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Old 03-13-2006, 10:50 PM
LinkWannabe United_States LinkWannabe is offline
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Makoto, Keyblade master

I haven't been on for a long time, so I guess it's time for me to be active again.

Name: Makoto(means 'sincere and honest' in Japanese.)
Age: 15
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Hair: Black, spiky hair.
Eyes: Brown.
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 110 lbs.

Weapon: Dreamsower- It is an indestructable keyblade, which is slighty longer than Sora and Mickey's keyblades. It has a black handle, and a sparkling white "blade". It increases Makoto's spellcasting affects, and it can move quickly in the air. It is weak physically, and can be deflected easily. Dspite it's down-sides, it can move quickly, and he can deal a series of strikes very quickly. It has a keychain at its handle, which has a star on its end, unlike Sora and Mickey, who have the Disney symbol. The Dreamsower can deflect magic attacks, and can easily deal with mulitple opponents.
Armor: Makoto has no armor.

Strengths: Makoto is quick, strong, and an jump high. He can cast many spells. He can glide, but slowly, and for short periods of time. Makoto's keyblade let's him cast spells efficiently, and wheneverhe is harmed, he gains more magic, allowing him to cast more spells. Makoto is a quick thinker, and is very athletic. He knows how to wield his keyblade very well, and can use it very quickly and efficiently.
Weakness: Makoto has no armor, so he is vulnerable to physical attacks. Makoto doesn't have infinite magic, so he cannot cast spell after spell in quick succession. The Dreamsower is not strong physically, and can be easily deflected. Makoto's gliding abiltiy is not really efficient, and can sometimes be useless, and place him in vulnerable situations. Makoto's powerful spells consume lots of magic, and sometimes are not as efficient as he'd hope them to be.
Magic/Abilities: Fira- Makoto releases a fireball from the tip of Dreamsower, and it goes in one direction till it hits something. This spell uses little magic.
Blizzara- Makoto swing the Dreamsower at his target, and ice crystals fly at his target. This spell uses little magic.
Thundara- Makoto thrusts Dreamsower towards the sky, and multiple lighting bolts appear above his target. This spell uses little magic.
Aerora- Makoto makes a barrier of wind appear around him, which acts as a sort of damage returner. Whenever Makoto is harmed, half of the pain is dealt back to its maker. The spell wears off after a minute. This spell uses little magic.
Cura- Makoto heals himself gratly, though he cannot due this many times in a fight. This spell uses little magic.
Sonic Blade- Energy flies into Dreamsower, and Makoto rushes forward, with Dreamsower pointing forward, as if he would thurst it into them. Makoto can do this mulitple times at once, for a combo. Everytime he performs this, or every consecutive time he performs this in a combo, a portion of his magic is consumed.
MP Haste- Every time Makoto gets hurt, his magic recharges, allowing him to cast more spells. This ability does not cost Makoto any magic.
Ars Arcanum- A formidable attack. After a combo, Makoto charges up the Dreamsower, and releases a double combo. This spell uses quite a bit of magic.
Ragnarok- After an aerial combo, Makoto releases a barrage of fire balls from Dreamsower at right time, which follow their target. This ability uses lots of magic.

Appearance: Makoto has spiky black hair, and brown eyes. He wears a black jeans, which go a bit over his shoes. He has large black shoes(common in KH characters), and wears a plain red t-shirt. Over the t-shirt he wears a black, leather jacket. He is quite attractive for a 15-year-old, and he well built. His keyblade has the same design as Sora's and Mickey's, except that the colors are different, and the key chain has a star at the end, unlike the Disney symbol Mickey and Sora have. Makoto has a necklace, similar to Sora, with a crown on its end.

Personality: Makoto is free-spirited and carefree. He cares for those around him, and likes to help out. Because of having such a tumultuos(sp?) past, he always wants to be accepted by people, so he relentlessly trains to be strong. He is patient, kind, and is a bit open to strangers. He is quiet, but when he becomes interested in something, he becomes outspoken, and talks alot. He feels he is alone in the world, and he wants to have a friend.

Bio: Makoto was born on a random island-like world, and was raised horribly by his parents. They had no care for him, and ignored him most of the time. Makoto tried to learn to fight, and he wanted to be accepted by the people of his island, and most of all, his parents.

One day, when Makoto was 14, a storm hit the island, and things began to be destroyed. He quickly tried to escape the island, but was sucked into the storm. he woke up the next day in Traverse Town, and wondered where he was. He was found by a mysterious man in a black cloak, and he was given a large, key-like sword. Makoto tried to ask the man some questions, but the man disappeared before Makoto could get any answers.

Just then, Makoto was attacked by black creatures, and barely escaped the place with his life. He was found by a man named Leon, and a woman named Yuffie. They brought him to a safe place, and took the large weapon away from him. They told him of his destiny of being a keyblade master, and Makoto tried to believe them. They promised to protect him, guide him, and train him to be strong. He quickly accepted their offer, and quickly became friends with the duo.

For a year, he trained under their wing, fighting what he learned was Heartless, and he was taught how to wield the Keyblade, which was the large key-like sword. He learned spells, magic, and how to fight the Heartless. He quickly developed great skills, and even learned to glide. One day, he overheard a conversation between Yuffie and leon about Makoto. he heard them talk about him being a keyblade master, and that they should go look for Sora, the keyblade master, and let him and Makoto meet.

In shock, Makoto left Traverse Town, stole Leon and Yuffie's Gummi Ship, and left the world. He went in search of Sora, and would also find his destiny along the way.
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Old 03-14-2006, 03:31 PM
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Re: Makoto, Keyblade master

I like the idea bit it just sounds like a sora copy. Come up with your own kind of spells.
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Old 03-14-2006, 03:36 PM
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Re: Makoto, Keyblade master

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I like the idea bit it just sounds like a sora copy. Come up with your own kind of spells.
I'll delete this post as soon as an actual approver posts but I had to point this out.

You aren't an approver, and thus are not allowed to post in character approval threads unless it's your own character that's being (dis)approved.

To Linkwannabe: Don't worry about what GoronMaster said. You don't have to edit anything unless an actual approver tells you to.
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Old 03-14-2006, 08:28 PM
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Re: Makoto, Keyblade master

I don't intend on making hima Sora copycat GoronMaster, or else i'd make him identical. I'll wait for an approver to tell me otherwise. And if it comes to that, i'll have many ideas for alterations up my sleeve. Thanks Mikey B, but I could've handled that one.

Anyway, i'll be waiting for an approver to come by, and actually look at this thread...
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