laughed and Sheena said “the journey we went on is crazy, you do know that, right? But it is a good one, because there have been many experiences that both of us enjoyed” and Entai said “and I know you two enjoyed the…” Leena had placed Entai in a sound proof bubble that can only be undone by her and Sheena and Magma both said “nice one” then Bob with a massive hangover said “my head hurts so much!!! Why did I drink so much last night? Why?!?! And also why did I get into my stash of catnip? *gasp* I mean I am holding it for a friend” Magma and Sheena laughed and Magma said “right, and you’re a talking dog” and Bob said “I find that offensive…ok, ok it was my catnip, I was just saving it for a good occasion and I could not resist anymore…” and Sheena said “you are addicted to that stuff, and so that’s why I found your catnip and threw it in the stinky place in the bathroom” Bob said “you did what? I can’t believe it, all of it just gone” and then Bob began to cry.

After an hour Bob had stopped crying and after they got Devi they left for the next town, when they where half way to the next town, Zane and a small army of demons blocked there path and Zane said “Magma, you and me one on one” and Magma said “I am sorry but I must dismiss your challenge because I am in no shape and no mood to fight right now because if I battle before I am ready to fight again I might lose control of myself and might end up destroying many things” and Zane said “that is utter bull-crap! You will fight me Magma or else I will destroy everything you know and love” Magma started groaning in agony and Devi said “stop it! If you do that his demon DNA will take control and he might end up killing us all!” and Magma said “no…no! You…will…not…take…CONTROL OF ME!!!” just then Magma fell silent *now in Magma’s mind* Magma was wondering where he was and then a voice said “you are in your minds world, and if you are here that means you have come to fight me, and in order to take control of me you must defeat me” the figure came out of the shadows and it was an alternate version of Magma but different in every way. The fight began with no more delay, attacking, countering, blocking, parrying and dodging attack after attack Magma said “this is going to take a while” the battle continues and with one blow Magma ended it *now back to reality* an aura surrounded Magma and he said “I have defeated my demon side and now I can control my full power without risk of losing control” after one minute passed Magma grew his terrifying wings and took flight and said “Zane, I am now ready to fight you, but I warn you I do not know if I can hold back in this form so be prepared” and Zane said “it is you who must be prepared to fight me Magma!” and then suddenly Devi, Sheena and Bob where surrounded by demons and Magma said “you…you are now someone I can not forgive, because you resort to despicable and dishonorable tactics in a fight” in an instant Magma had picked up Sheena and Devi and flew away. When they got to the next town Magma landed and turned back to his original form and the guard said “wha…what the hell are you?” and Magma said “I was completely human once, but that was a long time ago” and Sheena said “jeez, if you keep telling the truth about stuff like that you might just get a lynch mob after us or something” and Devi said “has stuff like that happened?” Sheena nodded and said “it was some solders last time” and the guard said “names please” they told the guard there names and the guard said “you may proceed but be wary because there are demons that kill at night in this town” and Magma said “looks like where going hunting tonight then” they went to the inn and got a room then late that night Devi baby sat Leena while Sheena and Magma went hunting for demons.

When Magma and Sheena where walking down a road where there is large demon activity at night sure enough they where attacked by multiple demons. Then a scream rang out from the cold night air and Sheena went to see what it was a woman being attacked by a demon, Sheena quickly saved the woman and went to check on Magma, he was surrounded by demons and Magma said “Sheena, don’t come any closer, because if you do you might get hit, the attack I am going to use is one that I will only use if I am surrounded by demons and no one else is around me” in an instant Magma disappeared and started to appear and disappear rapidly slashing and stabbing the demons surrounding him, in an instant it was over. The woman that Sheena had saved walked out of the ally and saw all the dead demons and said “who could have slain so many demons?” and Sheena said “I see he overdid it again” after Sheena got the woman to a safe place she went back to the inn.

