Janeen (Fixed)

Name:Janeen
Age:19
Race:Argonian
Sex:Female
Hair:Color:Some red and some white, with black streaks in it. Length:Goes down to about the middle of her back.
Eyes:Glacier
Weight:About 125 lbs
Height:about 5 ft 4

Weapon:Argonian blade carved by her father. (Attribute:When the wielder is weak the sword feals it's the pain and heals the wielder a little.)
Armor:Argonian breastplate carved by her father. (Attribute:Has a protective shield that can protect about 10% against magic.)

Strengths:Water doesn't effect her much. Can jump at a height of 12 ft due to her semi-dragon fusion from the scratch(found in bio) (Argonian Strengths) Higher attack power than humans.

Weakness:Is rather phased more than usual by lightning and thunder. Ice is strong against her as well. (Argonian Weaknesses) Darkness and Light phase them more than normal humans, seeing as they are a neutral unholy/holy tribe.

Skills/Magic(Skills:Argonian Bane:Can cause the opponent to feal a little dizzy.)(Magic:
Argonian Shockwave:Is strong against some forms of demons and dragons.)

Personality:Gets angry when it starts to storm, but is tender hearted and loving to her family, likes to play with her little six year old brother when she isn't busy fighting will protect family from anything that she feals will possibly harm them.
Does not see it in her nature to attack a defenseless creature, unless it attacks her first.
Acts like a normal adult but inside is not normal.

Appearance:
(Body)Looks pretty much the same as a human, but has Argonian powers that only those born of both Argonian parents can obtain, she has a scar on her arm from a Dragon scratch, looks more like a lady than a warrior, dragon wings on her back which enable her the high jumping ability. Has small paintings on her face because it is an Argonian warrior tradition.

(Suit)Has sleavles shirt with the breastplate over it, a sword and a shield on her back, pants are a little baggy with an armored kneepad on her knees, and a golden iron sheeth, armor plates on her hips, and armored shoes.

History:Janeen grew up in Argonia since she was a little child. Her house was attacked by a dragon when she was eight. The whole family got out alive but not unscarred. Janeen had been scratched by the dragon. Her arm was bleeding bad and they had to hurry to a priestess. That priestess after healing Janeen's arm told Janeen's parents that she had gained a substance called Dragon's Indanet, and she had been open to the curse that it causes that is called Dragon's Curse. But did not get phased at all by it.

But grew dragon wings from the scratch that she had obtained and also gained some dragon abilities but not enough to change her skills or magic but to jump higher than a normal Argonian.

So after that the priestess asked Janeen to go on a quest for her when she grew older to prove to the people of the village all hope was not lost.

So now here Janeen is nineteen years old ready to take on the quest she promised to take.
After countless encounters with bandits and pirates she had made it to a town to rest at on her way to The Dome.

There she met a nice no more than five year old girl who asked her why she had wings on her back. She answered kindly:"I got these when I was only a little older than you."
The girl answered "But how?" With a really questioning voice.
She answered "It is kind of a scary story."
The girl responded with a surprised voice "Oh okay!"
The girl's mother came out and asked who this woman was and told her daughter that she is not to talk to strangers.
The mother said "Oh forgive me if she intruded!"
Janeen answered "Oh not at all, I am just looking for a place to stay for the night that's all."
The mother answered "Oh! why don't you stay here i can see you will have some problems with the innkeepers as to the fact your part dragon."
She answered "No i couldn't burden you like that!"
The mother answered "No it is nothing."

So Janeen stayed with them that night and left in the morning refreshed and ready to head for The Dome.

She then arrived at The Dome and thus her story began.

Okay, first off, you don't have to create a new thread when you fix it, just reply again or, better yet, edit the one before. That way the borads don't get cluttered with useless threads.

Now to the official part... Other than a tiresome and boring bio, it's good. *Approved*