My character

Name:Irako.

Age: 15 & two-thirds.
Weapons:Transforming sword(transforms it in to any sword he wants),Hylian shield, and a bow.
Power:Great unarmed fighting,Can shoot out a flaming copy of his hand.But it only goes 6 feet.

Weakness:Anything that grabs.(He cannot get free for a LOOOONG time.)

Race:Hylian.

Looks:White hair,Brown eyes,Blue T-shirt,White sweatpants.

Personality:Nice,But defensive.Don't get on his bad side.Will protect his family no matter what. If you make fun of his family,you will regret it in so many ways.

Story:After Walking back home from class ,He found millions of zombies that tried to kill him"I WILL KILL YOU,IRAKO.."Said a truly evil voice. "Who is that!"said Ikaro.He ran as fast as he could to sensei."So,Levi has come back, eh?"Said Sensei."Take this Legendary sword." "!! But sensei!"Said Irako."It took you 86 years to get-"NO! TAKE IT!" "But who is Levi?" 'It is to painful to listen to."Said sensei.

>> Good Lord... Now I know how Milady feels... Where to start?

Okay, I'll begin with the Strengths and Weaknesses. His only listed strength is rather vague,

As for the Appearance, I have no idea how Chrono looks, and I doubt I'm the only one. In fact, I don't even know what "Chrono" you speak of. For all I know, there could be dozens of them spread throughout the anime/manga universe. I naturally assume you're talking about the main character from Chrono Trigger, but I still don't know what he looks like. He was a sprite, anyway. Please provide a graphic description of what the character looks like. Remember, the Appearance is the third most important thing about a character.

The second most important thing about a character is the biography. Remember, there is nothing wrong with being long-winded with a bio. Be as descriptive as you can, and remember to avoid revenge stories at all costs. >< No offense, but the "I'll avenge my dead family" plot is the most overused cliche in the history of literature.

Now for the most important part: Personality. Knowing how a character looks is important in many cases, but knowing how they will react to something is imperative to role-playing...especially when power-playing is so common. ("Power-playing" is the controlling of others' characters.) Look deep into Irako's psyche, and think about what he's truly like. Nearly all people have a multi-faceted personality; they can't be described in two simple sentences.

Go all out, and remember to enjoy writing your character's profile. The more you enjoy it, the better it will be. 'Tis an unspoken law of the written word: the secret ingredient is love. ^^