Name: Umi Oni, aka Water Demon or Demon of the Water
Sword Name: Niku
Sword age: Currently 100 but has a life span of infinite now.
Sword Race: Vampire/ Vampiric sword.
Sword Sex: Female
Hair: Deep, dark straight black hair that hang down his back. His hair flows beautiful around his body when he fights. It comes down just pass the middle of his back.
Eyes: Blood Red
Sword Eyes: The sword’s eyes are a very dark shade of blue. They are found on the cross guard of the sword and can only be seen when they are open.
Weight: 270 lbs.
Height: 7’ 5”
Weapon: Niku: Niku is a massive claymore type sword that’s about six feet tall. Down the middle of the sword there is a hollow port that runs through out the inner part of the sword. This port is used to unlock Niku’s skills and summons. The hilt of the sword is one foot of the sword’s length. So the blade is five feet tall and that makes the whole six feet of the sword. The cloth wrapped around the hilt of the sword is sealed by so type of magical spell. Umi doesn’t know why, but he can feel the magic powers covering it. Niku’s pretty pink hair flows down off the hilt of the sword about half a foot. The bat winged cross guard is a family symbol of royally Oni Demon’s. The whole sword was forged out of pure black adamantine. He also has black leather gloves with steel lining in it.
Strength: He is physically strong and when he gets hit or his sword clash with someone else he’ll recoil very little if at all. It all depends on how strong the hit is. He can move his massive sword around pretty quickly; as if he was not swinging a heavy sword, but a small light one. His body heals small wounds only and it heals fast. He uses his sword to block a lot and do to the sheer weight of the sword not to many living and nonliving beings can lift it let alone swing it. The sword can see and talk so it can tell him if someone is coming from behind. The talking is done telepathy so his enemy does not know.
Weakness: He does not run fast and he doesn’t evade by moving out of the way. He is weak to spells that are cast since he can’t evade that fast. Even though he doesn’t have a long recoil time he can still be cut easily and he bleeds fast because of his sword need for blood. Because of the size of he sword and weight he can’t jump high and he has a problem fighting in places that doesn’t have a lot of room like forests and cities. He not good at using his fist but can fight with them. She hate him, so, sometimes lies about someone coming from behind. She is very talkative and we talk to him in the middle of battle an start arguments just to make him angry. He can only use his skill a limited amount of time because he well black out from lost of blood.
Skills/Magic: All of his skills requires the use of his blood to enter the port of the sword. The sword uses the blood to rejuvenate Niku’s vampiric powers. After Umi Oni cut his wrist or hand he put his cut over the port and tells her what skill to use. Umi Oni has not yet master his own skills or learn what he can do on his own. Niku has not remembered or master all her skills yet.
Darkness cover - Gives the sword add protection so it doesn’t brake went clashing against a stronger weapon. This uses a drop of Umi blood.
Blood summon level 1 - Summon a demon dog that has black fur but some people can‘t tell because its bleeding all over. The demon dog is weak and is easily destroyed. This is the only summon that listen to Umi. Umi named the dog Killer in hope that it will become stronger then his level. 2 summon. Uses a small amount of blood.
Blood summon level 2 - Summons a wolf with brown fur and has a scar across his eyes. This summon is special because it was Niku’s favorite summon when she was a vampire. The wolf’s name is Blood Bath or BB. Blood Bath is fast and his bite is strong enough to break bones and rip flesh apart with ease. The problem is that Blood Bath will only listen to Niku and is very loyal to her. He will never make a move with out her ordering him to. Blood Bath’s summon takes both a lot of blood so much that Umi some time starts to black out just by summoning him. Plus both Niku and Umi Oni has to want to summon him if one of them doesn’t have the will to summon him the summon will fail. Umi doesn’t like summoning him because BB does not listen to him.
Appearance: Umi Oni is tall and has a big muscle mass on both his arms and legs. You can’t see it a lot because he wears a black cloak around him and that has a symbol of a black bat on the back of his cloak. He also wears a light material pants that is mostly black except for the flame design on the bottom of his pants and a white short sleeve shirt. He also has black leather gloves that he uses as weapons. He uses rope to carry his sword on his back.
