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Old 05-31-2007, 02:06 PM
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Re: Igaru Masada

I have no use for him here anymore.
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Old 06-11-2007, 06:53 PM
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Re: Igaru Masada

Okay, first of all, go through the weapons section and break it into a few paragraphs. Also, these words that start with "un" (unavoidable, untouchable, unbreakable, etc) in his favor are what's turning me from approving him. Absolutes are looked down upon here in the BA, so I'll have to ask you to tone them down a bit. The History, Personality, Weaknesses, and Appearance sections are alright, but the Skills/Magic section needs some toning down. It's alright to add on incredible powers to your character over time, but making him an insanely powerful engine of destruction off the bat isn't good.
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Old 06-11-2007, 07:23 PM
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Let's see, I "think" I toned him down enough, but I only put untouchable, because I dont want someone else to wield the blade, and unbreakable.....well.....I don't want my sword to break! Lol. And he HAS had 2 years to train, so he should be a little strong after that.

But anyway, is that enough? If it needs more toning down, that's fine with me!
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Old 06-11-2007, 08:55 PM
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Alright, have fun.

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