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Maloe, the princess fairy.
Maloe, the princess fairy.
Maloe, perferably. Rumored to have a split personality, which has the alias of 'Maya Hoshii', which is the name of her deceased twin sister. Age: Eons, perhaps? She's been floating - flying, rather - for many, many centuries. It's hard to say. She's far from immortal... just keeps young in her elderly years. Race: She's a fairy - giving off the appearance of it, one can only assume as such. A fairy (also fay, fey, fae, faerie; collectively, wee folk, good folk, people of peace, and other euphemisms) is the name given to a type of mythological being or legendary creature, a form of nature spirit, often described as metaphysical, supernatural or preternatural. Sex: Being a princess, it's safe to say she's of the female sort. Hair: Black, tasseled head of wavy hair, mixed in with natural highlights of curls. It's normally coated with that wonderful glow that every fairy emits, so it doesn't really look black - more grayish white mix. Eyes: Her eyes are relatively too small to see properly, but she does have them coloured. Maghony with a fogged glint of gold. Weight: With the normal characteristics of most fairies, she would hope to be lighter than a feather, but really, she weighs in at about five pounds. Height: She's larger than your average fairy to. She's about five and half inches tall. Weapon: Laugh and snort if you will, but her weapon of choice is an awkwardly large match stick. It's a bit more special than your everyday fire starter, for it can be lit, blown out, and re lit again, as many times as you'd like. It's length is about seven inches, and it's width is about five millimeters. It's supposed to be her source of magical enchantment, but who really knows? Strengths: She's uncrushable - literally. You can step on her all you'd like, but you can't crush her, as you would a bug. She has bones as strong as diamonds, flesh even. That's her main strength; some secondary strengths would be her ability to concentrate considerably well, and her ability to watch someone make a physical movement, and copy it to the exact tissue movement. Some say it's magic - but it's just her nature. Weakness: She albsolutely cannot stand up to the element of ice; that includes the elemental magic as well. She's as impatient as it gets, and can easily be triggered to an overheated air bag. She's over sensitive as well, and can go blind in rage if she's inticed. Skills/Magic: Basic Elemental Magic: Your basic elements fire, water, earth, wind, light, etc - except for ice. She's not so good with that one. Caregiver: She calls it that, but it's not an actual name for it. Whoever she decides to follow, or cling to, she gives to them, special powers. Like a sixth sense type of deal, with the ability to sense when most supernatural things are happening around the receiver. There's more to it, apparently, but she hasn't been around someone long enough to see what she's capable of. Appearance: Maloe stands, and flies with a body nearly reaching six inches. Her black hair, when played with properly by the glowing that emits from her body, looks silver, and falls over her tiny shoulders that shine with a pallid complexion. She wears a full body suit of iron, looking muchly like a tiny knight that you'd get in a playset - she's been mistaken as one, many times. The suit or armour is tipped with red on the sleeves and random patterns are set across her chest and back, as far as she is concerned, there is no significance behind it. Her face is heart shaped, and her cheeks are rosy; her hands are squared and she has a strong grip. Maloe, in the jist of it, looks like a fairy knight - as queer as that sounds. Personality: Big headed, impatient, quick to anger, Maloe (as small as she is) is a force to be reckoned with. She's not an arse by any means, but rather sweet inside and ready to fight for the better good (which can only be described in her mind), but if you push the wrong buttons, she'll detonate, and it could mean the end. She's rumored to have a split personality, but it's hard to say. Biography: "Father?" A tiny voice squeaked, followed by the faint sound of little wings fluttering, rapidly, "What's the matter?" "You're sister." Her dad spoke, his voice shaking emotionally, "She's de... Maloe grew up with a medium sized family; parents, a twin sister and an older brother. The only different part being the twin sister - that wasn't normally concidental in most cases. However, her life started to change slightly after the death of her twin sister, said to be approximately five thousand eons ago. Her father and mother approached her several months after the passing and confronted her, telling her about the new future she was bestowed with. She was hesitate at first, but the vibrant words they used to describe left her aching to jump into it, indulge it. Her twin sister, Maya Hoshii, was to go out, to be a Caregiver, which is an aid to a human being of true and right intentions in the world. The word Caregiver was given to the task, it's not actually what it's referred to as - what's it really referred to, is very much still a mystery. Upon the death of Maya, her powers where discovered thriving inside of Maloe, who, when born, showed no true talent, except to be a scribe, or a mother, daresay. When her kingdom discovered this, they shot accusations at her, blaming her for the death of her sister, which sent her into a pit of depression. She questioned her parents, and they simply answered her, "If you have this destiny, it was obviously meant to be." Maloe soon left the care of her mother and kingdom, to begin her task, which she still continues to do, millions of eons later; her kingdom long gone, and her princess title just a figment of her imagination. |

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Re: Maloe, the princess fairy.
Very nice, definitely one of the more original characters I've read. It's all good, except for some spelling/wrong word mistakes. For example:
"...Maloe (as small as she is) is not a force to be reckoned with..." I think you meant "...Maloe is a force to be reckoned with..."? Give it another read-through and fix those mistakes, and then it's approved. And one more thing, lightyears measure distance, not time. Maybe you could just leave it as years or centuries instead?
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Re: Maloe, the princess fairy.
Why thank you.
![]() I was actually thinking about that whole lightyears thing.. it didn't make much sense, but I changed it to eons, which I'm pretty sure measures time. Right? ![]() I fixed all of it up, if I missed anything let me know. ![]() |

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Re: Maloe, the princess fairy.
Wow, that was fast o.o
*approved* Also, a small piece of advice, don't post in your own thread, because we Councillors usually look for the threads with zero replies. Almost didn't see Maloe.
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