Thor Bronzehilt

Name: Thor Bronzehilt
Age: 36 Years
Race: Dwarf
Sex: Male
Class: Adventurer/Warrior
Hair: Red, tied up in a Ponytail in the back, and a large beard
Eyes: Blue/Green
Weight: 79 Kg
Height: 90 Cm

Weapon: Iron Battleaxe w leather handle
Armor: Wooden Shield w metal spike, Iron Armour

Strengths: Being a Dwarf has made Thor a stubborn one, he`ll never say no to a battle that`s neccessary. His voice is very dark, so it might intimidate enemies.

Weakness: Due to his Dwarf blood, Thor is very short so that might show a weakness in battle. Due to his stubborn nature, Thor don`t know when to give up.

Skills/Magic: N/A Thor can`t use magic

Personality: Thor is very stubborn and quiet, If he talks most people will be suprised over his dark voice.

Appearance: (that image is from D&D, i think)

History: Thor is born in the mighty mountains of Ebomorro. He grew up with his father, his mother died when he was very young. He had a sister Ingridh, She disappeared A while ago. Thor had some friends, Bjorn, Shayn and Ünri, all of them went out to seek adventures, since then, Thor never saw them again. Thor grew up very peacefull, no raid or such. He had another friend, Odern, the wolf, he disappeared together with his sister. Thor doesn`t worship anyone. Thor went out in the world to explore, even since he was little he liked to explore every cavern in the whole mountain. He dislikes killing when there is no need. Most people that meets Thor Thinks that he is a very nice fellow. Thor dislikes all goblin/horde/blackblood creature. Thor has one medallion he got from home with him, he thinks it`s priceless. Thor treats anyone he meets friendly at first, if they turn out to be enemies, he will show no mercy, that is to traitors too. Thor doesn`t admitt it, but, almost all knows that he went out in the big world to seek up Odern. Thor isn`t frightned by death, but, he doesn`t like being hurt.

He has no skills? Hm.

That bio is too vague and short. Expand that out. Make Thor an actual 3-D character, rather than a cardboard cut-out that you'd use as a minor character that only appears once or twice in some RP.