Haku the Dark

Haku was learning the dark arts. but soon he had recieved word of his tribes were being besieged. as his dark tribe the Yurodians(Humans with the power of the zoras and of those in the twilight realm) .

Age: 14

Sex:male

Apperance: Tall and he wears 3 tunics A black Tunic which gives him the power of fusion and a cerimonial tunic which gives him the power of Nayru Din and Farore. finally he has a dragonscale tunic which allows him to visit three realms the twilight realm, hyrule's realm and, the Yurodian realm.

Black tunic- a black tunic with a silver lining and a Yurodian helmet

cerimonial tunic- a white tunic with emblems of nayru din and farore

Dragonscale tunic- a Green tunic that has a dragon's head as a helmet

Hieght:5ft8in

Wiegth: about 125 pounds

Misc: He will kill any enemy so no more hiding deku shrubs. He has a Night Walker curse that will put him under the controll of the Night Walkers for evil

Attitude: He is very confident in himself and is quite and arrogant. He Sways to and from the paths of good and evil

Items:magic guantlets, Yurodian spellbook, Death's Sythe, And Family hierloom

Powers/Abilitys:
Realm gate-warp to one of the three realms
Nobility-Gives him access to the twilight and hyrule castles
Dark hole-an evil spell sucks up enemys and puts them in an alternate realm
Rain-summons storm clouds to let it rain
Tranquility-control weaker minions and dispose of them when done
Blue Fire Fury-summon blue fire to burn enemys
Red Ice Blast- summon red ice to freeze enemys
Time Warp- move through time up to ten years later and keep your same age.
Sacrifice- His final move to sacrifice himself to save the people of hyrule
Regenerate- Regain his life to aid Link Midna and Zelda After he sacrifices himself
Fusion- fuse creatures and other items to create weopons
Fusion Wave- Transform Himself and others to make stronger bodies he can seperate at his will
Chaos Beam- Summon a ray of chaos to obliterate the enemy
Yurodian Persuation- he is very persuasive to creatures in hyrule

strength-rain and darkness/nightfall
weakness-Lightness and Darkness

At age ten he was sent to be a powerful wizard's Pupil but as he turnd twelve the Yurodians called for him as his realm was being overthrown be the Night Walkers. He tried to help but had to escape and the only place left for him to go is to a secret cave in death mountain as it holds the key to his future. At age 14 the wizard died he never knew the wizard was manipulating him so he never learned the truth about dark arts.

Now he is confused by good and evil so he set out to find his step brother Link. If link could help him understand light and dark he wont be taken over by a night walker curse that he gained by fleeing his realm why the night walkers invade.

If he does not stay good the night walkers will have controll over Haku The last Yurodian.


Please go easy on me this is my first character

EDIT: ok is this better along the lines?

Right now, your biggest problem is that this character is too close to the Legend of Zelda storyline. You had probably take another look at this thread.

Ok is this any better?

Edit: i have added charecter info

Haku was learning the dark arts. but soon he had recieved word of his tribes were being besieged. as his dark tribe the Yurodians(Humans with the power of the zoras and of those in the twilight realm) .

Age: 14

Sex:male

Apperance: Tall and he wears 3 tunics A black Tunic which gives him the power of fusion and a cerimonial tunic which gives him the power of Nayru Din and Farore. finally he has a dragonscale tunic which allows him to visit three realms the twilight realm, hyrule's realm and, the Yurodian realm.

Black tunic- a black tunic with a silver lining and a Yurodian helmet

cerimonial tunic- a white tunic with emblems of nayru din and farore

Dragonscale tunic- a Green tunic that has a dragon's head as a helmet

Hieght:5ft8in

Wiegth: about 125 pounds

His Personality: He will kill any enemy so no more hiding deku shrubs. He has a Night Walker curse that will put him under the controll of the Night Walkers for evil. He is very confident in himself and is quite and arrogant. He Sways to and from the paths of good and evil. He listens to no one because he can trust no one. The only people he trusts are the zoras as they are not as social as the other races

Items:magic guantlets, Yurodian spellbook, Death's Sythe, Family hierloom, and a red ocarina

Powers/Abilitys:
Realm gate-warp to one of the three realms
Nobility-Gives him access to the twilight and hyrule castles
Dark hole-an evil spell sucks up enemys and puts them in an alternate realm
Rain-summons storm clouds to let it rain
Tranquility-control weaker minions and dispose of them when done
Blue Fire Fury-summon blue fire to burn enemys
Red Ice Blast- summon red ice to freeze enemys
Time Warp- move through time up to ten years later and keep your same age.
Sacrifice- His final move to sacrifice himself to save the people of hyrule
Regenerate- Regain his life to aid Link Midna and Zelda After he sacrifices himself
Fusion- fuse creatures and other items to create weopons
Fusion Wave- Transform Himself and others to make stronger bodies he can seperate at his will
Chaos Beam- Summon a ray of chaos to obliterate the enemy
Yurodian Persuation- he is very persuasive to creatures in hyrule

strength-rain and darkness/nightfall
weakness-Lightness and Darkness

At age ten he was sent to be a powerful wizard's Pupil but as he turnd twelve the Yurodians called for him as his realm was being overthrown be the Night Walkers. He tried to help but had to escape and the only place left for him to go is to a secret cave in death mountain as it holds the key to his future. At age 14 the wizard died he never knew the wizard was manipulating him so he never learned the truth about dark arts.

Now he is confused by good and evil so he set out to find the ancient relic Deathbringer. If it could help him understand light and dark he wont be taken over by a night walker curse that he gained by fleeing his realm why the night walkers invade.

If he does not stay good the night walkers will have controll over Haku The last Yurodian.

this is what I added:

Special/Misc:
Deathbringer-An ancient relic that looks like excaliber but is blunt at the top and the handle is broken and it is the size of a dagger. He put it on a magical thread and wears it as a necklace.

Companions-
1:Skull kid [this time he attacks with the hero's bow and carries a lantern like in TP](without manjora's mask)
2:Lanayru the light spirit [goes into his body to shoew him the ways of the light](it will appear just like linksa fairies but doesnt always say "Listen"
3:a poe[a poe with the name Storm](he also goes into Haku's body and shows him the way of darkness)

Fears: the nightwalkers possessing him. People except the zora's. Failure.

Love: Music, knowledge, and zora girls his age.(lol)