The inn keeper said “how did your little hunting trip go?” and Sheena said “it went well” and then Magma walked into the inn and Sheena said “ware where you?” and Magma said “that style was more powerful then I thought so I wound up just outside the town”. Magma and Sheena went back to there room and Devi was talking to Leena and Sheena said “this town is infested with demons, so we are going to stay here for a while” the next day when the towns people woke up and saw all the corpses of demons they where both disgusted and thankful that someone had killed these demons. Sheena and Magma went shopping and when they got to one of the shops a thief tried to steal Magma’s money but before the thief could act Magma said “if you try to steal my money I will track you down, and that is not in your favor” the thief ran away and Magma and Sheena continued shopping for supplies. when they found a medical supply shop they went in and purchased lots of medical supplies and when they got to the food shops they purchased many things then they went back to the inn.

Magma and Sheena where tired from the demon hunting and also from
shopping, when it was time to eat Magma and Sheena cooked some food and everyone ate it, just then there was a knock on the door of the room and the inn keepers voice said “Magma, someone named Zane is her to fight you and normally I would not be doing this but he forced me to” and Magma said “Sheena, don’t worry, I won’t kill this demon” Magma left the room and then left the inn and outside, Zane was waiting for him and Zane said “so, you have decided to fight after all” and Magma said “only a coward surrounds someone” and Zane said “just shut up and fight” Zane dashed towards Magma but Magma suddenly flew up into the air and said “you will not defeat me” and Magma started to build up energy and then said “Incarceration Of Tartarus!” chains with spikes flew out of Magma’s hand and captured Zane and then Magma said “Ultra Heat!” the fire fallowed the chains and burned Zane, Zane slowly got up and said “did you really think that an attack like that would beat me?” and Magma said “the attack is not over yet, try moving” Zane tried to move but could not and Magma said “let me explain, the chains of tatarus attack spikes are tipped with a special poison, this type of poison disables movement for a certain amount of time, and as I promised, I wont kill you” and Zane said “what promise are you talking about?!?! I was the one that killed your father! And so if you kill me your father will be avenged” and Magma said “the reason why I made a promise not to kill you was because you are not the demon I am after and after all it would be a waste to finish you, face it, the fight is over and I have won” Magma floated back down to the ground and changed back to normal and went back inside the inn and went to the room that Sheena, Devi and Leena where in.

Magma told Sheena and Devi that they have to go because Zane would cause more trouble and to go immediately because the poison would only last until nightfall after packing up, the group went to the next town. While walking to the next town they noticed that a great amount of things where fallowing them. They stopped to “rest” and sure enough the ones fallowing them surrounded them and then when they put away all the recreational stuff they where attacked by woodland critters *author: hey wait a second, WTF am I thinking? I mean woodland critters, I can do better then that* they where attacked by extermination spirits and thinking quickly the group got out of there as fast as they could.

When the group got to a safe distance away from the extermination spirits they stopped and Devi said “those where extermination spirits, why are they after us?” and Magma said “it is because someone other then us know that something like that incident many years ago is going to happen again, and I think that the person wanting to exterminate us can control the dead and spirits, the enemy that we have now gained is a powerful one”. Everyone had to rest because of all that running that they did, when they regained some of there energy they continued to the next town. When they got there the guard said “stop, names please” the group told the guard there names and Magma said “you must be careful because unforgiving entities attacked us and they are down that road” Magma and the rest of the group went to an inn and got a room and Sheena said “I am going to go buy a weapon that can be used easily”.

Sheena went weapon shopping and saw a shop that specialized in easy to use weapons and so Sheena went in the shop and looked around and picked up a sword with a seal on it and said “why does this sword have a seal on it?” And the shopkeeper said “that is because it has a nasty tendency of breaking out of the shop and slaughtering many people” and Sheena said “how much will you sell me this for?” and the shop keeper said “you can have it for free because you would be doing me a favor if you take it” so Sheena went back to the inn and went to her room and said that she had gotten a new sword and that she has to keep an eye on it. That night Sheena noticed that the sword she had recently got was shaking and making some noise and was trying to get out of its scabbard. Sheena said “Magma, the sword I just got is trying to escape” and Magma said “you said yourself that we had to keep an eye on it” Sheena picked up the sword and grabbed the handle and there was an enormous surge of power in the room and the seal on the sword broke and it was now free but when Sheena drew the sword its blade was made of pure darkness, its blade was also emitting a glow and Sheena said “what is going on with this sword” then the sword said “why do you seek my power mortal?” and Sheena said "to defeat those that harm the innocent" and the sword said “my power is yours, but be wary because now that I am in your possession many will come after you, my name is Shade” Magma and Sheena where both amazed that there was another sword of darkness in this world and Entai said “so, we meet again Shade the incompetent…*five minutes of curse words later* and how have you been in the past few years?” and Magma said “Entai…have you forgotten that there is a baby with an impressionable mind in the room? If so then you are a forgetful idiot!” Sheena put Shade in back into its scabbard and said “Shade said that things would come after us now that it is in my possession, so we might have to keep on moving after all” Sheena said this in a serious and a sort of grim tone and Magma said “I think you are right but we must think about what effect this would have on Leena moving and barely stopping, either way there will never be a moment without danger in our lives until we complete our mission and even then it is uncertain that danger will pass us by, but what ever we do there is almost no difference” and Sheena said “your right, but lets sleep on it and make a decision about this in the morning” Sheena and Magma both went back to sleep.

