Kuunas Jr. AKA K.J.

Well it has been a long time since Ive posted in the BA, I guess I have to make up a new person seeming my characters have been lost.

Name: Kuunas Jr. AKA K.J.
Age: 19
Race: Half Potente (a type of elf), Half Al Bhed (a race in FFX that loves to tinker with machines and speaks a strange language)
Sex: Male
Hair: Spiky Brown with a pony tail
Eyes: One blue, one green…pupils are actually spirals
Weight: 95kgs
Height: 198cms

Weapon: Longsword
Armour: Leather Bracers

Strengths: Heightened senses, mental abilities (can read minds and memories), good physical strength and flexibility.
Weakness: Not able to control mental abilities well so could be overwhelmed by intense thoughts and memories. Can be ‘hot headed’ and will make mistakes in fighting technique if he gets angry. No real experience in actual fights against foes with weapons…most of training used to destroy monsters in his home of Spira.
Skills/Magic: By using the power of his father and ancestors he can manipulate power through his blade but is weak at the present and takes a long time to charge up.

Personality: Quiet and secludes himself from large crowds, values honour in battle but not as much as his father who was a hero. Wants to be like him but finds it difficult being not full Potente…because he is only half he doesn’t have as much powers as his father had. He is quite wise though for his age and uses strategy quite well.
Appearance: He is a tall youth, he is quite muscular but not so much like he is on steroids, rarely smiles…wears a royal blue singlet and dark blue baggy pants which is held up by his fathers belt…the buckle has the insignia of the Potente, a green and gold boot. He wears soft brown leather boots, brown soft leather fingerless gloves to protect his hands from swordplay. Sword is slung over his back for easy access; the supporting strap draws over his chest diagonally.
History:

His history is a complex one, when he was born he was without a father….he died a year or so before K.J. was born in a battle with made his family famous in the multi-verse, a complex system of planets; the only way of travel is through a treacherous passage called the Rift Portal. K.J.’s father used to travel between worlds, which was rare, and that is how he met K.J.’s mother. He grew up not knowing who his father was, as an inquisitive child he would ask but his mother, to protect him, had never explained why and how he died. Years went by and to his mothers astonishment he grew quite huge, his Potente blood usually would have meant he would stay in the body of a 12 year old…they got a long life span but it was rare that any Potente would grow after the age of 12.

K.J, when 15 years old, started his training with the sword with his mothers friend and cousin-in-law, Tidus…he got the basics but had difficulties with the more advanced skills. Even at this age he never knew his Potenteian ancestry…he grew even more curious when on his 17th birthday his ears became pointed overnight. It was after this that he found out about his father’s true identity…after his mothers explanations he grew even more curious, he wanted to know everything about his race. His mother gave him a pendant and told him to go out to see his grandfather who held something which he just discovered, a device which could transport someone to another world. He found his grandfather and after some coaxing got him to reveal the Rift Portal.

The pendant K.J. wore had a powerful essence inside, normally anything that entered the Rift Portal would shatter into a million pieces but the powers of the pendant made the wearer impervious to destruction in the portal. He stepped into the emerald green mist of the portal and felt a jerk as he was pulled forward, he was now travelling to another world…he wasn’t sure it was the Potente homeland, but it was a journey he had to face.

Now K.J. spends his time going through Rift Portals…trying to find the Potente homeland, only then would he understand his past, present and future.

Could you expand a bit on the powers from the sword? Other than that he seems okay.

Name: Kuunas Jr. AKA K.J.
Age: 19
Race: Half Potente (a type of elf), Half Al Bhed (a race in FFX that loves to tinker with machines and speaks a strange language)
Sex: Male
Hair: Spiky Brown with a pony tail
Eyes: One blue, one green…pupils are actually spirals
Weight: 75kgs
Height: 198cms

Weapon: Longsword
Armour: Leather Bracers

Strengths: Heightened senses, mental abilities (can read minds and memories), good physical strength and flexibility.
Weakness: Not able to control mental abilities well so could be overwhelmed by intense thoughts and memories. Can be ‘hot headed’ and will make mistakes in fighting technique if he gets angry. No real experience in actual fights against foes with weapons…most of training used to destroy monsters in his home of Spira.
Skills/Magic: By using the power of his father and ancestors he can manipulate power through his blade, it is an energy from deep within him. This energy surrounds the blade with a green appearance, it is connected to his life force so when he does this it saps his energy...it is because he is not a full Potente that this happens. Although it can be devistating at higher levels it is weak at the present and takes a long time to charge up.

Personality: Quiet and secludes himself from large crowds, values honour in battle but not as much as his father who was a hero. Wants to be like him but finds it difficult being not full Potente…because he is only half he doesn’t have as much powers as his father had. He is quite wise though for his age and uses strategy quite well.
Appearance: He is a tall youth, he is quite muscular but not so much like he is on steroids, rarely smiles…wears a royal blue singlet and dark blue baggy pants which is held up by his fathers belt…the buckle has the insignia of the Potente, a green and gold boot. He wears soft brown leather boots, brown soft leather fingerless gloves to protect his hands from swordplay. Sword is slung over his back for easy access; the supporting strap draws over his chest diagonally.
History:

His history is a complex one, when he was born he was without a father….he died a year or so before K.J. was born in a battle with made his family famous in the multi-verse, a complex system of planets; the only way of travel is through a treacherous passage called the Rift Portal. K.J.’s father used to travel between worlds, which was rare, and that is how he met K.J.’s mother. He grew up not knowing who his father was, as an inquisitive child he would ask but his mother, to protect him, had never explained why and how he died. Years went by and to his mothers astonishment he grew quite huge, his Potente blood usually would have meant he would stay in the body of a 12 year old…they got a long life span but it was rare that any Potente would grow after the age of 12.

K.J, when 15 years old, started his training with the sword with his mothers friend and cousin-in-law, Tidus…he got the basics but had difficulties with the more advanced skills. Even at this age he never knew his Potenteian ancestry…he grew even more curious when on his 17th birthday his ears became pointed overnight. It was after this that he found out about his father’s true identity…after his mothers explanations he grew even more curious, he wanted to know everything about his race. His mother gave him a pendant and told him to go out to see his grandfather who held something which he just discovered, a device which could transport someone to another world. He found his grandfather and after some coaxing got him to reveal the Rift Portal.

The pendant K.J. wore had a powerful essence inside, normally anything that entered the Rift Portal would shatter into a million pieces but the powers of the pendant made the wearer impervious to destruction in the portal. He stepped into the emerald green mist of the portal and felt a jerk as he was pulled forward, he was now travelling to another world…he wasn’t sure it was the Potente homeland, but it was a journey he had to face.

Now K.J. spends his time going through Rift Portals…trying to find the Potente homeland, only then would he understand his past, present and future.

Is this better?

Oh, one thing, he is way too heavy! I'm American, but I know you probably didn't mean to make him 95 KILOGRAMS, so fix that first.

Whoops...hehehe I guess he was a bit heavy, I edited my last post so I dont have to repost the whole thing.

*approved*