Personality: Umi Oni hates everything and he trusts no one. He will attack anyone that tries to talk to him without warning. Anyone that has tried to talk to him is presumed dead. The only thing that he trusts is his sword called Niku but he hates it so much you would never guess it. He has a sense of honor if a worrier puts up a good fight he will let them live. Umi Oni loves to fight and sometimes will pick a fight with someone just to satisfy his love for fighting. He hates city so he rarely walk into one.
Swords personality: Niku is talkative and complains a lot. She hates Umi Oni but is force to stay with him because he is the first one to awaken her from her slumber. She loves to get Umi into fights so she can satisfy her thirst for blood. She hates to be treated like a normal sword. She has no honor and thinks that all fights should end in death. She loves Umi Oni but will never tell him that in fear of becoming weak and soft hearted.
Biography: Umi Oni was born in the other world that people come to know as hell. Umi father was the devil and he’s nickname was Black Devil. Umi father was meaning to everyone even his son. When Umi was born he did not get slap on his bottom. No, he was thrown right on the floor to see if he would live. The every next day his father made Umi were weights all the time on his arms. Umi was not able to move on his own for about four years. He spent his time reading and hearing his father tell him how useless he was because he was unable to move. Umi learn to read from his mother so he learned to read at a young age. Plus it was the only thing that his father let him do.
Went Umi was sixteen years old he found a book that told about a legendary vampire that love killing and was the strongest person in hell. Then it went on say how the vampire was seal away in the basement of his house. Then the thing that made him happy in an evil way was the part that said, ”The vampire was so strong that the only thing the Black Devil could do was seal the vampire in his sword and let him sleep until the end of time.” This is perfect all I have to do is get into the basement and I’ll have the power to kill anyone.
That night Umi went down into the basement and found the sword but was caught by his father. “What are you doing in here son!?” His father yelled demanding an expansion for him been down here.
“Nothing father I’m just here to get the only thing that you can kill!” Umi yelled out and pulled the sword out of the ground were it had been sleeping for many years. When Umi pulled it out a gust of wind came out of nowhere and the swords eyes open up. The sword seen Umi father and she summon her best friend Blood Bath with the last bit of strength she had left.
“Blood bath kill him now don’t hold back go to level. 5,” The sword yelled out.
“Yes master as you wish,” The wolf disappears and came behind Umi father and put a hole through his body with out even trying. Then the wolf sat in front of Umi and said, “It is done master.”
“Wait how did you know that I wanted him died,” Umi said wandering what just happen.
“He is not talking to you! He talking to me, I order him to kill him!” The sword scream at Umi, “And one more thing don’t go thing that I’m a normal sword!”
“You mean I now have this kind of power that is my,” Umi stand there with an evil look.
“No that was the last of my power and some things I have forgot in. You can unlock my power by giving me some of you blood and by the way you have to give me a name I forgot my name. One more thing that was you father right?” she said.
“Because you can’t be hurt by me if someone try to use me. Since you are his son this sword is yours and was meant to protect you,”
“ Okay, well your name is Niku and because I don’t like this sword that was my father. I would leave you here but your going to make me stronger and my name is Umi.” They disappear for many years to train Umi to be able to lean to use Niku skills and to wield the big sword. They reappear after fourteen years to make their name know in history.
For the love of God, dude...use a spellchecker! o_o; You don't have to have Microsoft Word. Google comes with a spellchecker. Some of this is hardly translatable... Please use a spellchecker (and a grammar-checker if you can find one) in all your work from now on. It will naturally improve your writing ability over time, and allow others to read your work without the periodic pause required to decipher it.
Ok, that second time I heard that the first time was for Power Short on my training thread. I just found out how to active ms word spelling and grammar checker. Ok I ran it through the checker and fix it. But my grammar was worst then this before so I call it an improvement.
I'm having a stress-induced nervous breakdown at the moment, so I'll make this quick. I looked over this a bit ago, and anything involving a mystical creature with a sentient sword has potential. Use the darned potential, and make my approval not look like some last-minute, half-arsed decision. I'd appreciate it. Please.