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Old 08-20-2007, 05:42 PM
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Exclamation Saser and Zargin (REVISED)

Name:Saser

Age: 22

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Blue

Weight: 168.41 Pounds

Height: 6 feet, 3 inches.

Weapons: Dual Swords, Laser Pistol, PSI

Armor: Titanium alloy underneath clothing, capable of standing temperatures up to 150 degrees Farenheit.

Strengths: -Psychic powers, namely telekinesis, telepathy, clairvoya, and healing.
-Is capable of fusing with Zargin. (How? They just do.)

Weakness: -Using his psychic powers will drain him slowly.
-His sword style can be overcome by switching between two styles constantly.
-Fusing won't work if one is unconscious.

Skills/Magic: -Using a combo of telepathy and clairvoya, he can predict his opponents moves and ideas. Then, using telekinesis, he can orient his left sword to parry, while using the right one to attack his opponents most vulnerable spot.

Recent bio (Will be merged with the one in the list): Saser was captured by Neo Postucoan Forces, and "programmed" to be a soldier. He led an assault at a certain hotel (Beach Justice) to capture Zargin, and the "Ultimate Weapon." He destroyed the weapon, and freed Zargin.
Afterwards, in order to make up for his weakness, he joined the G.P.U, or Galactic Protection Unit. He was issued a laser pistol, and given command of a squadron. He resigned though, after defeating the N.P.E, but was allowed to keep his issued weapon.

Zargin will follow after this is approved, then Zazer.
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Old 09-03-2007, 06:14 PM
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Re: Saser and Zargin (REVISED)

Well, first off, you've completely left off the Appearance and Personality sections. Then, I would like to see his biography expanded. Maybe go into detail about his childhood before he was capture?

Okay, fix those three things and I'll take another look at him.
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