Joshua Goggin

Name: Joshua Goggin

Age: 13

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Dark Brown

Eyes: Blue flecked with gray

Weight: 150lbs

Height: 5'9"

Weapon: He has a iron short sword

Strengths: He can dodge quickly. He has moderate strength.

Weakness: He can't run very fast. His defense is very low and he doesn't know how to use a sword, he merely swings it around randomly, trying to make people believe he knows what he is doing. Being a loner, he doesn't trust new people at first. And sometimes his personalities bicker amongst themselves.

Skills/Magic: MPD: In his own universe, he has a mental dis order called MPD. This means that his mind has created different people inside of his sub-consciouses to deal with trauma or stress. In the Amphitheater it means the same thing, but now these personalities can sometimes take over his body and change his appearance.

Berry: Josh's scraggly hair recedes into his head to almost a buzz-cut. He grows 10 inches and becomes more muscular. He becomes more hyper and unkind to people, but he still has morals. This personality makes up for his lost strength.

Louis: His hair straightens and grows down to his shoulders. He becomes much skinnier and suave. He is very fast, nimble, and agile. This personality makes up for his lost speed.

The Quester: His hair become neat and combed. His features become more sharp and distinct as his hight reduces by one foot. He is angered easily and takes a while to calm down. He can use the four main elements of magic, fire, water, wind, and earth. The angrier he is, the stronger his magic is. This personality makes up for the fact that he can't use magic

Phobos: his hair, clothes, skin, muscles, and fat sink into his body, which turns black. There is a tight pulled film over his body. He looks like a skeleton with pitch black skin. He shrinks 2 feet. There is no distinguishable feature on his body. He may speak, but nothing will move. He has two large, glowing, yellow eyes, that are forever fixed in a demonic frown. He has psychic and telekinetic abilities. He can project images into peoples minds. Read peoples minds. Throw and pick up objects with his mind. He can create barriers and invisible blasts. This personality makes up for the absence of any mental mutation. He is quiet and shy. Whenever he uses these powers he exhausts Josh, and can shorten his life expectancy.

General Manga: Josh grows leopard-like fur all over his body. His head turns into a leopard's head. He grows claws and a tail, while he grows 3 feet taller. He has superhuman strength, speed, senses, dexterity, and agility. He is light-hearted and laid back in this form. This personality is a mix between the first and second personalities.

Yehoshua: Josh grows a foot in height, his skin darkens, his hair Grows down to his elbows, and his eyes turn a deep crimson. This form is psychotic. He loves dark humor, and has no empathy or remorse, but is surprisingly charming. He has strength, speed, and magic that are more adept than the others.

Appearance: Josh has messy brown hair that goes down to the ball of his neck. He is fairly tanned, and has a round face. He wears square glasses that are on the fall out his bridge. He wears a navy blue hoodie and a pair of jeans. Under his hoodie he wears a tight green shirt. he also wears a pair of brown steel-toed boots.

Personality: He tries to be funny and is laid back sometimes. But he is a worry some guy. Most of the time he is quiet, but he can talk a lot. He is also a pervert. He will talk like a pervert, and think like a pervert when around women. Or he will feel uncomfortable.

Biography: Josh was born and raised in St,Louis, Missouri,He was a typical kid. He went to school, ate with his family, he had a girl firend, watched tv, and got on the computer. He was also an imaginative kid, so sometimes he zoned off. One day, after school, he was watching tv and zoned out in the couch, when the phone rang. It was his girl friends mom telling him his girl friend had been in an accident, and killed. He was devastated. After the funeral, he began hearing voices. His mother took him to see a shrink. He was then diagnosed with Multiple Personality Disorder. He fell into a deep depression, because everyone labeled him a freak. One night, it was raining and Josh had walked onto an open field.

Josh screamed up to God "Why must you mock me! Why do you have to throw everything in my face? This is your fault! I bet your not even real!" Then he whispered to himself "I wish I was in the place where there was adventure, and no one knew who I am." suddenly the ground swallowed him up. When he awoke, a man named Dirk was standing over him. The half man, half lizard took him to his father, San, who was a Dinofose. He traveled with them until they reached a town, where Josh now is a current residence of, as town storyteller. He sometimes goes on adventures with San and Dirk, but prefers telling stories to people of the town. He is a master Saxophone player and always has one on his persons at all times.

Interesting. The only thing I would like to see edited is Phobos' mental abilities. They're a little strong for the first appearance of a character.

I shortened it

No, you don't need to shorten it or get rid of any of his powers. I would just like to see a drawback or two when using them.

Ok how about now?

Yep. ^_^

*Approvedeth*