When Magma and Sheena woke up they noticed that Leena was levitating in the air while sleeping and Magma said “there is an almost constant tone emitting from Leena and it is like something beautiful that never withers away” and then Leena woke up but was half asleep and levitated back to her bed and fell asleep. Then Magma and Sheena got dressed *authors note: no they where not completely nude* and started to make breakfast. The breakfast was ready in a short amount of time and Sheena said “I am going to go ask if Devi would like to join us for breakfast” and so Sheena went to Devi’s door and knocked and said “Devi are you there? If you want you can join us for breakfast” after receiving no answer Sheena was slowly losing her patience and noticed that the door was slightly open and so Sheena looked inside and saw not a room but a gaping hole where a wall used to be and Sheena closed the door, went back to her room and said “Devi is gone and his room is destroyed” and Magma said “I hope he plans on paying for that damage and I also hope he is alright” Sheena laughed and said “well I hope he does not do anything stupid” just then the door swung open and Devi fell over onto his stomach and said “I…I…I can’t be with you guys much longer because I am slowly losing control of my inner demon…and so I bid you all farewell” Devi got up off the floor and staggered away.

Magma closed the door and said “I hope I will never lose control of my inner demon, and if I do one day lose control of my inner demon just run away, just run” after a rather awkward moment of silence they ate breakfast and after they ate Magma and Sheena decided to go for a walk and while on this walk they saw a rather odd and violent creature attacking people in the town square. Then Sheena said “I have only seen this demon is very old books and they have not been seen for at least over 10,000 years and the reason why is because they serve as a warning that a great cataclysmic event will take place some time in the future and it could range from three days to two years” and then the creature stopped attacking the townspeople and said “I am one of the many warning demons that warn people of cataclysmic events, there will be a cataclysmic event in two years on the twenty-second day of April and the demon king known only as “Destruction” shall rise once more and rid the world of those who have no demon DNA, that is all” the demon disappeared and Magma said “this is bad, very bad and it looks like THE battle will take place in two years”.

Magma and Sheena went back to the inn and said “hello inn keeper I have some news, very bad news, a warning demon was in the town square” and the inn keeper said “so the demon king Destruction will rise once more” and Magma and Sheena went up to there room and told Leena the news and Magma said “Sheena, we do not have much time to master our techniques in order to defeat the demon king Destruction” and Sheena agreed.

Two years later, twenty days before the Destruction rises.

The area that Destruction will rise from has been decided and many are prepared at the site to sacrifice them selves in order to defeat Destruction, everyone was preparing for the inevitable battle that would take place and end up scaring the world when it was done. Magma, Sheena and Leena where making preparations so Leena would not get involved in the battle and then a familiar figure soared above them and then descended and changed to there normal form and said “long time no see, have you all been well?” and Magma said “there is only one person I know that asks the obvious after making an entrance that has spooked everyone except a few” and Sheena said “so, where have you been in the last two years Devi?” and Devi said “didn’t you miss me?” and Sheena said “honestly? not really, no” and Devi fell down and said “cold…that’s so cold…” Leena laughed at the sight of Devi now rolling around in the dirt then suddenly there was a time warp and it was the day that Destruction would rise.

