Purachina - the banshee

Name: Tant Ros
Age: 19

Race: Banshee

Sex: Female

Hair: Eerie Black and green

Eyes: Green

Weight: 59 kg

Height: 179 cm

Weapon: Two Long Daggers, and A really creepy voice. Her secret weapon is her tame, cursed rat Persikor

Strengths: Strong againt Male characters. Also has an advantage over voice attacks. Undead.

Weakness: Weak against love. And holy persons, like priests. Has a strange habit of starting to laugh when the challenger avoids her attacks, which can temporarly give the challenger a chance to strike.

Skills/Magic: Scream- her strongest skill. Simply Screams until something happens. Strong, and dangerous.
Psychic arrow- a strong Psychic attack with long range. Not a one-hit-KO, but very annoying.

Appearance:She still looks beautiful, but more dead. Her skin is blue-grey and she got long hair. She´s dressed in a old cape, and you can´t see whats beneath. But she have a bandage covering half of her face. Her arms and legs are also covered in bandage. She has a Huge ring on one of her fingers... And a white rat sitting on one of her shoulders.

Personality: Somewhat grumpy. She can seem like she´s emotion-less, but she´s actually quite passionate. Espesially when marzipan is in the picture, she loves candy. And she is a lousy battler until she gets interested in the battle. Then she´ll fight until one wins! She also has a white rat as a pet, and it has been since she where cursed. Probaly the rat is cursed to, but none has ever examined it.The rat´s name is Persikor, which means peaches.

Biography: Tant Ros grew up hundreds of years ago, in a small village in Sweden. She was known as the most beautiful girl within a months traveling. However, she lived in a small cottage with her parents, her uncle and her sister. She had a common childhood. But then one day, a dark stranger arrived at the small village. It didn´t take long until Tant Ros sister fell in love with the dark stranger, Olaf. And it took even less time to arrange a wedding between them. But once her sister where married, Tant Ros started to feel lonely. So she decided to travel in search of her true love. It started out well, with a lot of nice people to stay with. But Tant Ros didn´t feel any spark with any of the young boys she meet. She traveled further and further from the village where she where born. And one day she reached a village far to the east. No one in that village had ever heard of Tant Ros. Once again, she didn´t feel attracted to any of the young boys. However, one of the young boys felt very attracted to Tant Ros. And he begged, and purposed. But tant Ros gave him the cold shoulder. He begged and purposed over and over. But her answer was always the same.Then he went sad and did seppuku, assisted by his younger brother. Then Tant Ros became hated by the entire village. They killed her, and laid the banshee´s curse on her dying body. Ever since Tant Ros has been unable to love, or to watch other lovers. She became quite aggresive during her fist hundred years as a undead, but now she´s more controlled. Which also makes her a stronger opponent. She entered BattleArena so that she can kill the ancestors of the peasants that cursed her. Then she will be released from her curse, which is her goal. But death doesn´t sound very bad either.... At least as an option, because she doesn´t know what will happen when the curse breakes.

Not bad.

*Approvedeth*

However, you have few spelling errors. Nothing bad, though. Also, it would be nice if you explained who or what marzipan is in her personality.

Originally Posted by Ranarath

Not bad.

*Approvedeth*

However, you have few spelling errors. Nothing bad, though. Also, it would be nice if you explained who or what marzipan is in her personality.

Oh, please tell me where I spelled wrong. (I´m not from an Enlish speaking country, and I have some problems with spelling sometimes.) Also, I will edit the text a bit. make it a bit more...explaining.

Originally Posted by PurachinaIto

Oh, please tell me where I spelled wrong. (I´m not from an Enlish speaking country, and I have some problems with spelling sometimes.) Also, I will edit the text a bit. make it a bit more...explaining.

Ah, okay, well...

'psycic' is 'psychic
'beneat' is 'beneath'
'beutiful' is 'beautiful'
'arriwed' is 'arrived'
'betweem' is 'between'
'attrackted' is 'attracted'
'brakes' is 'breaks'

If you want more help with spelling, grammer, and writing in general, I would recommending heading over to the Battle School. The teachers there would be happy to help you with writing and they're very good to boot.

Originally Posted by Ranarath

Ah, okay, well...

'psycic' is 'psychic
'beneat' is 'beneath'
'beutiful' is 'beautiful'
'arriwed' is 'arrived'
'betweem' is 'between'
'attrackted' is 'attracted'
'brakes' is 'breaks'

If you want more help with spelling, grammer, and writing in general, I would recommending heading over to the Battle School. The teachers there would be happy to help you with writing and they're very good to boot.

Well, now I corrected it! I hope that you won´t find any more misses. And I´ll probaly take a few lessons, so that I can rule my class in english!!!!