As you probably know I already have this charactor. However due to a change in a recent battle I am posting him again for approval.
Age:13 though has body of a seventeen year old
Appearance: Myles is a small, usually logical boy who enjoys playing with his small sword (he made it himself) and sheild (he bought with his birthday rupees.) He wears a suit exactly like Links. He has black hair which is usally long because he can't ever afford a hair-cut. He has blue eyes and very fair skin. (Now is large and well muscled. as he is no longer in a childs body. He is now in Links outfit but Black)
Personality: Myles is a hyperactive boy who when angery can be very dangerous with a sword. He has extreme persision that has caused many broken wrists for his opponent's (one so far but repeatedly.)
Weapons: A Three foot long sword that he made himself. Along with a sheild he bought (with his birthday rupees) in kokiri forest. He also likes using what ever matirials are around him making his battle skill's surprising. (now a four foot long sword that is flaming on his command and never burns him)
Strengths: He is loaded with energy and his persision is to a tee. He has exelent eyesight and is very adapted to his weopen of choosing a sword. His sheild provides his defence.
(Can light the sword on fire easily)
Weaknesses: He is not that strong without his sword. He also can be provoked into attacking blindly leaving him open when he misses. His sword will turn against him if it is taken.
Biography: A small child who developed a hero at an early age. You may have already guessed his hero. Link of Ocarina of Time! He wishes to grow up just like Link so he spent his early years training in swordplay.He was raised in a poor family and always felt contained until one day he was playing ing hyrule feild with his sword and sheild when he lost track of time. The night fell and as he ran to the town the draw bridge slowly rose. and did not return. He spent the entire night fighting off Stalchilds as the dawn came he staggered into the castle walls to find that the towns people where holding his funeral. He felt betayed by his famly and freinds to find they had so little confidence in him. He went to many communitys but felt alone in all of them. He was adpted by talon at age elevin. He lives there happily and loves his life, but he no matter how hard he tried could not quench his thirst for adventure. He wrote Talon a note saying that he had to leave. He now works alone and kills monstes ising towns for money. He lives a peaceful life when he is at home. He lives in the kokiri forest but has to pay Mido a one hundred rupee a month rent. Mido says he spreads it to all kokiri but this is a lie. He enjoys listening to to the Deku trees wisdom. He adventures all the time but rarly see's his family. He enjoys also playing with gorons.
Recently Myles made an attempt to rescue his freind Racht from certain doom against enemies unknown to him. He reconised a Werewolf that seemed to be fleeing the scene, but all else was lost to him. In the end Racht was mortally wounded and sent back to hell. However before the last spark of like was out of him he transfered the Powers of the Element of Fire into Myles.(for the entire battle click here He also caused him to age rapidly because of the severe strain of the transfer. His lifeforce temporarily deminish to almost nothing Myles ran into his home land. As an Outcast he tried to hone his powers. Unwelcome in the capitol city of Hyrule he began to on the outskirts of Gerudo village. He managed to evade capture and live on stolen bread for monthes. Today he still lives peacefully on the outside of the village. His power honed to near perfection he attempts to reconnect to the world. Slowly. Patiently.
______Thank you Emily, for the birthday card!______
Okay, first off, explain to me why a thirteen year old has the body of a seventeen year old. Secondly, expand the personality, appearance, and weaknesses section. Also, try broadening the bio a bit. The statement about his friend Racht seems like it could be broadened into a LOT of story. So, explain it a bit.
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