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Old 04-21-2007, 12:50 PM
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Sir Blade den shan de Dreama

Name: Blade
Full title: Sir Blade den shan De Dreama, Knight of the ocean
Age: 16
Race: Elvish

Gender: Male

Hair: Blue
Eyes: Blue

Height; 5'5

Weight: 107

Weapon: He normally carries a glinsting blue sword with a sapphire in the middle of it. It’s lightweight, but does a lot of damage. He also carries a silver bow with Ivory stems, for use of Sharp, golden arrows
Armor: He has none, but his swords blocks everything for him.
Stregths: He has no Armor, so he’s pretty fast. He can weild a bow and sword with skill, and he’s a pretty good shot. Also pretty smart.
Weakness: He is not good against axes, lances, water magic, and earht magic. He also has no armor, so he can die pretty easily.
Skills and magic:
  1. Flightslayer: Blade has an excellent chance of ding twice damage of airborne objects.
  2. Advanced health magic.
  3. Heart of the sword: Blade takes out the crystal of his sword, and throws it, creating a blinding flash.
  4. Concelment: Blade’s items cannot be seen by enemies, alowing him to walk through enemy territories unharmed.
  5. Everlasting bond: If Blade’s girlfriend, Lady Miriam, is with him, he somehow gets stronger.
  6. Sword juggle. Blade creates copies of his sword, the juggles them, eventually throwing them at an opponet.
  7. Basic fire control.
Appearnce: Tall and slender, he has blue eyes and black hair. He has a bright, yellow mage's gauntlent on his right hand, and he carries a sword and a bow everywhere, except you can’t see them under his cloack, witch is pitch black. He has pretty nice mucles due to that fact he trained a lot. His cloak is torn on the side, witch Blade accidently did. His hair is smoothed down except for his front, witch is spiked

Personality: Light-hearted, jokes a lot. Can be easily angered. He cares a lot for his friends, and will do anything for them. He’s normally got a love struck view in his eyes when he thinks about his girllfriend, Miriam. As for his angry side: If one of his friends, (espacally Miriam) Gets injured, Blade will hunt him down and end his life.

Hstory: Young Blade was raised to become a warrior at the age of six, where he learned the basics of the Sword, bow and magic arts, as a page in servise to his father.

At the age of fifteen, he went into the service of his uncle, Sir willam, where he prefected his fighting and magic arts. It was there that he became a knight

*1 year ago*

Blade and Willam met each other's eyes as they clashed swords, Blade leading in a full on attack to Willam's chest.
He hurriedly raised his defense and blocked Blade’s blow, combining that with a counter assualt, witch failed. Blade circled his master’s sword and yanked it form gim, then touching him with it "Ten strikes, Sir, I win."

They had been combating each otherfor one thing, Blade's knighthood. If BLade could strike willam ten times, then he would be a full-fledged warrior. That was Willam's tenth srike, Blade had won.

Willam drew his sword as Blade kneeled, and tapped Blade's shoulders and head, "Rise Sir Blade den shan De Dreama, knight of the ocean. Take yor sword."

Blood stood up and took his sword. He felt so happy, this was his golden day, where honor appeared to him. Nothing could dampen his spirits now.

"You are a full-fledged warrior now, make me proud."

"I will, sir. " Blade said eargly as he headed out, not knowing where his adventures would take him.

A few weeks later, he arrived in a small village.

(8 months ago.)

Blade took up his sword and polished it until it gave off a similar sparkle when he had first recived it from Sir Willam.
In less than two months, Blade found himself in a estate around two hundred miles near milddle aged london. He became friends with everyone, and they often got together.

As soon as Blade finished polishing his sword, he belted it and headed out to the local tavern. He sat by the locals and chatted with them. Nothing Blade hadn’t heard hadn’t come up, so he left.
Midway out, a young girl, probaly Blade’s age, bashed into him. They both fell, and looked at each other.

"My apoligies, milady, I did not see you." Blade said as he bowed, giving the typacial textbook answer he had learned.

"It’s my fault, really. I’m in a hurry." She said as she lifted her head, ensaring Blade forevery.

This young woman had blonde hair, and emrald eyes to go wiith it. She had a nice figure, and Blade couldn’t keep his eyes away. "Is there anything I can help with?" He asked.

"Yes, would you mind helping me with this package? I have to take it too the postman before he leaves." She asked sweetly.

"Of course." Blade said as he picked it up and started running for the postman.

He was nearly too late, but the postman hadn’t left yet, so Blade gave him the package. He accepted it and started his run.

He turned too the lady "There you go… would you like to get a drink now?" He asked.
"Why not? My name’s Miriam."
  • One week ago*
Blade walked with Miriam down the hall of his estate and offered Miriam a drink. She accpted it, "It’s been seven months since we first met."

" I know… that was a long time ago…" Blade said.

"It’s getting late Blade, my grandfather is expecting me." Miriam said as she left.

Later that knight, Blade heard a blood curling scream, one that Blade immedatly registered as Miriam’s. Belting on his sword, he dashed out side and ran straight to Miriam’s home.

A knight was standing there with a sword raised above his head, Miriam right below him. He brought down his sword.
"
NO!" Blade said as he whipped some of his fire magic and bounced the knights sword away from him. He unsheathed his sword ancd charged. The knight got out another sword, and met Blade’s blow, countering with a thrust, but was parried.

Blade called his fire magic and thrusted it right through the knight, and he fell dead on the spot.
He turned to Miriam, "Are you hurt?"
"No… I’m fine . Thanak you for saving me," She said as she got up and kissed Blade.
Blade stiall has a few questions on his mind, "Who was the identity of the knight, and why on earth someone would want to hurt Miriam. With her by his side, he set out for answers.
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Old 04-23-2007, 07:50 PM
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Re: Sir Blade den shan de Dreama

Not bad. Though, I would like to see some expansions in his Personality and Appearance sections.
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Old 04-24-2007, 03:44 PM
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Re: Sir Blade den shan de Dreama

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Old 04-24-2007, 06:34 PM
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Re: Sir Blade den shan de Dreama

Much better. *Approvedeth* Though, there is one thing I would like to point out.

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As for his angry side: If one of his friends, (espacally Miriam) Gets injured, Blade will hunt him down and end his life.
From the way that's put, it states that Blade will hunt down his friend if they are hurt. You might want to correct that.
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