Jori Symuson

I have no use for her here anymore.

The swords are indeed, longswords, and they can't be broken.

How long are they?

Her second weapon is secretly stashed under her sleeves. It is a blade that is around 3 feet long and it is locked onto her arm, and by just the right movement, the blade will shoot out of its titanium holder, cutting anyone near enough. When the blade is still inside its arm deployer, it can be used as a powerful armguard.

Okay the problem with this is that most longswords are about this size. That's really long, how would she be able to bend her arm? You might want to rethink the length.

*laughing*
I just KNEW someone was going to ask that, lol. The longsword question.

*smacks forehead*
your right about the hidden blade, ok, is 1.5 feet short enough?

Depends, how long is her arm? I'm guessing it would be on her forearm, right?

And now about the swords, three feet, that's big, she's kinda small. How light are they? Won't that be awkward for her to use? She doesn't use them at the same time does she? Does three feet include the hilt? How long is the hilt? How long is the blade?

I said nearly 3 feet, which is about 2.9 or 8. And I added that they were light for her. forgot to put that in.

Oh, and do you mind that effect I put on her swords?
Also, dont worry, 1 and a half feet is perfect for her. lol but if you want me to decrease more, just say the word.

Okay, if you say so. 1.5 will work.

You might want to consider making the handles a little longer, especially for such long swords. Do you have ruler handy? I find that helps me figure the lengths of my characters' weapons. No, I don't mind the affect you put on the swords. That's just fine.

Oky dokey, hows 6 inches? *looks at ruler*

Perfect, in all the blade is about 2.3 or 4 feet long and the hilt is six? 'cause if so, that's perfect.

Yep, you got it right. lol

Okay, put that info in for the lengths. It helps people get the right idea. Now onto the magic.

Fire:40
Water:5
Ice:0
Earth:5
Nature:5
Wind:35
Dark:0
Light:20

You don't really describe what these numbers mean and on a scale of what. Plus, what kind of spells and abilities all this would entail. Explain it to me, and give me some soild descriptions on what she can do with this elemental magic.

Sorry! It's just that so far, I've used that chart in every character I used, so I forgot to put what I now put up there.

I don't know if that's a good enough example of what she could do.

Well, you've neglected the other elementals she has points in. What can she do with that? I know it might not be much, but in battle, every little detail can matter.

Lol, the more problems that need fixing, the longer it takes to get to the edit button, lol.

Anyway, I got that now. Anything else?

No, that's good for now. Interesting character. ^^ Good job.

*approved*

*pant* *pant*
Thank you!