Suddenly the ground began to shake violently and then a hole appeared, the hole was at least 200 meters in diameter and then two large hands reached up from the hole and then a few minutes after the hands appeared,
Destruction had pulled it self up and out of the hole and let out a terrible roar that frightened many, the armies that where at the site of the now risen king of demons where terrified and then suddenly Destruction started to attack and ravage the area and Magma said “Devi, take care of Leena, because we do not want her to take part in this battle” Devi agreed and went away from the area and so the battle began. Magma and Sheena where the first to attack and Sheena said “Darkness of the Damned” and a great and powerful darkness spewed out of Shade and hit Destruction but was not very effective and then Magma said “Forbidden Masters Technique: Destruction Of Cerberus” and a three headed dog shot out of Entai, roared and lunged at Destruction, furiously attacked then went inside destruction and blew up, but this attack only succeeded in making destruction angry and was also in a slight bit of pain and then, seeing this the mighty armies that where once afraid to move where inspired and with a mighty war cry the armies attacked, the millions of solders brandished there weapons and struck Destruction with mighty force but even though the armies of millions fought viciously they only succeeded in making Destruction more and more angry and then the archers took aim at Destruction and fired as many arrows as fast as possible and Destruction opened its mouth and fired a beam of concentrated darkness and it hit many of the solders and when the beam dissipated all that was left of those that got hit where there heads and even though this sight was gruesome the solders continued fighting.

Magma and Sheena did not stop fighting Destruction and used every special move they could do but Destruction was still going strong, after three straight days of fighting almost all of the millions of solders where dead and both Magma and Sheena where exhausted and where also injured. Magma and Sheena received medical attention and then suddenly Destruction let out a dying roar and its flesh disintegrated and all that was left where bones and the hole resealed its self and everyone where relieved that Destruction was dead and there was a great joyful shout that marked the end of the demon that could have destroyed the world. Then Devi returned to Sheena and Magma and gave them back Leena and then Magma and Sheena went to an inn and slept for twenty-four hours and then after they woke up they left the inn, found a nice patch of land and made a house in witch they would live in and Sheena released Shade from his sword form and Shade disappeared. One week after Shade disappeared an entity of light appeared in front of Sheena, Magma, Leena and Bob and granted them immortality and eternal youth. (Leena’s eternal youth does not kick in until she is 22)


Thank you for reading, and yes I know, I know this was a very long character bio/story.

Total word count: over 14,000

Hmmm... okay, I'd like you to make a few adjustments:-

• First of all; explain all his weapons, skills and magicks in greeater detail. Explain what they do, how much energy they take, how powerful they are and what their drawbacks are (they should have at least one, for such a powerful array of skills).

• Second: I'd like you to flesh out the personality, strengths and weaknesses sections. For the personality: remember that your fellow role-player will have to (to an extent, small or big) control your character--how does he react to every day life? to danger? to companionship? For the strengths: just describe his powers, his physical aspects that work in his favour--what makes him strong? what makes him more powerful than the ordinary man? I see these things is skills/magic, so just put themin strengths and describe them more. For the weaknesses: okay, not only would I like you to describe how this is a weakness to him, I'd like you to add another large weakness. From what I can see of his skills/magic, he seems to have an impressive array of abilities; this needs to be reflected in his weaknesses. Super-strength? Super-hearing? Summons? Transformations? I don't know much about the two latter, but they don't sound like weak little attacks. I need some major drawbacks and weaknesses.

• Lastly, I beg you to break the bio into proper paragraphs. Please. It is very confusing to read as it is, and even has a... *gulp* unbroken paragraph with over 9000 words... Paragraphs are typically uder 200 words... and that can sometimes be pushing it.

Fix all that up, then I'll take another look. PM me if you need any help or at all confused.

Excuse me Kitsune but I did not ask anyone to view my characte yet and I had a differant person in mind, and yes i know it needs some work.

The personality needs a lot of work. At least a paragraph. Same goes for the weaknesses and strengths, although you'd be fine with three/four sentences or so. Follow Kitsune's above suggestions for help.

Also, the bio. The purpose of a biography is to succinctly tell us how your character got to where he was. If we wanted a fiction, we'd look for you in the fiction section. In other words, boil it down to some main points. I can give you an example of a bio that, while fairly long, is still of appropriate legnth. This is the bio of my character http://www.zeldauniverse.net/forums/...3394-frey.html.